Date: May 21, 2013 03:43 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
DAAAMMMMNNNNNN that so evil maybe you can let bee find out about shawn and she could run to her dad with mickey and michael start to get worried about her even more and they end up talking bee is saying all of her emotions how her father and michael was right and umm I guess they grow alot closer then where they are now the rest you can take on
Author's Response:
Thank you for the suggestion :)
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 03:39 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Please keep going with YOUR story, and don't get discouraged. You have one of the best stories on here, imo and everyone isn't going to agree on the directions you take it or characters, but honestly, to me, that's what makes it exciting and a great story!
Life isn't a fairy tale, and there should be struggles. I'd be bored if there wasn't. I like the fact that you paint Bee as a grown, successful woman, who still has problems like the rest of us. hell, Mike too for that matter. He was a liar and cheater before, but I don't see why he has to continue to be, so I think you're doing great!
Can't wait to read more! ;)
Author's Response:
You and my other reviewers are seriously my Encouragement to keep on Writing. And i totally agree with you about life not being a fairytale... it is defiently not. Thank you so Much
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 03:21 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Well damn! Dude beat you so bad you got amnesia! I am....shit, I don't even know, lol.
It's obvious Michael still cares and is trying to help her. If he didn't, he wouldn't have even shown up and said fuck it. Yes, the man did wrong, but damnit give him some credit for trying to be there for you, despite the BS. He seems okay in his own relationship. Eugene is right too about Shawn, and his actions and the way he spoke to Bee while she is in the hospital, then slamming the door on her and leaving! ? She ain't catch a vowel or clue from his damn behavior? The man is deadly possessive, and sees her as one of his possessions.
Mike may not have been shit earlier, but the man has changed and stayed out of Bee's relationship, even though he didn't like it. Now, I know Kelly and LMP are going to bring the man more drama than a little bit!
I don't see Bianca carrying this pregnancy to term, when she got a fool of a man whooping on her.
All I know is that I'm praying her and Michael reconnect. People grow and change, nothing wrong with that. She hasn't moved on like she says because she is still holding on to what happened in her marriage to Mike. The feelings are there, but she's suppressing them.
Date: May 21, 2013 02:38 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Chile idk what the hell is happenin but this is some pure bullshit. First Bianca was being lied to and cheated on by a man who we all thought truly loved her, then we have this bastard child in the mix who we KNOW ain't Michael's baby. Somebody needs to get the damn truth on that! Now we finally have Bianca moving on, but she's in an abusive relationship? Why is she not allowed happiness? Michael hurt her and put her through hell. He embarrassed her, he ruined their marriage with his bullshit. I just don't understand why she's not allowed to be happy. Ever. It's just not fair. I can't stand Michael and I don't want her with him and I can't stand Shawn's ass now either because not only is he ugly as sin, he's an abusive asshole. Then to top it off, Bee is pregnant. I don't get why Bianca is being portrayed as this naive, soft ass female. She's grown as hell. Not saying that grown women aren't foolish, but with the denial and her behavior, I would expect this from a young YOUNG girl. She has to be at least 30 something at this point in the story. This is just pure insanity. Michael's sorry ass is allowed some sense of normalcy and happiness with Lisa's Elvis lookin ass and we all know she ain't shit. Bitch aint worth two dead flies, but Bianca who's genuinely a good woman continues to get fucked over. I fail to understand. The only one who has seemed to suffer over and over again is Bianca. That's all I'm continuing to see and it's pissin me off. I just can't with this story anymore. With the way this bullshit is goin, I guess Bee will be havin a miscarriage soon and/or Shawn is gon end up killing her. Smh I'm out.
Date: May 21, 2013 02:34 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Continue please
Date: May 21, 2013 01:57 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Oh my fucking gosh! He hit her that hard that she forgot the whole fucking thing! Oooh I hope she remembers before it's too late! Ugh.
Date: May 21, 2013 01:38 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Wat is wrong wit this chick, she got all the signs she juss dnt want to believe wats right n ha face! Update soon plz!
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 01:24 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 3
Ok now Bianca is acting dumb. All the signs are there but she refuses to see them because Shawn "loves" her. You want a suggestion, make Michael kick Shawn's ass lol
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2013 10:59 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 2
ooh girl, please tell me you're about to give us an update? Done with my finals, and ready to read, lol.
Date: May 10, 2013 03:05 pm Title: Prologue
you should inish g this sequel. its good especially he last chapter. i hope bianca and mike get back together.
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2013 03:08 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 2
I can't say I'm surprised about Shawn domestic violence! I've said repeatedly that something wasn't right about him. Ironic that MJ's relationship seems to be going pretty good. Bianca needs to leave! In the beginning chapter, MJ begs her not to marry him, but she still says she is. I see MJ and this fool getting into it, and MJ getting custody of Michaela if this continues! I don't condone raising a child in an abusive home, no mam'!
This shit right here sis, got me ready to get my cousin Pooky nem' and ride shotgun on that ass! Hell ta da nawl!
Date: May 05, 2013 02:47 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 2
Continue please
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2013 12:38 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 2
I knew it! Shawn is a monster and Bianca needs to get away STAT for her and her unborn child's safety. This is a mess! Why the hell did she agree to marry him?? Now everything's worse.
And Mike needs to stop lying to Lisa. He knows good and well he's still in love with Bianca so he might as well be straight up with her. I wonder what his reaction will be if he ever finds out that Shawn likes to throw hands.
Date: May 05, 2013 12:13 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 2
O hell no! Get em B!
Date: May 05, 2013 12:02 pm Title: Turning Points Pt. 2
Lawd... Smh!!!!!! So Bianca just can't live huh? She just can't ever be happy??!! Fuck! First she gets lied to and cheated on by Michael's punk ass, and now Shawn's ugly ass is abusive? I really can't. I just cannot. And Michael is such a fuckin simp. Lisa's ass is about to take him for a ride and he don't even know it. While she's so worried about his feelings for Bianca, she don't give a fuck about Michael. And knows damn well Priscilla dont want her messin with no black man. I just can't with any of this. NONE OF IT. Not a single drop.