[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 07:06 am Title: Feel That Heat
That was so amazing. You worded everthing so perfectly. It's as if this whole thing was real! And the way you portrayed Michael was simply flawless. You captured the shy side and the lover all in on fic! Write more like this please! :-)
Author's Response:
Oh, my dear fellow MjFic dweller, I'm humbled by your words and so thankful that you read and reviewed my story. I'll definitely try to pull more stuff like this out from up my sleeve lol :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 06:33 am Title: Feel That Heat
BRAVO! BRAVO! That was sooo beautiful i almost cried like my eyes are welling up right now..*breathe* He was so vulnerable and she was so mysterious it was just unbelievable! You did your thang on this...gone head *two snaps*
Author's Response:
The moment I read that you almost cried my bottom lip just started trembling on its own. To get such a reaction from a reader is more than any writer could ever ask for. I am so touched by your compliments and your support, and a bit awed because I'm curently salivating over YOUR story, and I'm extra excited to see you reviewing mine, and here's a finger snap for YOU, honey.
Date: Mar 23, 2013 04:45 am Title: Feel That Heat
omg that was phenomenal love ot so much
Author's Response:
Merci, mon amie! :****
Date: Mar 23, 2013 02:22 am Title: Feel That Heat
Just great!!! I really loved it very much.
For a first attempt, it was a success. Hope you'll do more sweetie :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, my dear! I'll definitely keep working on my sex-scene skills, teehee! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 02:20 am Title: Feel That Heat
GREAT JOB :DD
I loved how you used your sense of vocabulary to make the fanfic more sensual than it already was. hehehe
Author's Response:
aw, thank you so much! I was worried I might have been too wordy to get the point across, lol. So glad you liked it! :)