[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2018 08:16 pm Title: Feel That Heat
I wish I had words within my vocabulary o describe how amazing this story was! OMG! Everything was on point, descriptions, imagery just EVERYTHING! Please keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2017 10:03 pm Title: Feel That Heat
extremely, incredibly well written. you always deliver, thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2017 05:57 pm Title: Feel That Heat
😊 Yessssssss!!! This was truly amazing! I'm mad on so many levels though... Like,Why am I just now finding this story... I wish there was more ... and damn I wish that was me 😂😂
Great story!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2017 05:53 pm Title: Feel That Heat
😊 Yessssssss!!! This was truly amazing! I'm mad on so many levels though... Like,Why am I just now finding this story... I wish there was more ... and damn I wish that was me 😂😂
Great story!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2015 10:50 am Title: Feel That Heat
I didn't come in here to blow smoke up your ass and I don't even know if you'll see this or not. So when I say this, it is the rock solid truth. You're fucking brilliant. You are a painter with ink and and the letters that form the words you so expertly strung together here is pure black hole brilliance.
Black hole brilliance? You enter and you get so completely sucked in you're not sure if you've even emerged from the other side and if you have you've taken something out with you.
Amazing! <333
Date: Nov 30, 2013 10:08 pm Title: Feel That Heat
This is the best thing I've read in a mighty long time. You're a phenomenal writer. Please make more. Or help me develop my writing and stories. Cowrite with me. :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2013 06:53 am Title: Feel That Heat
Wow....red-hot! Brilliant writing, and the pictures fitted in perfectly. What a fantasy! I love it x
Date: Apr 26, 2013 12:44 am Title: Feel That Heat
Hey hun!
I love the visualization and illustration in the story! I do the same in my stories! Anyhoo, love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your words! I try to give the reader as much of a visual idea as I can, cuz trees always some specific thing that I see in my head haha! All love girl!:)
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2013 06:55 pm Title: Feel That Heat
OMFG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you friend! So glad you enjoyed it!:)
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2013 03:23 am Title: Feel That Heat
This story is AMAZING! What more can I say? Simply beautiful. You're an incredible writer. This is definitely one of my favorites. I'm so glad I took the time to read it.
Author's Response:
Awww thank you, love! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story, and I'll have more in the future for you to enjoy. :)
Date: Mar 23, 2013 09:05 pm Title: Feel That Heat
I love it!!! Everything about it. The love of a beautiful black woman. Just what Michael needs/needed. And I love when he performed Rock with You live!! The way that man moved them hips and rolled that body.. Chile you can't tell me Mike wasn't a beast in the bedroom.
Author's Response:
Girl, you make me giggle! And I think you may be right, besides we all know what they say about dancers....(winky winky) LOL!
Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate all the love! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 01:19 pm Title: Feel That Heat
ASDFGHJKLA OK FIRST OF ALL... ALL THE VISUALS, MAN.
ESPECIALLY THIS ONE;
Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck.
If I went to one of Michael's tours, I wouldnt even make it to the second performance.
The story itself, the way you use your words are just so beautiful, I LOVE how you go into depths with your writing... You do it in such a way, I can't even explain it.
After reading your stories, it gives you something to think about and it's magical how you can do this, girl!
This was sexy and beautiful XD I seriously hope you have more stories in store for us. ;3
Much LOVE Honey XD , <33
Author's Response:
heeheeheeheee...I knew y'all would like that one especially! That was a lucky find if ever there was one!
Hell, gurl, I was salivating while watching the two performances I based this story on! Sweaty Michael jackson, thrusting his hips, winding his body, ripping off his shirt....
I can't appreciate you more for your support of my work, Sabrina. The idea that my words are giving you such a positive effect after the fact makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm blushing profusely, you make me so bashful, I swear hunny! Thank you so much, and I promise you, I ain't done with y'all yet! ;) haha!
Much love to YOU lovely lady! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 12:28 pm Title: Feel That Heat
ROCK WITH YOU!
I love this song, she is just so sensual and magic and this video! Sure it isn't Thriller or Smooth Criminal but it's as fantastic as the other. Just Michael with his mic, and his shiny outfit dancing to the music is enough to feel the HEAT.
And this performance of Shaky your body (down to the ground).... 10 minutes of ecstasy I swear!!!! My favorite part is when the background singer says "Now you know that's just nasty," and Michael goes to "correct that man". The dancer Evaldo is my favorite haha. I remember during the victory tour when he did it with Randy <-- 
I adore the way they kept on teasing each other during the whole show. I would have not be able to keep my cool LMAO. I would have been like this the entire show
Daaamn, that was steamy, yeah
It's beautiful how they doesn't know each other but already feels connected with each other. How their bodies talked for them. It was simply beautiful.
Once again another wonderful short stories! I can't wait for the next one ;)
"How you came up with that live rendition of 'Rock With You'."
Author's Response:
THIS.
This is exaclty why I love you. I'm laughign so hard, you don't understand. YOu are truly the BOMB.
I tell ya, I saw the two performances, and I just KNEW. I swear, my eyes lost their virginity 12 times over, and suddenly the story came about. Isn't MJ just so...INSPIRING? Winky winky!
And I am so with you on the beyonce dancing tip, It would be like I was possessed
"HOw their bodies talked for them." YES YES YES! That is exactly the picture I wanted to paint! And you got it and you liked it and ugh, you are the bestest.
oh, yeah, girl, he is gonna be demonstrating just how he came up with the live rendition, ya know what i mean???
BTW, if I didn't say it before I'll say it again:
And thank you so so much.
Date: Mar 23, 2013 11:35 am Title: Feel That Heat
That was amazing!!!~ Your words were just perfection. I absolutely loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you girl! I love your username by the way! teehee! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2013 08:44 am Title: Feel That Heat
Oh. My. GOD!!! This story is beyond perfection! I honestly don't have the words.. You one talented writer my friend!!! Damn girl! Keep it up :D
Author's Response:
Aw, hanna! Thank you from the bottom of my heart! :)