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Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 12

Woah Riley is his daughter? Thats crazy. love this story.

Author's Response:

Hello you new reader! I hope you enjoy my story ;)  Yeeeeess, this is getting crazier and crazier!

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

pppppooo shit!!!!! rRiley is the daughter..... well I now feel utterly stupid!!!



Author's Response:

HAHAHA! Don't be! I try to to make it as discreet as possible! Now you know the truth ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 11

Smh Michael is an ass and has made it blatant what all he wants from her. She would be a dumb bitch to continue to deal with him!!! Point blank. And if he is messing with Riley, she needs to tell her ASAP and see what she has to say about it. This is an all around mess. Robyn better done with Michael's narrow ass I swear. 



Author's Response:

Thank for the review girl! Robyn is tired to be second best, let's see if she tell Riley about it. New chapter online ;)

Reviewer: thelostchild143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh schnap!! She told him!! I'm ticked off at Michael too, I don't give a dang HOW cute he is. GAH!! lol I would have flat out dropped his ace like I was dropping a deuce in the toilet! 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm dead!

Thank you for the review and the rate ;)

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

I don't know "hhnnnggggg" sounds myself LMAO I learnt it from tumblr :3



Author's Response:

I just saw picture attached to "hhnnnggggg" and okuuur, I got it haha

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ohhhh this is some scary shit she's got herself into... It's nothing small, it could potentially ruin her life. No-one wants to be second best, or feel like they're being used, right?

Though because of the interaction between the two, I don't think Michael would hurt her... Hmmm, it's too soon to say.

I think she should say yes... Well actually no... Uhh... YES! IDK XD If she says no she may regret it, and man Michael is sexy, and the love mak- I mean sex was good lol ;D

But omg this is so exciting, I can't wait to read more tomorrow asdfghjkla I wish I could read more right now 

You're an amazing writer girl! XD , <33



Author's Response:

I swear! Poor girl just wanted to pay her bills and know she has Michael stalking her LOL! And that's worst because if he spills the beans it will ruin her life. Let's hope Michae AND Kyle will keep their mouth shut.

Michael is sweet but you never know! He could be a psycho in disguise LOL!

Hahaha! She Michael is foine but she doesn't want to be second best or feeling used like you said :S

Don't worry it will still be here when you'll be back haha!

Thank you :$$

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE EVERYTHING, ESPECIALLY MICHAEL'S SEXY SELF... All I gotta say is....

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HNNNGGGGGGGGGG , <33



Author's Response:

That gif of Miranda is so accurate HAHAHA! I feel like I can use it everytime!

Hng? I'm trying to imagine how it sounds like lol. Thank for the review and they rate hun xx ;)

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

 "I bet his picture is next to the definition or rapist in the dictionary" LOL Omg I forgot how well you add humour to your story, I missed it XD

Ohhhh watch out Robyn, if you don't follow through with sex with Michael, it looks like Tyler would be more than happy to take your place! lmao, I'm loving this , <33



Author's Response:

HAHAHA! I had to ;) LMAO! Tyler is so thristy, I swear. But we can't blame him, Michael is FOINE!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lmao I LOVE how you included Tyler! XD I watched a video of him and Kingsley, you seen it? :P

I can't wait to read on omg , <33



Author's Response:

YEEEEEEEEEEEEES! OMG, I laughed so hard when Tyler told Kingsley he was irrelevant because he did not know who Honey Boo Boo was. I ship them so hard :) I was hesitating between Tyler and Kingsley actually. Maybe Kingsley will make an appareances !

And I can't wait to see your feedback :D

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 11

When is Robyn gonna ever realise that Michael doesn't want relationships? If so he would of went for it already. That's why is sticking his penis in anything with a hole it cause he dnt wanna settle down. He just wants sex and that's all Robyn will ever be is a piece of meat to him if she was that important to him he wouldn't be messing with Reily either so there goes her proof. & wtf how awkward that is her & Reily sharing the same & being Tyler's buddy i hope Tyler doesn't throw Robyn away all cause of Reily but i think once Tyler finds out he not gonna feel that way 4 Reily anymore. LOL he'll by bitch bye. But i think both Robyn & Reily smells something really fishy amungs eachother. Shit's about to hit the fan soon. LOOL

Juicy juicy wooo can't wait 4 this! XD update soon girly!

Author's Response:

Poor girl! Still believe she can change Michael! Oh no, Tyler won't! He is friendly with Riley but Robyn is HIS best friend, don't worry ;) Yes, Rielye is starting to having doubts, she may find it out soon!

Thank for the review and the rate love ;)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 11:50 am Title: Chapter 11

omg Michael is wirh Riley too they are in relationship or only sex like with Robyn i'm wondering wow i love this story



Author's Response:

You'll see on the next chapter ;) Thank you for the review

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2013 11:18 am Title: Chapter 11

Lmao, this is sad. Poor Robyn. I like Riley, but I don't have a good vibe about her anymore. She seems....fake. 

I don't know. But lemme say this. Every story you write, I luv em all. 

#TeamRobyn 

Shiniee xx



Author's Response:

Thank you :$

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2013 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh shit! I knew Riley was bad news!!! Bitch... I sincerely hope that Robyn is gonna give Michael a piece of her mind. Riley also needs a good portion of ass-whopping!



Author's Response:

Haha, true! But remember, Riley didn't know about Robyn and Riley. Michael never claimed Robyn, so can we be blame it on Riley ?

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh hell nawww wtf man!!! Michael is so wrong & he is messing with Raily too? I know Tyler deffo won't like her once Robyn tells him cause they was just getting alone. LOOOL I'm dying ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Michael is so bad & slick with his shit. I hope Robyn just take her computer & leave that MF sorry but Michael really pissing me off now. He maybe hot & all but right now he is being ugly with Robyn damn it she shouldn't of never got serious with. She should of done her job professionally & look what she gotten herself it to? Things are about to get really ugly & grimy to nah man but that shit right there with Mike & Raily that was grimy i wanna kick him right now. Lol

Please update more girly im need 4 another chapter like now or later!! Get it Now Laters? :P LOOL xD

Author's Response:

    LMAO! I swear Michael is a pig! Robyn's feelings got caught in the middle of all she needs to STOP before it gets worst.  Hhaha, I need to update my other stories but I'll be back soon ;)

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2013 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow Mike is hitting it & quitting just sexing witout no loving to. Strickly dickly is all that is xD

That's all he is ever giving so maybe they just friend with benifits but abviously Robyn don't want that. So Mike is giving her signals of that's all he wants out of her 4 now. She should just 4get him & get a new client so she won't be all in love wt him. Mike seems not ready 4 a relationship yet. That kiss they shared almost was hope but sadly it wasn't. Robyn just needs to think about Robyn's feelings at the end of the day.

I loved the update girly! ^_^

Author's Response:

I swear! But Robyn can't say she did not know it from the begginning he never sid he wanted to be in a relationship! You're right, she should forget him! Thank you for the review

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