Date: Mar 17, 2013 12:29 am Title: Chapter 6
Really good check out my my story
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter but why Michael's father so eager for him to bite Ashley for?? It should be up to Michael to decide that.
Continue
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2013 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Worrdd!
Date: Mar 14, 2013 05:08 am Title: Chapter 4
aaww that was cute
Author's Response: yeah Michael is so cute in this fantasy
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
It was good continue darling!
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2013 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
If you have a passion for writing then go by it and write as much as you want. This was a little better then the other chapter but still not that long. Lol I think if you feel the passion there then write away.
Welp good chapter and anyway and keep going if you want to.
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2013 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story a lot and it has potental only if you make your chapters a bit longer. They don't have to 300 they could be 700 t0 900 words that should be big enough for you. But please continue with more soon and longer chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm writing Chapter 3 right now. It looks like alot on paper but it's very small. I hope this one is longer than Chapter 1 and Chapter 2.
Date: Mar 12, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
gosh why so short please more
Date: Mar 12, 2013 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1
love it please continue
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2013 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this one! Just a suggestion could you at least make your chapters from 800 to 1000 words cause i can't this. Haha i need more!
GO GO GO!
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2013 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh i really like this one i just hope to read a tad longer next time. Lol pls continue.
Author's Response:
thanks! I will make it a little longer,and I will continue.