Reviewer: Yolaachaa Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2014 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hope you're still doing this story! x_x i like it!

Reviewer: kjfinn Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2013 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think green.com is a dating website and Gary put himself on there and Michael is gonna get curious one day and is gonna make an account on green.com and some stuff will happen from there.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2013 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1

wow i think that Gary knows something love it

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2013 05:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, I'm really liking the story!

Only suggestiong would be to create new lines for dialogue.

Like instead of: "What are you doing?" said Michael. "Just talking," said Paris.

It would be easier to read if you did:

"What are you doing?" said Michael.

"Just Talking," said Paris.

Otherwise I'm interested already, and I like paris's attitude about treating gays like normal people.

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2013 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooo.... Sounds like an interesting story please continue dear my name is Staciethehedghog by the way :) and it is very nice to meet you welcome to MJFiction :)

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2013 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1

This is really good hope to read more!

GO GO GO!