Date: Mar 03, 2013 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Please continue!
Author's Response: Sure will do soon. & thanks!
Date: Mar 03, 2013 11:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Why not take the free year offer? O_o he could of benifited from that and brought his cop friends along for some free coffee and donuts. Yum that really sounds good! What does he want from her? Oh yeah he must wants to do some crazy things with her? He's a bit on the crazy side to if ya ask me.
Ooh please post more soon i wanna know if she could really get away from him ah this gonna be good!
Author's Response: Yeah you wil sure see how crazy he could be during the next chapter. ;) xD ima about to post it now & ikr i still can't believe he turned that down either.
But stay tuned next chapter will be up in a few & thanks!
Date: Mar 03, 2013 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh hell naw how does he just pick her up like that as if she's some type of prostitute? What's Michael's problem? It's sexy though. lol
Author's Response: He is sexy & a smooth criminal to ;) Lool & thanks!
Date: Mar 03, 2013 01:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Like it so faaaar! please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks 4 giving this a chance! :)
Date: Mar 03, 2013 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Scary, but awesome.
I like it so far :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much! :)
Date: Mar 02, 2013 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I know she not thinking about running away from him? Didn't she just say she couldn't escape from a police station? and why would Michael allow her to do so? He will catch her anyway if he knows he is just challenging her. But this story is so hott you have to keep going sis ima call you later and tell you to update tomorrow or at least sometimes next week. Kk, luv ya!
Author's Response: It will be impossible for her to even try to attempt but you'll see & girl ima about to update now lol I'll just text u anyway letting know :P & thanks so much 4 your support! Luv ya too!
Date: Mar 02, 2013 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh i was hoping for more after this chapter you have to continue this soon!
Author's Response: I'm posting a new one now! & thanks! :)
Date: Mar 02, 2013 09:16 am Title: Chapter 2
Lmao at the way she tries to bribe with starbucks and donuts. I dont know whats wrong with michael because I would have taken that shit LOL. But anyways, Michael is so fucking sexy when hea aggresive like that *___*
Author's Response: Ikr she was giving him a free bonus offer for a year out her own courtsty. Lol i wouldn't of turned that either.ikr Michael is too hawt whenever he is aggrassive. & thanks!
Date: Mar 02, 2013 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Michael is crazy.....but damn it's sexy lol.
Author's Response: Heck yeah he is cray but that only makes him soo hawt!! LOL & thanks girly!
Date: Mar 02, 2013 05:41 am Title: Chapter 2
omg o love this story i hope he will be good for her
Author's Response: I hope so too but it's not a garuntee tho cause he's bit out there on the wild side. & thanks!
Date: Mar 02, 2013 05:19 am Title: Chapter 2
I couldnt stop laughing when she tried to bribe him with Starbucks haha, Michael was like "that shit don't cut it" but I certainly would give in. :P I LOVE DONUTS haha.
Hhmmm I love this psycho Michael, I want to see if he punishes her. :3
Please update when ya can. XD , <33
Author's Response: ikr me too i love donuts to. Can't blame Gabby for trying Lool Hahahahhaha me to i love crazy Michael to he gonna having thinking like wtf kind of cop is he. He's gonna blow her mind. :P & thanks girly! <3
Date: Mar 02, 2013 04:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Update soon plz!
Author's Response: I sure will & thanks! :)
Date: Mar 02, 2013 04:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoooaaa boy! 0_o
I can't wait to read the next chapter girlie! XD , <33
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks girly! Glad you enjoying! <3
Date: Mar 02, 2013 01:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh sh**t i want another chapter im already hooked to this one! I just love your stories so much.
Author's Response: A new chapter will be up soon :) & thanks so much for your awesome support! :)
Date: Mar 02, 2013 01:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved this chapter i was happy to see that Michael wasn't that crazy cause he seemed that way in the first chapter. I could be wrong though lol I can't tell by his weird actions right now. He is a really a bad ass cop LOL
Ooh if she tries to escape i bet he will give her a good punishment. Please update again! and please pretty please try to update Stuck soon whenever you get a chance just don't quit an keep the good work up. :)
Author's Response: Oh you'll see soon on how crazy he can get. ;) & yeah he does has some weird actions to but he is pretty smart to other wise he wouldn't be a hoocop.
& ima try to update stuck soon i'll see what i could do. Ima giving my stories a break right now especially stuck but ima see if I finish that out soon when I can along with the others. But i take my time with this one for now since i love it myself & it's a short story that will probably last up to 15-20 chapters depending on how things go tho. & thanks so much 4 your support! :)