[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 05:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Crazy crazy! I love it though. I love your other stories especially "The Verge" i would like to read more of that soon and I'm hoping you'll pair Michael and Emily back together again.
Ok back to this story it's crazy but in a fun away not to deep that it will cause to much pain. Lol love it Pyt! ;)
Author's Response: Ikr it is crazy but in a good way ;) aww yes i will bring the verge back soon & will see there could some definate hope 4 Michael & Emily so stay tuned.
& yes this story maybe crazy with brutal stuff in but it has a lot of comedy & humor as well i try to add that to my newest stories since all of them r packed with so much drama. Not that it's bat but we also need a good laugh to. So this story is a mix of cray cray along with some wittyness. :) & thanks so much 4 checking this out!
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 04:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Dis dude maybe crazy and all but i like his sense of humor to that's what keeps me loving his fine ass ooh and he's about to lay it down on her.
Go on get it! Lol
Author's Response: Ikr he is funny at the sametime i think that's Gabby may put with him to. He could be such a clown to ;) & yeah you'll see. & thanks!
Date: Mar 05, 2013 04:26 am Title: Chapter 4
omg he is realy crazy
Author's Response: yes he is crazy but with a big heart & a big... LOL & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
It's a shame that some people dont want to review. I completey agree with Queeny below; you literally deserve WAY more reviews than you get. You've developed as an author, and every story and chapter you post gets better and better. I mean, I love all your stories, no doubt, but maybe Queeny is right; you need to quit. Not to be rude or anything, but for the lack of appreciation.
You're a great, wonderful author, and I'll miss your writing on here, but keen to read if you post anywhere else, like on Wattpad!
Though, I think if you really, really love writing, I would be more than happy to comment on every chapter I can everytime you update.
Hope you're having a great day x
Author's Response: Yes i sure came along away im glad you noticed that & your support means a lot & your such a good friend to :) & I wil always support & appreciate your work aswell! I'm just debating on rather i wanna continue on here or not im just having mix feelings about it. But I guess only time will tell when I actully make that decsion. But thanks so much for the advice from you & Queeny it helps a lot & gives me more of a broader mind of what to do to. So yeah im here for now but not sure if will be for a long time. & thanks so much 4 understanding! & im having a productive day thanks & i hope your day is great too girl! Much Love xo
Date: Mar 04, 2013 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooooooooooooooooooooooh
Author's Response: Yep yep! LOL & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2013 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was crazy and good. Michael is such a smart ass i hope Gabby out smarts him to. I know the next chapter is gonna be so good.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Will see how this goes cause you never know. ;) & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2013 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Just letting you know dear i was reading this and omg!!!!!
The way you just discribed Michael being that way i almost lost my mind.
Faints* that is so hot * fans myself*
Next chapter please!
Author's Response: LOOL wow yall sure have wild imaginations xD i imagined the same to & he does look hot like that u ain't lyin girl! & thanks a lot!
Date: Mar 04, 2013 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Omfg!!!!! OH GOD I JUST IMAGINE MICHAEL NAKED WITH A COPS CAPPP OHEMGEEE Man i would have fucking raped him. * excuse my fangirling *
Author's Response: LOOOL you got me cracking up! XD ikr that is pure sex on legs! Stay tuned 4 more & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2013 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow Michael's gonna really tare her ass up like he said. He wasn't playing then lol keep going!
Author's Response: Yep just stay tuned ;) & thanks! Lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2013 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just made an account so i could tell you something. I'm a silent reader by the way this is a good story no doubt. but i saw all your notes of you wanting to quit. Why stick around if you know you really don't wanna. I see you have more read counts then actual reviews which is a shame. I'd say just stop writing here cause a lot of people seems to never wanna review your stories or give it a chance. Just quit... no offense you take your great writings and plots some where else.
That's all i gotta say Lots of Love.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your honest review i understand what you mean. I keep going cause sometimes i just have fun writing whenever I'm bored I just try not 2 think about that stuff you mentioned. I'm just taking a break with all my stories accept for this one tho cause im kind of having fun with this. But anyway thanks for your support & sharing your thoughts here with me im not offened at what you said cause it is true i do wanna stop writing on here but I can't sense I love michael & enjoy writing sometimes. It's an on & off situation for me sometimes i wanna flat out give up and sometimes I don't so yeah I'm sort of battling with myself LOL & thanks again hope we could talk soon! Much Love.
Date: Mar 04, 2013 07:56 am Title: Chapter 3
omg he can't hurt his future wife ;P
Author's Response: Let's hope not. ;P Lolz & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2013 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh no why did you stop right there? It was getting so good. Please more!
Author's Response: Don't worry a new chapter will either be up later or tomorrow. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2013 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damnnn! Michael is truly crazy he is one of those wild cops. I'm wondering what he's gonna do to Gaby now? I just hope it's painles... continue!
Author's Response: Let's see if it will be painless & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2013 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
No she's in trouble :/ i hope he doesn't attack her. Update!
Author's Response: You'll see & I'm glad your enjoying this!
Date: Mar 03, 2013 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg I hope michael doesn't hurt her.
Author's Response: I hope so to will see. & thanks!