[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Gabby is getting to close to him already. He seems to have that effect on women i see. Damn so he just gonna use her? I bet he likes her more then just the sex cause he wouldn't go out making her breakfast and having a good convo with her.
I think he's just confused of what he wants from her.
Thumbs to Gabby for accepting for who he is at first hand. If he learns how she accepted him this will probably give him better hope on love.
This is differen't cause she is accepting him for being a crazy dude and she looking at him for his inside. I love this plot a lot!!!
Continue!
Author's Response: I'm sure he does like her he just has to get 2 knw her more. The problem is he went about it the wrong way of picking her up like that as if she commited a crime. That's not how a man should gain a girl. Lol so I knw what u mean. & yes she did accept him 4 the way he is she won't try to change but more so likely have an effect on him instead she may grew on which he will get influenced by her as well. You'll see & stay tuned & thanks 4 the wonderful review rate!
Date: Mar 07, 2013 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
More
Author's Response: More is coming soon & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2013 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooohhh that was so sexy i want a cop like that to take me to i'd accept any minute. Lol
Love this story so far!
Author's Response: LOOL well im glad that your enjoying this & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2013 09:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Whhooaaa Michael was proper freaky when he started out rough on her. Dayum, then it turned into love making almost... then its like Michael basically used her body. :(
I feel sorry for Gabby, though it sounds like Michael isnt finished with her yet. :P
Awesome chapter darling. XD I honestly cant wait for more, :)) , <33
Author's Response: Yeah he has his ways of doing his own type of torturing he is beyond freaky & does all types of nasty things LOL & ikr he basically made love to her I think because deep down inside he may have some potental feelings 4 her. He was rough without being to rough on her he was so sexy about it to. He's a smart guy but he is just so crazy XD & yeah he may have something else in store for her too ;) & thanks girly! More is coming soon! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2013 01:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Wait a minute he put her through all that crap just to use her? Oh hell naw Gabby better step up and not let him walk all over her.
That's some BS for real.
Loved it!
Author's Response: Hopefully no D: let's hope he will have a change of heart besides using her for her body.
That's if she is aware of stepping he game cause she is looking for love & Michael kind of got her sprung now :/
XD & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2013 01:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Gabby :(
Please update soon girl, this was a good chapter!
Author's Response: ikr :/ sheesh he needs to cut her some slack hopefully he'll have a change of heart for her. &thanks more soon girly!
Date: Mar 05, 2013 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
i hope he won't use her and before something bad happen he will fall for her
Author's Response: Agreed! I knw me to let's hope he will atleast try to be good friends to her besides using her.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was so hot and sexy! Michael is crazy but in a good way i see. I mean he is dangerious crazy but i also could see a big heart some where on him. Lol hope Gabby doesn't get her feelings hurt though.
Author's Response: LOOL yes sexy that is alone with the craziness i agree he does have a heart to but a person has to get to know him really well for that to dig inside of him more. Hopefully she'l take it well from him.
But who knws Gabby may be the one! & thanks for enjoying!
Date: Mar 05, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have no idea y...but I LOVE this! Plz plz update very very soon!
Author's Response: I sure will continue this soon & im so glad your enjoying this. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was a great chapter i just don't understand why people are scrolling pass it for. O_o
This is really good and i encourage you to keep going!
Author's Response: Aww thanks & it's sall good i appreciate the my readers & loyal reviewers there awesome to me! ^_^
& yes i will keep going more is coming soon & thanks Rate!
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
He got what he wanted now im hoping he really don't play her out. Now she really starting to feel his crazy ass. That was off the chain though hands down!
More!
Author's Response: I knw the good girls sure loves them some bad boys it's always like tht but maybe she could be the one 2 change his heart in due time. ;)
Date: Mar 05, 2013 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
HOLY. FUCKING. SHITTTTTTTT !! Oh my goooddd. I wonder if michael wants to be in a relationship with her. It would be sooo cool. And damn that scene was fucking hot! She was enjoying it. I dont blame her I mean, me and him would still be fucking LOOOL
Author's Response: Maybe & maybe not depends on his past relationship you'll see once he tells her why if ends up turning her down but maybe he will have a change of heart to u never know ;) & ikr that scene was wicked!! LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 11:47 am Title: Chapter 1
BTW I LOVE that Bad era picture on the story summary, it's one of my faves. He's so hot. :')
, <33
Author's Response: Ikr it's favorite too that's why i chosed that one & he resembles of being a cop right there to. That pic of him is hot gir I so agree! & thanks so much 4 reviewing more coming soon! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 09:57 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh laaaawwd how could you stop there?! He's gonna murder her judging by the size of mike jr lmao
Please update soon! XD , <33
Author's Response: Hahahahahahahahaha you had me dying at what u just said. Yes that indeed! & thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 09:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh dayum, Michael is BRUTAL D:
Im legit scared for Gabby, Im so happy the next chapter is already up omg XD , <33
Author's Response: Lool ikr he is brutal xD & thanks 4 your review girly! <3