[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
YAAAAAY, that's my girl Nazanin!!!!
Is she stupid or what? LMAO, she feels someone is watching her and she puts on her earphone? She wants to get hurt lol. 
OH ok, Michael is a psycho
Author's Response: Ikr dumb moveeee something like ppl would do in movies LOOL yep his has a few screws loose but ya gotta love him at the sametime. :P xD
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 07:15 am Title: Chapter 8
DAAAMN Michael showed that he ain't playin, all I gotta say about this chapter is...
Seriously I was like this by the end of the chapter;
Lmao how you write the scene of her punishment was just... ASDFGHJKLA
Gabby sure has herself in a horrible situation.
I just can't wait to see where this'll lead. XD
Awesome chapter. Much LOVE , <3
Author's Response: LMAOO you got me laughing at these gift & your review! I know it was such torture he her through along with trashing her apartment. Poor gabby looks like she won't be bending the rules 4 awhile now. & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 04:31 am Title: Chapter 7
Whoa she really is hung up over her ex, even though he did her so wrong.
Shit, shes been avoiding Michael, hes gonna be hella mad when he gets her! Im scared for Gabby lmao
But omg his latest pimp mission, I wonder if Gabby would wanna be his hoe... well she has no choice, hes gonna force her if she says no, dayum its all kicking off lool
On to the net chapter XD , <33
Author's Response: Yeah that ex effect lol but Michael may change that 4 her soon! You'll see. LOL she has no choice but 2 take it cause he'll drive her nuts & he got the law on his side with excuse. XD & thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa your banner is so cool!! :D
I finally have time to catch up. XD
Author's Response: Thanks to Natasha! LOL i told her 2 add the badges to give a nice kick. :D
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2013 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
This was so crazy and i loved it! Continue you dear!
Author's Response: I sure will & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2013 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just finished your banner, but I can't post it now. I hope you like it. Is there anything else you would wanyt on it?
Author's Response: You can email me the banner if u want to. I was thinking u could put a police badge there or something with sirens on it to give it that spice.
Date: Mar 14, 2013 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
Mooore!
Author's Response: Thanks & more is coming soon! :)
Date: Mar 14, 2013 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so much! <3
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying! :) & thanks! <3
Date: Mar 14, 2013 05:04 am Title: Chapter 8
he just so scared to lose her he has to tell her why befor it will be to late i think that she will get hurt in this mission
Author's Response: Exactully he is scared 2 lose & he is falling 4 her but 2 chicken 2 tell her right now. Lol but will see how this goes soon & about that mission it may turn out crazy & maybe make Michael appreciate Gabby more if something happens 2 her & he got 2 save her & maybe that's when he'll realise his true feelings 4 her. ;) he already does now but he just is scared of commitment since his ex & he should really tell that's the reason & she should tell him about sean 2 that will be better so they can come 2 a better understanding & relate 2 eachother like they did before. But you'll see & thanks Karoll84!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
AH he got her back like that?
It's sexy in a way with his aggressiveness.
WOAH he def laid the rules down on her like that. He got that ownership on her now O_o.
Officer Jackson don't play. He is crazzyyyy but i like it though. I most of the time gets mad at aggressive Mike but i like this one.
And please bring back Stuck soon i miss it!
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Lool yup he sure did & it is sexy in way on how agressive he is.
Yep he told like it is & he wasn't playing around & she may get surprised more soon ;) you'll see.
& i'll try 2 update Stuck when i can right now im giving a break but i promise i'll try 2 bring it back soon.
&thanks so much 4 your support!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww she misses her ex i agree with Lainda she should move on with sexy cop man. Lol I don't care how crazy he is he still seems pretty decent at the same time. I know you might think that sounds messed up but it's true when you think about.
So in what way is he gonna make? ;P ahaha
Author's Response: I agree 2 she should move on to Michael instead. & I knw exacually what you mean. & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait for more please continue.
Author's Response: Most deffo i will & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
She should forget about Sean even though he's cute to. I noticed that Tom Kaulitz from Tokio Hotel? Your a fan of them to?
That's cool well maybe she should just listen to Michael cause he a crazy cop and i don't see nothing stopping him no time soon. And he gave her rough hot sex LMAO he has some serious problems no joke!
continue.
Author's Response: It will take her a minute 2 4get about sean but as long as Michael is in the picture she may have no choice & she is falling 4 him anyway so you'll deffo see how this goes & yep that's Tom from Tokio Hotel glad a found another person whose interested in that group. ^_^ xD
& Yea he gave her some nice rough sex Lool ikw what u mean is insane but ya gotta love him. Lol
& thanks!
Date: Mar 13, 2013 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love crazy mike <3
Great story girl keep em coming!
Author's Response: Sure will & thanks!
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Damn is chapter was the shit. He for sure showed his true color to Gabby. I figured he was more then just crazy when he said he didn't wan't he around any other guys. So he considers hiself owning her without a relationship then? Wow he is something else! Lol To bad this story just doesn't get the feedback it deserves such a shame and waste in my opinion I know i keep saying the samething but it's messed up to me. -__- wasting such good exciting story. I would of quit already so i give it you for continuing. Lol
carry on soon if you still decided to.
Author's Response: Yea he just figures he owns her all the way around even if there not in a relationship yet he still gonna claim her as his. But who knws maybe they will be a couple soon at the rate on how he's acting. ;) xD But you'll see & yeah im really trying not 2 let this stuff on the site get to me cause i really do enjoy writing certain stories on here. I mean I'm always discouraged half the time but I keep going cause i have fun with this & it helps kill off my bordem i mainly just use this as a hobby if anything. If I write a real serious non mj fic I'm gonna be really grea with it & serious about it. This site is suppose be strickly 4 fun anyway but sometimes it's hard when u try 2 have fun on here & no one wnats to join the fun with you or comment 2 let u knw how they feel about it. I've going through that 4 so long on here that I should be use 2 that 4 now lol but it's whatever I'll still continue but idk for how long tho i just go by feelings & thanks so much Queeny for you support & concern & morning soon. <3