




Date: Mar 26, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I already love this. I really really love this. It's too sad there hasn't been an update since 2013 :((





Date: Dec 17, 2016 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am literally BEGGING YOU to pick this story up again! You're an absolutely fantastic writer and I have read and re-read everything of yours that I've been able to find multiple times. You have written the best MJ fan fiction that I've ever come across. EVER! Please consider coming back soon. I, as well as many others, would be over the moon!!! xoxo
Date: Jan 25, 2016 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Write moreee




Date: Dec 28, 2015 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Pleasee make more chapters this is getting good! Thanks
Date: Jun 05, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like reading.
Date: Jun 05, 2015 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I enjoy reading and re reading your stories.
Date: Jun 05, 2015 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why violence?
Date: Jan 16, 2014 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aaaaaaah I WANT MORE





Date: Mar 29, 2013 09:47 am Title: Chapter 5
You're a phenomenal writer





Date: Mar 29, 2013 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story now and i just started
Date: Mar 28, 2013 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Gurl u ain't da only 1 dat b calling Mikey beautiful .. lol um constantly doin it.





Date: Mar 28, 2013 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Ugh, my GOD. I lov ehow alluring Michael is in this story! This story makes me want Michael to grope me..... omg....
Amazing. Absolutely stunning story. Please, CONTINUE!!!!!!!!
Date: Mar 28, 2013 07:37 am Title: Chapter 5
oh my i wonder what will happen in the Plaza ;P





Date: Mar 27, 2013 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Firstly let me just say that this chapter, as well as the others, was absolutely fantastic. Their chemistry is amazing and Michael is so sexy. Secondly, I'd like to give you my condolences on your loss. I'm so sorry that you had to go through that and I wish you well. Lots of love from me, and well done sweetie. :) <3





Date: Mar 27, 2013 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
iI loved it!!!!!!! I'm glad that John didn't see her!!! that would have been tragic!!! please continue!