[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 05:16 pm Title: Confusion
MY MIND IS RACING AT A 1,000 MILES PER Seconds.
And when he said Jessie you shouldve seen my face! Im guessing Jessie has to be an old girlfriend. Damn this was a good chapter. And all this is so confusing and suspenseful I LOVE IT keep up the good work ! <3 Cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Awe thanks sweetie :)
Date: Mar 16, 2013 05:10 pm Title: Confusion
I don't understand how Lola could not know of this Jessie chick I mean her and Michael been close since she was five? If Jessie comes into the story I wanna see what she looks like Lol
Author's Response:
LOL! I always have to have pics of them
Date: Mar 16, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Confusion
MAMA YOU BETTER SPILL! Lol update soon PLZ! :)
Author's Response:
I got you
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 04:07 pm Title: Confusion
O_o Jessie??? Who the hell is that? Lmao
Author's Response:
She's somebody that has a pulse...lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 04:00 pm Title: Confusion
Clearly, Michael is crazy as hell and needs help.
This isn't about Lola. He's not really in love with Lola. He doesn't understand what love is. This is about Jessie. Whoever Jessie is. most likely a girl who broke his heart either as a result of his behavior OR leading to his behavior. Mentally, he's still in that past, no matter what he says, and his family knows about it. What bothers me is that they KNEW and didn't tell Lola anything about it. If there could ahve been ANY chance that the situation would repeat itself, they should have swallowed whatever pride kept them from mentioning it and SAID SOMETHING.
So much fuckery in here. SO MUCH FUCKERY.
Author's Response:
Damn! The fuckery must have been too much for you to handle but trust there will be more fuckery
Date: Mar 16, 2013 03:52 pm Title: Confusion
I think jessie is mike's ex :o
Author's Response:
Maybe she was maybe she wasn't
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 03:50 pm Title: Confusion
soo many questions ... who is this "jessie" ... did she have somthing in the past with michael? ... how does mama kay know?
IS SHE EVEN REAL? AHH SOO MUCH SUSPENCE IM LOVIN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
YAY! I have one satisfied customer
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2013 08:20 am Title: Prologue
*New reader* I love this story! Michael is being such a di**. Just because Lola had sex with him doesn't mean he owns her. I had a feeling he was behind that whole kidnapping set up, but jeez I didn't expect Hailey to jump in it. Hmma maybe Michael is joining this scheme so he can get a chance to have sex with Hailey and abuse her just like he did Lola. Somebody needs to beat Michael, Rudy, and Hailey's a**.
As for Jeffery, he might actually be a good guy. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Hello new reader!! I would've never thought Michael did all of that so he could have sex with Hailey too..maybe i should..nahh i don't wanna spoil the suprise and next chapter is coming soon
Date: Mar 15, 2013 05:42 pm Title: Prologue
Arghhhh The wait is killing me softly :/ lol
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm working on it now so you shouldn't have to wait any longer
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2013 04:13 am Title: Prologue
Well she wanted that d and she gotta a whole other ish going on I know mike is the man but she just had to do it!
Author's Response:
LOL! I thought of Lil Wayne when you said She Had to Do It!
Date: Mar 14, 2013 09:37 pm Title: Trust No One
OMG please update this story I'm In love with it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you and i will later on today
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2013 06:56 pm Title: Trust No One
-_- I can't read this.....it's bad for my own good. WHY DIDN SHE JUST LEAVE WITH JEFF LIKE DAMN CHICK!
Author's Response:
LOL! It's Michael we're talking about in order to keep Jeff safe she didn't want to cretae suspicion plus he has control over her so she doesn't think sometimes
Date: Mar 14, 2013 05:16 pm Title: Trust No One
OMJ
Author's Response:
Smh
Date: Mar 14, 2013 12:49 pm Title: Trust No One
omg i cannot belive that michael slapped lola! this is why i love this story ... so much suspence it kills me!
P.S. keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetheart!
Date: Mar 14, 2013 07:53 am Title: Trust No One
omh why i thought he change
Author's Response:
Michael is unpredictable