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Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2013 08:15 am Title: Show Me.

gosh this was so hot and beautiful i hope there will be more moments like that and even hotter ;P but i love this story the attachment between them two i hope Michael will love her and won't be scared to show her how he feel about her



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! :3

Oh yes, there are gonna be way more moments like that in the near future. xoxo I tried to portray the instant attraction between the twwo and how it grows more and more as they spend time together and even though it's been such a short amount of time, their attraction is fascination as well as a hidden lust which is starting to break through the cracks.

Thanks for reviewing!!~

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2013 02:41 am Title: Show Me.

Oh dear laawwd!!! This was friggin intense!! *fans self* can't wait to see where this leads, so please update soooon! ;))



Author's Response:

LOL! I tried to make it as intense as I can...for right now. It's gonna be even more intense as it goes on! ;D I will updata as soon as I can.

Thanks for reviewing! XOXO

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Date: Apr 09, 2013 05:05 pm Title: Protect Her

More!!!

GO GO GO!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2013 02:47 pm Title: Protect Her

y7

Michael's gon' protect the Princess!

I'm adoring this story girl. You're the best omg.

I can't wait fo' more. XD

, <33

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2013 04:36 am Title: Protect Her

omg i love this chapter i hope Michael will protect her very well

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2013 11:26 pm Title: Protect Her

Yay i love the update!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2013 04:13 pm Title: Night Talk And Dreams

she is not srange girl i think she is starting to love him

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2013 11:05 am Title: Night Talk And Dreams

LOL Akasha's is so daring, adorable and playful, I LOVE it.

I already ship the idea of Captain and her being together. XD

Love, love, loooove this! I've said it before but reading each new chapter urges me to repeat myself; YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER.

I can't wait for more, Sweetie.

, <33

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 07:39 pm Title: Night Talk And Dreams

So good, please continue!

She's getting fiirty with Michael now, haha x

Reviewer: Hanna_MJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 07:27 pm Title: Night Talk And Dreams

*sigh* I love reading this story! So well written, and the plot is just.... *sigh* lol

can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: Rate Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 04:25 pm Title: Night Talk And Dreams

Lovely chapter darling!

Keep going! GO GO GO!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2013 03:01 pm Title: Night Talk And Dreams

I can't wait 2 c them grow a bond with eachother. There already getting along good so far. I see the princess is getting really comfortable with EO. Lol continue! :)

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2013 04:04 am Title: Beholder of Beauty.

Awwweeee the way you define both the characters beauty... :')

I LOVE your writing, you're like a professional ahah. XD

The way they met was cute,and I adore how she made Michael feel like a person, not just a Captain. 

Ah I can't get enough of this.

I think this is relevant... CAPTAIN EO SMILE=)

mj

Yaeyee.

I can't wait for more! , <33

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2013 03:41 am Title: Realization and A Found Haven

Whoo thanks for the shoutout, Darling! :')

Lmao Michael just realises now, that PYT he saw wasnt just any girl... It was the Pretty Young Princess :P

Ahh she's drifted off to sleep in the Captain's ship... AHHH I can't wait to read the next chapter :3 He's gon' have a shock ahah

, <33

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2013 11:14 am Title: Beholder of Beauty.

omg that was so sweet when he foumd her gosh more parts pleaseeeeeee :*********

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