Reviewer: Lonelyheart22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2021 12:09 am Title: Chapter 79 - Here Come the Bride and the Groom and the Groom and the Groom

Im so happy that the wedding went smoothly and the parents were able to get over their prejudices.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Here Come the Bride and the Groom and the Groom and the Groom

i hope they go to the bahamas finally i have caught up on this great story please keep it coming out i love your work

Reviewer: C_Lester Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2019 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the characters

Just started reading this! Loving it so far :)

Reviewer: Palmenco Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2019 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Aftermath

Love your story!

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 78 - Before the Wedding

This is my last night off after 2 weeks' vacation, and I've spent the entire night reading this from the very beginning. I'd started reading it a long time ago when you first started posting it, but somehow it got lost along the way in between life and other things.

 

Through the night I've laughed, I've cried, I've yelled at the laptop, I've dropped my coffee a few times, I've pushed the cats off the table when they've tried to sit in between me and the screen, and I've cursed and sworn until the air is blue. Can't remember the last time I've sat and read so many chapters in one sitting, and been so immersed it's like I've been right there with them. Marco is such a hoot - his character jumps right out and sashays across the floor. Chris is a tormented soul, driven to despair by his dominating father and the pressures placed on his life. Melly is a strong fighter, caught between her love for Michael and her loyalty to her husband. And Michael..? Michael is the way we all imagine him to be - funny, loving, tender, gentle, comical, bossy in his own way, clever, articulate, an amazing father, and an amazing lover. I'm so looking forward to the wedding...please update soon! xx

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 77 - Mama Don't Preach

The ackward moment when Melanie complimented Michael's amazing butts and he seemed to be lost of words for a moment was hilarious. And I have to agree that Michael has the best butts! When he wore those gold pants in History tour, gosh, I also never thought about liking guys’ butts but Michael made me change my mind. He is too sexy for words!

I really like how Michael was straightforward to speak his mind to Patricia and I bet Patricia and Archibald would not dare to ruin the wedding day.

Thank you for the new chapter.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 76 - Wedding Dress Shopping

lol cute ending

Reviewer: TheAbigailW Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2017 02:33 am Title: Chapter 75 Wedding Plans

This is a great chapter