[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2013 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sinking Deeper in Trouble
omg I hope not!!! Please Update ASAP!! Please
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2013 09:43 am Title: Chapter 41 - Sinking Deeper in Trouble
I certainly hope it wont get worse... Gosh, I was sweating all through this, I'm all damp now XD
I think that was the most emotional intense chapter yet, it was fantastically done! :) Cant wait for more!
Date: Jul 31, 2013 06:30 am Title: Chapter 41 - Sinking Deeper in Trouble
lol, while the situation is rather serious, the chapter is quite funny at points. can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 40 - The End of Their World
Oh no... Please dont keep us in suspence!! We need to knowwww!!!! D:
Amazing story, keep up the good work and publish again soon!
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2013 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Rising Menace
Oh my damn; he thinks she's pregnant, which she probably is, but he believes it to be his grandchild. He's in for quite the rude awakening.
Author's Response:
In more ways than one....But, shhh! I'm not giving anything out yet...
Date: Jun 28, 2013 05:45 am Title: Chapter 38 - The Quiet Before the Storm
I'm disappointed that she's not pregnant, but there's something at the back of my mind telling me the test might have been a false reading...
Damn, I can't wait for them to get together officially and get married!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2013 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 35 - The Accident
Man that fall was crazy. I've seen the video a few times and it's just scary. Couldn't believe he got up and kept performing even with people telling him not to do so. That man is tough. Hope Melly knows that and tries to stay strong.
Date: May 10, 2013 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the characters
I saw that you are one of my stories in your favorites...
Thank youuuuuuuuu ♥ ♥ ♥
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2013 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Thinning Optimism
This guy is insane; I wouldn't be surprised if the only reason he set up that family dinner was to get their phones. Michael needs to be worried, but not too much. I'm sure it is something they can handle.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 09:04 am Title: Chapter 31 - Free For You
And here is where things get fun.....i mean nasty lol
I hope that Mel sucks it up and confronts him with what ever he has in store for her. She has to know that she has 1 well really 2 in reality 3 men behind her. She can tear him down, not an easy fight but im sure that she can do it. And her hubby will back her up 100% nothing better than that. Just hope Mike doesn't start drama so he an be there for her too.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 06:18 am Title: Chapter 31 - Free For You
So I'm pretty sure planting a tracking device on someone that isn't your kid and isn't a minor is illegal. But alas, he's a politician; more than likely he'll get away with it. Hopefully she'll at least confront him. It's great that both Michael and Debbie can finally move on. It just sucks that this happy occassion will now be riddled with fear and confusion.
Date: Apr 23, 2013 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Signs of Danger
I could totally see that last convo happening lmao. He totally would!
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2013 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Staking His Claim
I hope she was being honest when he told him she'd give him her all. Really interested to see how they handle is incoming divorce and manage their, secretive, relationship. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2013 07:28 am Title: Chapter 28 - Saving the Day
Oh god.
I was still distracted by the angel singing in my head at the sight of that bathroom, and then Michael has to go mess it up with his FEELINGS.
lmfao what is life now!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh well, everyone loosens up in a relaxing, scented bath...Who knows, maybe even Melanie has her share of beans to spill...
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2013 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Double Trouble
I think their honeymoon phase is just about over. Drama can't be too far off now, but they've had a lot of close calls so they should be fine.