Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 06:28 am Title: Chapter 49 - Meet the Parents

I have always loved Katherine for her heart is as sweet as Michael's was. Thought I hope Joseph stays away from Melly! I'm so glad they're finally getting happiness. I loved this chapter and can't wait for more!!

 

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2013 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the characters

Great chapter! I just want Melly and Chris to be divorced already so Michael can be happy with her. Is that selfish of me? OH MY GOD I got chills cause we're getting closer to Invincible Era Michael. Admittedly he was GORGEOUS during Dangerous and HIStory but he seemed so mature during the Invincible Era and it was HOT!!! Can't wait for more! Keep writing and hopefully it's happy stuff not drama! Though the drama is excellent I'm a mushy person and want happy endings! :)

Author's Response:

Oh, there's a lot to happen before the ending :) Some good, some bad. But that is life....Life is my inspiration :)

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2013 10:20 am Title: Chapter 48 - Time To Part Our Ways

Oh, wow. That'll be interesting. Very interesting. I'd almost forgotten she hadn't met the rest of his family. Can't wait to see how it goes. 

Author's Response:

Mrs. Jackson is a very traditionalist woman, and seeing her son's still married pregnant girlfried may prove a test for her...

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2013 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 45 - Brothers

Awwwwwwww I'm getting all teary, that was so touching at the end there...

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2013 08:34 am Title: Chapter 43 - The Decision

Things are getting tough for all of them. Good to know Melly is happy about the baby. Was a bit worried, like Michael, that she'd resent him for getting her pregnant. He's also right in that Melly and Chris need a divorce asap. Nothing good can come from their marriage legally continuing on for much longer. 

Author's Response:

Things won't be easy. It all depends whether Chris is allowed to leave New York on time...

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2013 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Breaking Point

Awww she is preggo, but sadly it happened at the wrong time. I hope it works out and that the baby will be fine. Mel needs to come down and relax for the baby's health. 

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2013 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sinking Deeper in Trouble

Ay Dios mio esto esta feo. Damn!