[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Aftermath
Oh my Melanie having sex with Chris must have been so awkard LMAO! I'm glad Chris and Debbie are trying to persuade Melanie and Michael to find someone else. At least they aren't trying to waste their life because of a formal marriage. Debbie is a real woman, she knows Melanie knpws LOL. YAY! I hope she is right too when she says Michael will persue her if he really likes her. Can't wait for it to happen!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - How We Met
Oh no Michael! Melanie is way more bautiful than this witch Lisa! I see that Michael immediately noticed her, well we can't blame him she is hot and I loved her in Gossip Girl ;) Nice pick for the character BTW
“Well, I do. But I would like the reassurance that I will be dealing with you in person…only you.”
YO, I see what Michael is trying to do LOL
Oh my! Michael already discovered a part of the secret! Can't to see what ill happen when he will realize her mariage is just formal!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Beginning
I love the plot and I have the feeling this is going to be such a great story! I do feel sad for Michael; marry someone just to please his mother. Sometimes you ahve to be a little bit selfish and think about what can make you happy and we all know that at the end it isn't going to make him happy!
And poor Melanie too. She had a crush on Christopher and it must had broken her heart when she found out he wasgay! And now she is marrying him because she loves him and wants to do everything to make him happy.
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Confide in Me
I adore this story. I adore it for its unabashed embrace of how natural being gay is and how callous we as close minded humans are for denying people that natural right. I adore it for the kindness of the spouses, Chris and Debbie, who want only the best for their significant others, and I adore it for Melanie and Michael for the same reason. I really hope it turns out they can at least all be friends. I hope Debbie is a good character as well as Chris. And I hope both couples have the strength to stand up to their strict families and say:" I deserve real love! No matter what you say!"
Whatever direction you choose to take, I am now a permanent fan.
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the characters
OW! This is going to be GOOD !
Date: Feb 20, 2013 10:35 am Title: Chapter 8 - Confide in Me
omg she is amazing and Michael will love her to death
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 04:33 am Title: Chapter 7 - Disaster Strikes
Wow, hope everything is alright with Chris.
Date: Feb 20, 2013 02:47 am Title: Chapter 7 - Disaster Strikes
omg i hope everything will be ok
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2013 02:02 am Title: Chapter 7 - Disaster Strikes
Oh nooooo :(
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2013 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Damage Control
Michael might not know it yet, but he's saying that following a purpose! She has to know that his marriage is merely formal, so that he can pursue her and can be absolutely sure about her marriage! Clever trick! Amazing chapter! Thank you, girl!
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2013 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Damage Control
At least she didn't completely flip out with his forwardness. It's great they are being honest, their relationship will be that much easier in the long run... their business relationship that is, lol.
Date: Feb 19, 2013 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Damage Control
girl go for Michael he is 100% better
Date: Feb 18, 2013 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Cards On The Table
Well damn he was so formal with it.He was just like yeah so no big deal my marriage and yours are formal ya know.Anyway great story cant wait to read more
Date: Feb 18, 2013 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Cards On The Table
omg
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2013 04:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Cards On The Table
Geez, I like how he just threw out his and her business like that! Probably not the best way to start a meeting, but it may work for him.