[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2013 10:23 am Title: Chapter 25 - Love Hurts
If Michael doesn't pull himself together they are going...to...get..caught!
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2013 06:02 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Ghost of Jealousy
Wow, good thing Chris made the decision he did. Otherwise it would've been pretty tough for Michael and Melanie trying to... you know.
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2013 07:32 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Ghost of Jealousy
Smart move, Chris. It's those little things that matter the most.
Especially since Michhael's lovesick behind wants to show up drenched in rain wearing boxers briefs and shit.
Melanie is one VERY lucky woman.
On a sidenote, the speech he gave was absolutely beautiful. This is a man is LUUUHHHHHHVE.
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2013 03:13 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Ghost of Jealousy
awww shit.
Go Mike, you DOG!!!
;))
LOVE this. Update sooooon
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Fugitives
I was debating whether or not to review this, seeing as you have a fitting 69 reviews total, but then I saw this chapter only had ONE review and I was like, "oh hell naw."
Because the making love scene? Where Michael is telling her that HE is all HERS, instead of the other way around?
i can't stop reading it! that ish doesn't happen in real life! WHY CAN'T IT?? WHYYYYYYYY??
(breathes deeply)
so all in all i love the chapter.:)
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2013 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Fugitives
That 'normal' life Chris wants so badly for her is kind of difficult, and not just because she's fallen in love with Michael, but because of her unique situation with him (Chris). She does truly deserve all the happiness she can get, and who knows maybe for now where she is in life is happiness enough for her.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2013 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The First Conflict
Ufff wow idk where this is going but I can't wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2013 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 20 - The First Conflict
Yay, vacation!
They need a break like dang.
Poor Michael, that must've been awkward DX
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gathering Courage
Yeah Mel, you be fighting him XD
Can't wait until you update this, because it's one of my favourites!
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 11 Cutting to the Chase
That's a great dress. Wish I could grab it from the computer screen.
This is awesome so far!
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Cards On The Table
About to get real deeep lol.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 3 - How We Met
So Michael knows! :O
Great x
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Beginning
Argh, dang Lisa. Why'd you have to ruin everything?!
Anyway this is really good.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the characters
Yay, seems interesting x
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2013 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Gathering Courage
LMAO moonwalking over his balls ahahahahaha omg that was hysterical!