Date: May 14, 2013 07:53 pm Title: Prologue: Can I go... Please!!!
Okay? Well no offence, and no disrespect, because if you want to do it that way that's fine with me....but I don't usually comment on stories when I know the author won't respond. Because when authors don't respond I feel like they either don't care or didn't even see it. So that's why I haven't been commenting. But if it's really that big of a deal, I suppose I can comment on each one. You know, whether you reply or not.
Idk it's just one of those things for me.
But seriously. No worries.
I hope I didn't come off too harsh :(
I don't want you mad at me haha
I love this story :)
Date: May 14, 2013 12:07 am Title: Chapter 18. gettting use to it.... Ironing out the problem
Wait....how is this updated?? :(
Don't get my hopes up like that
Author's Response:
I'm sorry but seeing as no one comments I can't know who read and who didn't and because you wrote such a urgent coment he lat time i saw you I have been pushing the story up FOR YOU so that I can be sure that YOU read the updates and I couldn't know that you already did because YOu never commented to let me know you were waiting for the next chapter and seeing as you are on of my top commenters on this story I thought you would have let me know... sorry... but now that i know i can work on the next chapters but be aware there is MUCH more to come in this story
I'm al;wys looing to see what you all think
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2013 09:40 am Title: Chapter 17: Welcome to the Ranch
Love the chapter and all the pic of the ranch :) is that realy debbie in the bad era picture or an edit? continue plz!
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 16 Daddy has lost his mind... Michael knows exactly what he's doing
This was a great part, Im glad your back!!! LOL :)
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2013 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 15: make it go away... Some things you can't take back
Oh my god 0____0
UPDATE. UPDATE NOW.
Date: May 05, 2013 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Girl's Just Wanna have Fun
I love this story so far. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 14: Fun is over back to reality... it only get worse
Wow paris is gone go banana's now she is goth and depressed Michael needs to work hader to help his babygirl and this situation that's about to go down.
Continue!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 14: Fun is over back to reality... it only get worse
Please continue soon! So far, it's pretty awesome. Couple of spelling/ grammar errors, but we all make mistakes (heck, I do all the time, lol).
BTW, can you check out my story Risky Buisness?
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 03:07 pm Title: The Interlude:Tender Love and Care... "Why it's rated R"
Damn that was Hot.
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 12:01 pm Title: The Interlude:Tender Love and Care... "Why it's rated R"
They got they freak on. Lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 12:All is Not what it seems
Dang that was intense wtf? Paris was wilding out on her father. But mike don't play he made sure to put her in her place to.
But u knw something ppl keep bothering her & she just was pushed so I understand her on that to. I also understand Michael to cause he could get sued along with the school so it's good if Paris could get some councling & some anger managment to cause if u push her she be wilding LOOL okay ima be serious now but yeah Michael's only looking out 4 her best interest & she should understand.
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2013 12:53 am Title: Chapter 12:All is Not what it seems
YEEESSSSS
This was deressing as fuck. It was great!...but depressing AF.
Michael chapter!! leggo!!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2013 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 11 first week back... Not as good as expected.. "makes you want to scream"
This a good story and Courtney got what she deserved...
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2013 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 10 "To return to school... Not to return to school... that is the Question
Continue!!!
GO GO GO!!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2013 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 9:Far Away... How do you say goodbye
What beautiful and sad story..