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Reviewer: HandsInMichaelsCurls Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2013 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 "What the HELL Happen... Screams in the Night"

This story's sooo good :) Update soon!!

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Date: Feb 03, 2013 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 4:Reunited

I took my time and read every chapter.
This is really good and sad that's a lot of stuff going on right there. there's so much writing involved to I like your writing style it just a lot to read but I liked it a lot.

Keep it up and GO GO GO!!!!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2013 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 4:Reunited

I feel bad 4 Paris :/ poor Paris she gotta deal with that at such a young age.

Reviewer: HandsInMichaelsCurls Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3:Daddy.... Help Me

holy shit.....this chapter had my heart going 0__o

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Date: Feb 01, 2013 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: Girl's Just Wanna have Fun

I love your story

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2013 01:17 am Title: Chapter 2: Girl's Just Wanna have Fun

Paris is so pretty, so I hope she becomes a model.

I'm glad you separated the lines. It's easier to read.

Lol, anyway, can you review my story Risky Buisness please? I'd appreciate it.

Can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2013 01:13 am Title: Chapter 1 - Yes you can go/picture perfect

Yay, they let her go :)

Poor Michael haha :P

Liked the chapter!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2013 06:24 pm Title: Prologue: Can I go... Please!!!

I like this, please continue! :)

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2013 10:55 am Title: Prologue: Can I go... Please!!!

It's good!Keep going!

ps:where's Prince and Blanket?

Author's Response:

don't worry they will be in the story Prince (Michael Jr) is of in college but no worries he will make an appearance blanket is actually in the next chapter

 

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