[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 12: Night At Michael's
I'm so glad he saved her and took care of her phew they almost got caught by Janet to.
I bet if they didn't know they were related
they'd probably would of still fell in love. cause I see that they never know each other there whole lives so in a way it's not there fault.
Date: Jan 17, 2013 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1; Nevada meet California
Your awesome for the constant updates and I love each and every chapter you've posted up. Thank you for taking time out cause I know you maybe be busy with other things. this is like my lucky night reading frequent chapters of one of my fav stories.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 11: Great Day to a Bad Day
Damn good thing Michael found her on time or else she would of been raped and I would of liked that either. Oh thank you Michael.
Please continue I get so excited for everytime you update this. It maybe an incest story but this one is different in a way cause they know it's wrong of what the're doing. Most I read they acts if it's normal but yours I see have a life lession to it and I like that to.
Keep up that fantastic work!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 10; Ferris Wheel Confession
OMG!! Now that is disgusting and wrong but shit if I had cousin like Michael I would have to keep a distance away from him. Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 10; Ferris Wheel Confession
First move: Make out lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Day Away
Damn you beat me to the punch I was gonna ask could you extend the chapters just a little bit but thank you for considering that. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Day Away
I wonder how there day will turn out? Is Michael gonna finally tell her? I'm worried that Mar with get a bit freaked out though. I can sure tell that they both like each other.
Continue I want more!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Day Away
Aaah! Continue!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 8: A Talk With Michael
OMG!!!! He was just gonna tell her. O_o WHOA this is really getting deep!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 7: Game Day
I love the B-Ball action that happened there. Ahaha. She is finally bonding with the family for a change I like that a lot. At least for now until all hell breaks loose. Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 8: A Talk With Michael
Awww, he should of told her
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 7: Game Day
Wooo! Lol We girls won!
Date: Jan 17, 2013 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 8: A Talk With Michael
omg he loves her omg
Date: Jan 17, 2013 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 7: Game Day
love it go girls hehe
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 6: Special Dinner
Lol AYE! I love when I imagine michael saying that