Date: Mar 22, 2016 05:09 pm Title: Introduction
Its very interesting. A good story starter!
Date: Jun 20, 2015 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
please finish this amazing story please
Date: Jul 31, 2013 04:42 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow continue please
Date: Jul 27, 2013 11:49 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg youwrite soo damn well XDXDXD this is awesomazing XDXDXD
Date: Jul 27, 2013 07:34 am Title: Chapter 14
She's a hella good convincer.
Date: Jul 15, 2013 04:11 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow continue please
Date: Jul 14, 2013 08:17 am Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhh, she's crying ... she needs a hug! Michael didn't go about dat da right way, he could've just told her he didn't wanna have sex. Bt plz update soon.... n dnt take forever this time to do so, haha.
Author's Response:
Haha I Am Soooooo Truley Sorry About Taking So Long On The Updates! I'll Try My BEst To Update More Often. : )
Date: May 22, 2013 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Continue please
Date: Apr 30, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Continue please
Date: Apr 30, 2013 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Update soon.!
Date: Apr 02, 2013 01:03 am Title: Chapter 10
Continue please
Date: Mar 30, 2013 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
Continue please





Date: Mar 29, 2013 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh dang he not gonna cheat on Jaiden over that pretty girl he saw? Oh no she was be hurt & pissed if she finds out that. Ok maybe he's just going back 2 the hotel to see her. I'm hoping or was that jaiden there? I'm confused... lol Continue soon.
Date: Mar 29, 2013 10:15 pm Title: Introduction
I like it keep going and can you review my story touched a dream only if you got time
Author's Response:
Thanks, & I'll Do It As Soon As Possible





Date: Mar 27, 2013 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
That a steamy scene good to see them close now.
Continue and GO GO GO!