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Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 08:22 am Title: Chapter 2

"Eat that, fatty." I said to myself.    ---- I COULDNT STOP LAUGHING AT THAT PART hahaa XD

Damn I can't wait for more; I know Michael ain't gonna be giving up on her. ;)

Thanks for the amazing update, I truly love this already.

Please update sooon  , <33



Author's Response:

Lol! I'm glad you liked it. My humor is very dry, so I had to try my hardest to make this funny because that's what MissMJ2012 wanted.

I'll update soon, thanks for your kind words, m'aam! <3

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 02:53 am Title: Chapter 2

loved it babe...wow he was in a nut house lol...I wonder what will happen I am super excited cant wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's kinda cray-cray....Lol do people still say that? OMG Now I'm embarrased. >_< Anyway, thanks for the review! I'll update soon! :P

Reviewer: BettyHoops Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow Cindy don't give a BEEP BEEP BEEP about Michael's sexy ass. What's wrong with Him being the Pizza guy? LOL

Well she better watch out cause it looks like he may have something for her soon. Continue

Author's Response:

Lmao, no she doesn't! I guess Cindy's just too refined for the pizza guy!

I'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing, hun! :D

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

oooh continue



Author's Response:

I will. ;D

Reviewer: Blueprint Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

Why do I have a feeling that Victoria is annoying to Michael? I was so happy that you updated!!! I want more and more!!!

Author's Response:

Lmao is it that obvious? Jk but yeah, he already thinks she's a pest and wants her to go away. I'll update soon! lol Thanks for the reviews! :D

Reviewer: thelostchild143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMJ OMJ OMJ!! PLLLEEEAASSSEEE UPDATE AGAIN!!! :DDDDDDDD I LOVE IT!!! I'm dying for another chapter!! LOL 

 

Much Love Xxxx



Author's Response:

I WIIIIIIIIILLLLLL! Lol soon too. ^_^

Much Love to you as well. XOXO

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oooh! Mike gon get her! Oh my god, go go go! Go on please!!

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*drops dead*....

*comes back to life slowly, talking* aaaanyway, GO ON! <3



Author's Response:

Lol maybe, maybe not.

You said 'fiberboard' when you died. LMFAO

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Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1

I love it cant wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response:

We're glad ou like it. More is up now. :)

Reviewer: sugacream2525 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2012 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1

He's one hot and crazed twisted delivery guy :/ Lolololololol good luck to Cynthia! one of you's gots ta continue. :P

Author's Response:

Lol we will! :D

Reviewer: TheMJFictionWriter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2012 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved it please update soon : ) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! We will ;)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2012 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1

O WOW I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINOU :)



Author's Response:

I'm gladyou like it! We'll continue soon!:D

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2012 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start! LOVE how you two have collaborated for this story. ^.^ I KNOW THIS WILL BE ONE OF THE BEST. ;P

Can't wait for the update. XD , <3



Author's Response:

Thanks! We really tried on this. We'll be updating soon!

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2012 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok I'm loving this story so far girls! Keep it up :D Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. We'll continue soon! XD

Reviewer: thelostchild143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2012 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Uh oh.... Lol I am loving it so far!! Please continue! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks. I will! :P

Reviewer: BettyHoops Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2012 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hope one of you continue this. :)



Author's Response:

We will. Thanks! :)

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