[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2013 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I have it too, but I hate the song, lol.
"FRIIIIDAAAY FRIIIDAAAY, GOTTA GET DOWN ON-"
"AAARGH, TURN IT OFF!" -Me.
Haha, I literally love the story Strip, it's so cool.
I haven't read Chokehold, but I will at some point. I'm guessing sex is a common theme?
Thanks for the compliment, really. I thought the reason I wasn't getting reviews because I wrote crap. Like I wrote stories with ideas that no one liked but yeah, it's good to hear.
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2013 01:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh please, I ain't that good. You're great! :) your other stories are awesome too, not just this one.
Author's Response:
Pardon? You "ain't that good"... ahermm...
NO! Don't lie to me, Natasha. I will not sit here and be lied too. Trying to cover it up with praise... tsk tsk... (-_-)
But seriously, you're a great author and everyone knows it. Don't bash yourself when you've got talent. :D
Aha and thank you, I do appreciate that :) I'd hope that my other stories are good too. I'd hope people aren't like...
"Wow! Shedding Masks is so good!!" and then say...
"Strip? Wtf is that?"
"Don't Jump? That was so lame"
"Chokehold was the worst excuse for a sex scene I've ever read. Talk about rookie material..."
"I'd rather listen to Rebecca Black 500x over than read Glam Plan. No joke."
XD lmao! Sorry to anyone who likes Rebecca Black... I will admit, I have Friday on my iPod... lmao!
He he, don't judge me.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2013 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, 56 reviews and only 7 chapters?
That's so crazy!
Just shows how cool and interesting this story really is!
Hope to see an update soon.
PS: You are a one of a kind of writer, YANAgirl.
Probably one of the best authors on here. I'm not exaggerating.
Just thought I would let you know :)
Author's Response:
Honestly, I'm blown away as well. I've already explained this in other responses to reviews, but I did NOT think people would like this story very much. I thought people would think it's too weird and not like it. I only wrote it because I really like Marilyn Manson and I had an urge to incorporate him, having this many reviews and this many people who read and like the story is crazy! I'm overwhelemed, honestly.
Yes, I will try and update soon :)
Thank you so much, that means a lot coming from you :) I really really REALLY do appreciate it SO much, you can't comprehend! Now that was MY turn to not exaggerate ;)
Date: Jan 01, 2013 11:59 am Title: Chapter 7
Omg what a twist xD Poor Michael he's just like 'Hhuummmuumhhmmuum I didn't know *crying noises*' like wth just happened xD Michael... just crawl under the bed and hope or the best. Poor guy like hoes, beer, sexual assaults, assault with a deadly weapon. This bro is in for it and I hope he can survive
Author's Response:
Lmao! Crawling under the bed and waiting for Marilyn to die off would probably be the best option, yes, I must agree.
Haha, if he did that the whole time Michael would be thinking; Oh my God... what if it doesn't die?!?!?!?!
XD
Haha! We can only hope for the best for Michael. He's reeeeeally not in the best situation. :P
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2013 11:09 am Title: Chapter 7
Marilyn! YOU DID WHAT?! You bastard!!! @#%^* Aaaaargh!!! Don't you ever ever ever again do that to Mikey again, or I'll come into the story an MOONWALK UP AND DOWN YOUR ASS!!!
But, then again, you are an awesome writer! I, despite Marilyn, enjoyed every part of this chapter.
PS: That photo is just a random chick, who seems to feel just the way I do.
PPS: Your story is GREAT! ;)
PPPS: Plz continue! <3
Author's Response:
Lmao, I look at the reviews and all I see is this giant picture of a girl about ready to punch someone! Lmao! I saw it and I was like "That's Eltoie" Hahaha! I remember the comments you made before about beating Marilyn's ass if he ever did something like that XD
Haha thank you! :D I appreciate that a lot, but I'm sure you already knew that :P
Glad you liked the chapter and the story! I'll update soon :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2013 05:01 am Title: Chapter 7
"You made an unexpected cameo,” that was hilarious :D. I was soooo lmfao at the scene where marilyn almost kill Michael with that knife (sorry, Michael.)
Author's Response:
Haha! I liked that line too XD
Lmao! Lemme just put it this way...
Most People: MARILYN YOU A**HOLE!!! WTF ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT KNIFE NEAR MIKEY!?!? I WILL KILL YOU! I WILL KILL YOU IF YOU EVEN THINK OF LAYING A FINGER ON HIM EVER AGAIN!
SmellyApplehead: Ahahaha Hehehehe hahahahah hohohohoho LMAO LMAO LMAO ROFL ROFL ROFL!!!!!
XD lmao! While you laughed at the knife scene, I was laughing at the fact that you were laughing at the knife scene! Haha! I hope you realise that that wasn't supposed to be the funny part of the chapter XD haha!
Seriously, don't take this offensively, but I was smiling like crazy when I read this comment. I just love the whole 'Sorry Michael' at the end. Doing that is like when you watch your friend get hit by a bus, laugh, and then send them a 'get well soon' card when they're at the hospital. Lmao!
*sigh* This made me laugh XD in a good way!!! :)))) :DDDD
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2013 04:27 am Title: Chapter 2
No-eyebrowed-bitch though...
Author's Response:
Haha, I still laugh at that. When I wrote it I thought I was so clever lmao! Now I realise that I really need to stop laughing at my own little jokes... :/ aha!
Date: Jan 01, 2013 04:19 am Title: Chapter 7
Doctor Cockopus!!! So funny lol.
Poor Michael, Marilyn can be really crazy and dangerous sometimes.
You'll be in my country, France? It's so great!!
Happy New Year to you sweety!! :D
Author's Response:
Haha, I contemplated on whether I should put that in their or not! lmao! I thoguht people would think it was just stupid :P
Yes! :D I will be in France! I'm so excited! I know I'm going to go see the Eiffel Tower, The Louvre, The Tour De Triomph (might have spelt that wrong), and a whole shwackload of other stuff that I really just don't remember. They haven't given us the itinerary for it all just yet. Anyway, I'm still so exited to go!!! :DD
Happy New Year to you too :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2013 02:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Wooooooooow!!! This chapter was just packed with pure cringeyness xD
the girls are such sluts i cant blame michael for running out!
MARILYN!!! God hes a freak! XD
hahaha its funny how tragic is a word reserved for death but in ur case, u say it cos u cant go see marilyn manson xD haha i love u :D
happy new year, all the best for 2013! X
<3
Author's Response:
Hahaha! I tried to make them sound pretty damn slutty, lol! I tried to pick a really stereotypical 'slut' name too for the one girl lmao! (no offense to anyone named Trixie)
Haha don't judge me :P YOU'D SAY THE SAME THING FOR OLLY!!! ;)
Happy New Year to you too :D <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2013 12:20 am Title: Chapter 7
Daaaaamn, Marilyn is crazy lol Happy New Years!! <3
I"m drunk by the way...a..lol I drank too much Smirnoff and Grey goose,,and,s,hannasey it's vodka..ha. Well, I'm not THAT..drunk actually, I can still see and stuff, my head is KILLING ME D:
Author's Response:
Happy New Year to you too! Seems like you had a good time ;)
Haha, haaaaaappy hangover :P ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2012 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
O.o I read this and I'm still like 'wtf?' lol! that's a good thing though. I wondered how you were going to top yourself with marilyn's fake boobs... haha! I guess a sex tape and a little knife throwing action wasn't bad ;) But seriously, marilyn needs to stop being so freaking scary!!! like holy crap! if my roommate came at me with a knife i'd call the cops! But I guess if my roommate was marilyn manson I'd probably think twice about it ;)
Author's Response:
LM-AO! XD
Haha, WTF was the reaction I was going for. I love writing really crazy stuff, it's more fun than the serious stuff, but sometimes it's good for a change of pace to do serious stuff because also it gets a message across. PLUS it's fun to explore that area.
Haha! If Marilyn Manson was my roommate and he sliced up my calf I'd be HONORED! I'd be like "Mr Manson, you forgot my other calf..." lol! Seriously though, if I was sitting in my room and MARILYN MANSON comes in and is like 'I'm your roommate' I'd cry. Or faint. Or scream. I'm not sure what I'd do yet.
But that's why I'm so upset that I can't go see him on tour!! :'( I'll never know how I'd react! But my parents said they wouldn't have let me go anyway because they don't like him, they think he's weird, and they think his fans are weird. Lmao! They think there would be too many druggie goth people lol! it doesn't matter, I can't go anyway, but it was exciting for a brief moment when I realised that seeing him WAS a possibility :)
Date: Dec 27, 2012 09:22 am Title: Chapter 6
*sigh* Oh Michael *pats head* I've already expressed my disappointment in you but I'm glad you're doing that to yourself as well ;D I hope he feels better soon and gets his ish together and I hope you feel better soon :D
Author's Response:
Haha! After the next chapter he's gunna be feeling... well... something! lol!
Haha! Thank you! I do feel better today, I'm all healed! ^-^ Except I just got back from snowboarding and I faceplanted and winded myself, sot hat kind of hurt, but other then that I'm all good! :DD
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2012 12:58 am Title: Chapter 6
Aw mike is becoming a bad boy ;)
haha yes only marilyn would weite songs like that :D
<3
Author's Response:
Mmmm FINALLY ;P
Haha yes, he writes some weird songs... but I think thats probably why I love them so much XD lmao! But he does have some meaningful ones! I'm serious! Lol, you probably don't believe me based on the persona he has in this story XD lmao! But Coma White is a serious song, it's really pretty <3
Sorry this took me forever to reply, I accidentally didn't see your comment :( How that's possible, I don't know, but it happened and I'm so ashamed!
:((((((((
<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 <--- those extra 3's are to make up for not having replied to your comment earlier.
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2012 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
Michael's gunna learn that he did get drunk when he talks to marilyn... and I wonder when he's going to see tilly again <3 Ew... nosebleeds... do those hurt? I've always wondered; I've never had one before..
Author's Response:
Haha he'll learn a few things when he sees Marilyn again ;) As for Tilly, she'll be back, I promise :)
Haha, yeah, they're not pretty. They don't really hurt, it depends on the severity I guess. Like, the four minor ones didn't hurt. But the major one did because after awhile of it bleeding (this is going to get really nasty in second here, sorry) it starts to like, drip bloody snot, but the snot doesn't come out like normal snot it comes out in the form of a long log (kinda like the width of a slug and the length of maybe your pinky finger) and that kinda hurts. It's not like a sharp pain, I think it's more the fact that it feels so weird that it kinda hurts... Let's just say that you're VERY lucky that you've never experienced a nosebleed before. They're not fun. Unfortunately, I get nosebleeds very often. I think I got it from my Dad because he always got lots of nosebleeds for no apparent reason.
Anyway, that's my mini essay on nosebleeds ;) But long stoy short is that they don't hurt 95% of the time. You probably wouldn't cry. I've meet some people who cry over the shock and just because there's a lot of blood everywhere, but not really because it hurts.
Date: Dec 26, 2012 10:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael is on denial and I really wonder how he will react when he'll find out that he was really drunk. Don't worry about the lenght of your chapter, it was good...There was a good count of words :)
Poor sweety, it's too bad for your Christmas that you've been sick like this :(
Author's Response:
Haha we might be seeing a different side of Michael when that happens :P
Haha yeah, it was a shame but it was fun and festive anyway! :)