Date: Jan 26, 2013 01:36 am Title: Chapter 11
I was pretty surprised that Michael had tasted one of Marilyn's brownies...I mean can you just imagine Marilyn doing brownies for being apologized?...Marilyn cooking with an apron...There's something wrong here lol.
Hmm Michael is now really decided to be tough and stand against Marilyn..It will be really interesting...
Author's Response:
Hahaha! I'd pay good money for a Marilyn Manson cooking show! By the end I have a feeling the whole place would be on fire... and it probably would have been intentional. :P
Date: Jan 25, 2013 09:29 am Title: Chapter 11
Du nuuh nuugghh NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! He can't turn for the worse!! He had so much goodness! *cries on ground* he was so gooooodd... And Trixie is such a creeper girl *weird look* Like legit... *shivers* Although Marilyn is totally tripping I don't think it's the best idea to stand up to him... He has a lot of people behind him... Maybe he should try to persuade some more people that he's bad (cries) before he goes around taking down people...
Author's Response:
Haha! The goodness is slowly draining away :(
Agreed, Michael needs to get his own little 'possey' before he really starts making a mess of the situation.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2013 06:34 am Title: Chapter 11
Is Marilyn really in love with Tilly? Oh well, I ain't giving no damn. But. What Marilyn says to Michael is kinda true, though. According to what Michael's gotten himself into, Marilyn just tryna remind him that he was stuck in that fucking stupid "love" to that bitch, Tilly. I mean, come on. You'd get a better girl out from dat prison.
Author's Response:
Haha, no he's not. Michael is though :P
Haha! Marilyn speaks the truth, Michael just doesn't wanna believe it. But would you believe a guy who's commited numerous crimes, dresses like a creep (no offense to Marilyn Manson lol because I am a fan haha), and is a complete womanizer?
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2013 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hahaha i gotta admit, Marilyn got him good!
i cant BELIEVE Michael took the brownies!!!
Marilyn? Making brownies as an apologetic gesture ?!? In what world does this occur?!?!?!?
omg, i cant wait to see what Michael does, this is gonna be good; Michael and Marilyn doing everything they can to destroy eachother....
mwaha....mwaha...mwahahahahaHAHAHAHA!!!! XD
<3
Author's Response:
Haha! If only Michael had realised then and there that Marilyn doesn't do apologies... :/
Haha, creepy laugh at the end much :P <33
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2013 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
Daaaamn, Mikey finna be bad boy! Oooo! LAWL
I missed this story, and Porcelain.
I will update Ours tomorrow or on Sunday :)
Author's Response:
Haha! Aww, sorry I took so long to update :( and I'm taking foreer with Porcelain! I think I'll update Porcelain tonight though :)
Yay! I can't wait for the chapter! I reeeeally love that story! :D
Date: Jan 19, 2013 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
*rubs temples* Ugghh my bad influence senses are going off the charts *sigh* Michael... I don't even know.. He's screwed. His whole livelyhood is screwed. That old saying 'Stay away from boos, drugs, and women' smh Michaels got 2/3 and that is a bad enough alley to be going down. *sigh* I hope this is going to be like Great Expectations by Dickens with Michael like oh yeah new life blah blah then he figures out that it sucks and goes back to his old life. And not marry Estalla/ Tilly *suspicious squint*
Author's Response:
Haha! Michael will definitely realise a few things when he gets into this new lifestyle, but I agree, he;s definitely not helping his situation right now. He needs to clean up his act if he ever wants to get out sooner! Hopefully he'll realise that soon, eh?
Date: Jan 19, 2013 04:36 am Title: Chapter 10
I think that with time, Michael will be in big troubles with Marilyn. I don't like what Tilly is doing with Michael.
It's good to make him more popular but she using him too and I don't like this. Even he will win her heart at the end I guess, he will have to go through some hard times to get her.
Author's Response:
Definitely, it won't be easy for him regarding Tilly that's for sure.
As time progressed things will get worse and worse between Michael and Marilyn...
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2013 04:18 am Title: Chapter 10
Stupid bitch tittyyy titty tytti sjxbhjksnjshdhdtwvwisnk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I even didn't write titty right haha. Bitch tryna make her ass whooped u____u Oh ya, no offense, but I was hoping there's a scene where marilyn is pissed his ass off, and going to kill somebody. (Don't worry michael)
Author's Response:
Hahaha! I noticed! lol!
Haha none taken!
Maybe I'll just have to make Marilyn kill somebody later... ;) Just for you. :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2013 02:07 am Title: Chapter 10
Whatever Marilyn is gonna do to Mikey, I don't actually mind. ;)
I... I don't know what to review more...
It's not your story, it's something else...
So, I'll keep it short.
Great chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Haha! Michael's tough now, he can hold his own ;)
Maybe. O.O
Hahaha! I'll assume you were speechless ;) That's probably not the case, but I'll pretend it was anyway.
Thank you! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2013 12:24 am Title: Chapter 10
Ohhhh!!! Its about to kick off! Shit just got serious! Release the BARRELS!!!!
omg, michael- i feel sorry for cos he just is so naive to think that tilly likes him, he has no idea does he? :(
i get the impression that maybe, as tilly spends time with michael she could grow to like him. Maybe.
shit, i cant decided whether mike should go back to his room and get eaten by marilyn or forced by him to take part in some sort of satanic ritual... Perhaps the sacrafice of a small goat .... XD!
OR, go out and get beaten up! Lol imagine if he just kicks their ass first time hahaha xD well with u, we never know!
<3
Author's Response:
HahahahahaHAHAHAHHAHAH! Satanic ritual.... omg... lmao! Michael walks in there're like candles and stuff everywhere as he's holding this carving knife and a goat. "Get the goat's heart; or I'll rip out yours."
THAT would be an intense chapter! Haha!
Oh yes, the barrels wil be released... ;)
<33
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2013 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael! You're dead! You're so dead! dont go back 2 ur room! don't do it! He's gunna kill you! poor Mikey! :( I laugehd at the greaser bit and at the 'too bad you chose to be incompetent' 'too bad you chose to be a bitch'lmao! and I agree with Thrillereraslave -- FIGHT MICHAEL FIGHT! KICK MARILYN'S PASTY WHITE ASS!
Author's Response:
Hahahahahaha! Why do you guys all want him to get into a fight? lmao! Don't you guys want him to keep a nice clean record so he can get out quicker? :P lol!
No, of course not, that's too boring isn't it ;)
Haha who said it would be Marilyn? ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2013 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
To be honest, I hope Michael gets into a fight xD
Just to see him fight and shit, that'll be funny as fuck, just seeing him beat the fuck outta a bitch. Lol. Tryna be a greaser. <3 Aaayeeee.
I think I know who's up late..*smirks* *coughs: Kourtney.* LMAO, I just came back from this chill party, we waked and baked lol well at least not me, just a little.
Author's Response:
Hahahahaha! Oh geez... lol! Maybe he'll just have to get into a fight now... ;)
Haha! Hey! In my defense YOU'RE obviously up too!
Haha! When you said 'baked' it reminded me of the part from Perks Of Being A Wallflower... but we already discussed that?
All I've been doing is running on the treadmill! XD lmao! And I'm ruining my feet because I don't have any runners to run with! At least, not clean ones. My Mum goes nuts if I use outside runners on the treadmill :/ Haha! Aaaaaaaand I've been studying for my midterm... yaaaaaaay -_-
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2013 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
Haha, now Michael's trying to fit in!
Tilly, you're an idiot. He ain't gunna fall for you, you're fortunate enough that Michael likes you.
Update soon, liked the chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha! I laughed at "you're fortunate enough that Michael likes you." Exactly! I'd take Michael anyday.
I'll try my best to update as soon as I can :) Glad to know you liked it!
Date: Jan 12, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well tht went differently... This school is so random xD No whores allowed and then you're goin to offer the new kid to do a sex tape with you to get even more popularity by going out with a guy who she made more popular than the most popular dude in school *face palm* Yep. Omg I just hope Michael can be bad but not like trouble causing. He still needs that good record
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA! Tilly is a little hyprocritical :P
Lmao! I loved the face palm XD
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2013 06:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Yo, Tilly titty so pity, I don't like cha ass! >:( *throws loafers at her*
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA! I lmao-ed at *throws loafers at her* XD
So we've got Eltoie moonwalking on her ass and SmellyApplehead throwing loafers at her... haha! And it's only been 9 chapters and she's only been in about 3... :P
I'm wondering what other Michael Jackson related methods of abuse you guys have in mind :P