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Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2013 08:27 am Title: Chapter 9

omg i realy like this story but what he just ask her is too much



Author's Response:

I know it is... That's why she'll do what she's about to do..

But let's see what happens...!

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 07:46 am Title: Chapter 7

This story is really exciting! There may be an evil plan behind it, but she loves him and I can see her jumping to his side to save him. I can't wait to read more. I love it!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like it!!

I'll be updating soon!!

Reviewer: deleeshisj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Prologue...

I'm really loving this!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you do!! Thanks a lot! :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2013 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is very funny. This storys concept is almost Identical to mine. How original.

Author's Response:

Okay, I know you're not gonna believe me, but I haven't read your story.

I'd never think of stealing another person's ideas and concepts, that's not the reason why I'm on this site.

I'm sorry you feel that way, but there are so many stories and authors in here that I guess people must have had similar ideas all the time. 

Anyway, I hope you change your mind about that.

Thanks anyway.

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2013 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

ooooooooooooo if i was there i would beat her ass!!!!!!!! I swear!!! please continue!!!



Author's Response:

Ikr??? She's just blinded  by money and wealth!!

Thank you for reading the story! 

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 05:40 am Title: Chapter 4

Dang, it's hard not to fall in love.

It's even harder to crawl back out when you do.

Anyway, continue soon :)

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 05:37 am Title: Chapter 2

Ah crap, she has to play him :(

I like this story so far!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 05:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes! I do think you should continue :)

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 05:34 am Title: Prologue...

Poor girl :(

Already starting to dislike Alfred.

Continue.

BTW, can you review my story Risky Buisness?

Thanks alot :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, i'm really glad you like the story!!!

Of course, i'll read it and review!!!  :)

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