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Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 11:36 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Explanation....

Whoa! Thats heavy. Isn't amazing what the mind can think of and create. Wow your whole explanation of this was brilliant and quite entertaining. And whats even more funny is that you explained it in such a way that it didn't confuse me. I caught on and understood. 

Melissa is something else... Oooh I don't know whether to strongly dislike her, or feel sad for her. But she is crazy though. I like where this is going. I smell more drama ahead.  This is so unpredictable and I love it. Unpredictable stories are my favorite.



Author's Response:

"Isn't amazing what the mind can think of and create. " <----Yes, absolutely. That's why I prefer to write relaxed, the best things come out when you let the ideas flow instead of forcing them out of you. Thank you so much for your sweet compliment, I'm glad it didn't become confusing...I was trying to write it in a way you all could follow along with the conversation.

Melissa is a trip...you are right, do we feel sorry or do we dislike her...more to come soon....

"This is so unpredictable and I love it. Unpredictable stories are my favorite." <----Good! Always expect the unexpected with me *wink*

Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2013 01:35 am Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

Please update pronto!!!!!♥



Author's Response:

New chapter is up now. Enjoy!! xoxo

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2013 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

review 170 :) Congrats!



Author's Response:

Much love!! <3333

Reviewer: Bootylicious_for_MJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2013 09:19 am Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

you know I have to admit I totally did not see this coming...Melissa is from the future? Gosh, I don't know where this story continues now. Please update soon, dying with anticipation.



Author's Response:

I don't think no one did and that's how I like it lol you will soon learn more. Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2013 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

Omg! Ok I'm hooked now this us the most creative thing I have ever read lol please more lol my name is Isa by the way lol

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2013 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

Omg! Ok I'm hooked now this us the most creative thing I have ever read lol please more lol my name is Isa by the way lol



Author's Response:

Hi Isa, nice to meet you. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. More to come soon and thank you for your sweet compliment. xoxo

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

i have no idea what she should do really and girl u making alot if sense with this tabloid crap girl and going back in time would change the future girl u are good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I tried to write stories that would be entertaining for you all to read xoxo

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

i have no idea what she should do really and girl u making alot if sense with this tabloid crap girl and going back in time would change the future girl u are good.

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

i have no idea what she should do really and girl u making alot if sense with this tabloid crap girl and going back in time would change the future girl u are good.

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

i have no idea what she should do really and girl u making alot if sense with this tabloid crap girl and going back in time would change the future girl u are good.

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

i love your story im sure every single fan wants to go back in a time machine to see michael sexy self but this seems so real i really wish i could believe hard enough to travel back in time.

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

i love your story im sure every single fan wants to go back in a time machine to see michael sexy self but this seems so real i really wish i could believe hard enough to travel back in time.

Reviewer: mjgirl5445 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

i love your story im sure every single fan wants to go back in a time machine to see michael sexy self but this seems so real i really wish i could believe hard enough to travel back in time.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, any fan would love to have the chance to experience Michael up close and personal. Samantha is doing just that, she is living our dream. Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: Jasminelovesmichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

I would have never thought Melissa was from the future wow this story is really good

update soon 👌😜💕

 

 



Author's Response:

Expect the unexpected with me lol Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

i hope Michael will save her



Author's Response:

me too but don't worry, he has a plan. Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

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