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Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Flashing lights could reveal your past, present and future....

So the plan is for Doc and Michael to go back to 1975 and 1978 to erase Melissa's footsteps and meanwhile Samantha has to stay behind and try to seduce Dangerous Era Michael! :O Things are about to get even crazier lord have mercy! Lmfaaaaooo

xx Toni



Author's Response:

crazier but sexy lmaooo, thank you Toni xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Explanation....

So let me get this straight, Melissa is an obsessed fangirl from the year 2045 who had an affair with a married man (Howard Sorota the head scientist of Global) and his wife Joanne Sorota was the woman who made time traveling possible. But Howard killed Joanne, stole the formula, and tried to sell it for millions of dollars but failed when his mistress (Melissa) stole the formula, drank it, and began time traveling?! *catches breath* lol So Kimberly (daughter of the two scientists) figured out her mother's notes and traveled in time to try and find Melissa so that she could stop her but ended up in 1984 where she met and fell in love with Doc (Samantha's real father) *tries to catch my breath again* lmao So now Doc tried to travel in time but got lost and and couldn't find his way back, until the year 2012 when he created a device (the TV that Samantha's stepfather bought by mistake) but was missing the "fuse" omg omg omg I'm so out of breath right now lmfaoooo I'm trying to keep up! ASGHJGKAHFJAFHGFF SAMANTHA IS A NATURAL BORN TIME TRAVELER AND ITS IN HER BLOOD!!! *faints* Girl this is getting to good! Melissa needs to be stopped Point. Blank. Period. She already caused so much damage by interfering with Michael's life and making him think she was somebody that she really wasn't O__o and now she's after Samantha :(( Well shit, idk what the heck is going to happen now.

Great chapter Hun!! My head is spinning lol but I loved it lmaoo

xx Toni :-)



Author's Response:

the more I think about it the more I should have just written that, point blank and the end lmaooo what a mess, huh?

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Unanswered Questions....

WTF Melissa is from the future too? O__O asjghjkajdjsff you tricked us lmaaooo Iike, I never expected that! I can't wait to see what happens next!

xx Toni :-)



Author's Response:

Toni!! You missed a lot, huh? lol yes, she is...a lot more surprises still to come, stay tuned xoxo

Reviewer: Missbabyblue333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 08:56 am Title: Chapter 24 - Flashing lights could reveal your past, present and future....

Love it can't wait to read the next part!!! :)



Author's Response:

next part is up, enjoy! thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2014 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

Update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

new chapter is up now, enjoy!! thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: thelostchild143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2014 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Flashing lights could reveal your past, present and future....

WHEEEEWWWW!!! I LOOOOVVVVEEE IIITTT!!! Lol



Author's Response:

Yay!! lol I'm so glad, thank you for reading and reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2014 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Flashing lights could reveal your past, present and future....

What the hell is going onnnnnnnnn???!!!!!! Omg! He did not! I need to know to! This is driving me insane! He is gonna stop younger Sam in the past? Lol! Omg! And I did my own time travel plot on a roleplay! It was fun and dramatic as hell! Lmao! Hurry up and update soon Gil! You're killing me! Lmao!



Author's Response:

lmaooo you did your own role play? do you do it by yourself or with others? I wish I could have seen it. New update is up now, enjoy! xoxo

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2014 11:31 am Title: Chapter 24 - Flashing lights could reveal your past, present and future....

I wonder what Michael is planning on doing as well can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

you don't have to wait any longer, new chapter is up, enjoy! thanks for reading and the review! xoxo

Reviewer: MAR7012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2014 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Explanation....

wow... this should be a movie. Nice! 



Author's Response:

Wow! Really? That's amazing you feel that way, maybe one day it will *wink* thanks for reading and the review! xoxo

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2013 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Explanation....

A little confusing but I think I got it in the end. :)



Author's Response:

aww At least you were able to get it at the end, thanks for reading and the review :))

Reviewer: Missbabyblue333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Explanation....

Love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Yay!! I'm glad, thank you!!

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

Lol your welcome girl o and I saw your name is Andrea believe it or not andrea is my first name lol I'm from jersey born and raised there but my mom is Puerto Rican lol. :) yes my island is the most beautiful island next to Manhattan lmao!:)



Author's Response:

is it really? It's always cool to meet another Andrea lol...ahh gotcha. We are not too far away from each other. I love PR, been there plenty of times and yes, Manhattan is one of a kind lol

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

Lmao omg your welcome well I'm isabel I'm 20 puerto Rican and I should tell u I review to roleplay and I used time traveling mike so I was so in love with your plot lol don't worry I didn't use it but my plot for the roleplay was when he traveled from the past to the future and MeT...well me....lmao! Just thus story is so creative.



Author's Response:

lol oh cool...Hi Isa who's 20 from Puerto Rico lol. My boyfriend is Puerto Rican. I've been there, beautiful island...Now I feel old but I'm 28 from NYC ( .__.) .... lmaooo I love your role playing dream, that's a great plot. Who wouldn't want Mike to come from the past and bump into you or vice versa....i know if I had the chance, I would want Dangerous era Mike. I have such a weakness for that era tho I love him in all *blush*....thank you so much, that really means a lot to me.

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

Girl!!!! I'm telling u hurry up! Lol! I was freaking out when I saw u updated this story I was like hell yeah!!!! Lmao!



Author's Response:

lmaoooo I'm trying...I will try to have the next chapter up much quicker and aww, that's sweet of you to get excited, makes me feel famous lmao

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 11:57 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Explanation....

Oooommmggggggggggg!!!!!!!!! This can't be real! Let me get this straight! Sam is a born time traveler born in the 80s her mom was born in the future and traveled to the past for revenge and Melissa ran away and went time traveling then met Michael because she was a crazed fan and will do anything to prevent michael and her from breaking up and is after Sam to use her blood so she won't go back to 2045. And doc wants to erase Melissa's flaws in the time travel and Sam's but if they erase their foot prints then they erase his memories and Sam's and the child they conceived together. What to do?!!!!!! Lmao!



Author's Response:

lmaooooooo that pretty much sums it up. I should have just wrote that for a chapter lol jk....yes, what to do is right! lmaooo more to come soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing xoxo

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