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Reviewer: polka216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2013 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Talk....

Great story!! Cant wait for an update!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! will try to update soon xoxo

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Talk....

Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! will try to update soon xoxo

Reviewer: karamarinas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2012 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Talk....

Ooh...update soon please! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! working on a new chapter xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2012 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 5 - The Talk....

Dammit just when Samantha and Michael were FINALLY having a moment alone Frank had to inturrupt :/

Michael sure was asking a lot of questions hmmmm lol and I wonder what he mean't by “Do you like it there?” hmmmm again!

I can see Samantha falling for Michael already Omgggg I cannot wait to read more, more, more LMAO this is getting to good :-)

Bring on the juicyness hahahaha XD

Luv ya xoxoxoxo Toni

Author's Response:

LOL IKR damn Frank...they will get to know each other better in the next chapter ;)

Michael is a curious guy, isn't he? XD

Bringing on the juicyness hahah

luv ya more xoxo

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The New Plan....

This is going to be interesting to see if Samantha can save Michael in 9 days, its not a lot of time but hopefully she can help change the future :-)

Oh snap Michael is starting to become interested in Samantha, I can't wait to see whats gonna happen next!! I'm loving this ^_^

Luv ya Drea

xoxoxoxoxo

Author's Response:

I was going to put 7 days but 1) that seem too short and 2) it reminded me too much of the movie The Ring and that freaked me out LMAO!!

Yesss, MJ is interested in her so like I said it gets crazy from here. The Michael and Samantha interactions begin after this XD

Luv ya more Toni

xoxo

PS I remembered after I wrote this chapter that you told me you never seen the Back to the future movies LOL maybe now you will XD

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2012 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

I think she should stay and try to help him I know I would. :)

Author's Response:

It's such a hard decision. But Samantha is smart and she knows what to do. I promise you it will get juicier from here. Thanks hun xoxo

Reviewer: Gigi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2012 04:34 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

Update soon hun. Interested to see where you take this.
And that's a hard question. I wnat her to stay so they fall in love but I don't want him to die so soon. Maybe you could make her leave, but try an alternate way to change the story so it works out for them and they can be together. I like happy endings, even though I don't always write them myself. lol

Author's Response:

Hey hun, a new chapter is up now. However, I will be updating soon with more. I promise it will get juicy.... just getting some stuff out of the way. And me too, I love happy endings and your sad/angry moments in your stories get to my heart but I love every minute of it lol Thanks hun for the review xoxo

Reviewer: Gigi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2012 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

I love this. I love the storyline;so different.

Author's Response:

Thank you!! That means so much to me coming from you

Reviewer: Gigi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2012 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

I love this. I love the storyline;so different.

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

*Dramatic gasp* Omfggg!!! this is so crazy I'm like freaking out right now lol

So if she stays Michael will live to only be 35 :(((

But if she leaves his future will be as it was before.

Decisions, Decisions.

I think she needs to talk to Michael first of all and second maybe she can help save Michael from the tragic day in the future, I'm just.... *sigh* this is going to be a tough one. But I'm sure whatever happens next is going to be great :) I can't wait to see where you take us (the readers) next.

I'm Lovingggggg this girl and I hope this goes beyond 10 chapters :-)

Much Luv

AMA

Author's Response:

I know it got crazy. Decisions decisions lol

Like I told you, I promise it gets juicier from here XD

love ya!! xoxo

 

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 2 - She Got It....

Michael must be feeling Samantha since he chose her over Lisa Dean for his Dirty Diana video ;)

Lmao omg she did not travel back in time in her pj's and without a dang bra smdh *Britney Spears voice* "Oops I Did it Again" hahaha

I was ctfu when Samantha and Karen were having the convo about the thrift shop lol

"He's very secretive about Vinny"

Lmfao that just sounds like something I'd say tbh XD

and the pic looks great of Michael & Samantha :-)

Great Chapter Drea ^_^

xoxoxoxo

Author's Response:

Michael got a good look at the legs and was hooked LOL Lisa Dean eat your heart out

and Yes she did, this girl is a mess lol

LOL I was googling stuff and name of malls around Riverside, CA so it could sound more real and that mall came up, the thrift shop I made up but I couldn't stop laughing as I pictured Samantha so nervous as she told her story XD

Thanks Toni xoxo :)

Reviewer: ALLFORLOVE77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 03:52 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

Awww, now she has to leave him... But it's for his own good... :(

And yeah, i think that you should extend it more than 10 chapters!!! 

I really love it!!! Hope you update soon

Much lovee



Author's Response: aww thanks. I will definitely keep that in consideration when I'm thinking about extending the story. Thanks for reading as well. And the new chapter is up. Samantha has a new plan. :) xoxo

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2012 12:40 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Bad News...

Hey Hun I loved the update...I cant believe it wow I dont know what she should do it would be cool for her to stay but then it would be bad for Michael but it would be harder if she stayed ...decisions decisions lol lol wow ...cant wait to see how it turns out I hope u update soon and it would be cooler if u let the story go longer than 10 but whatever you decide is cool with me cant wait to see what she decides to do :)

Author's Response:

lol yes decisions decisions. New chapter is up now so we will find out what Samantha is planning to do. Thanks for the review and for reading :)

Reviewer: Who is it Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2012 03:44 am Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....

omggg great story!!! continueee please!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! xoxo

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2012 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 2 - She Got It....

wow hun great update ....I loved it cant wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! new chapter is now up. :))

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