[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2013 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
soooo GOOD! Can't wait to see an update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! New update is up now :) Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2013 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Ahhhh shit Michael is going to flip if Samantha is pregnant Fuckkkkkkkk this is going to get crazy -____-
Liz and Sam's convo at the party had me cracking up "Ok, Samantha who will turn 30 in April..." I HOLLERED LMAOOOO I love her she's she straightforward *___*
Damn Michael and Melissa ending their love affair I didn't see that coming :/
Geez now I can't wait for part 2!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO Can you imagine telling Mike you are pregnant with his child but in his mind he knows he hasn't made love to you since '88, 2 years ago!!??? LOL!! *cues Billie Jean* but the kiiiiiddddddd is not my son! LOL Samantha has a dilemma in her hands which you could understand her fear to tell him and Mike is sure not making it easy for her.
Liz doesn't beat around the bush lol and poor Sam, she was standing in front of Liz Taylor!! She was nervous, give her a break and is hard when you are traveling thru time and you have to blend in to your surroundings. :)
Part 2 is up, enjoy! :)
Thanks Toni xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2013 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Omg like omg. Like shiiiieeet, this chapter is full of goodies. First Michael is an ass lol But I'm glad that he left his sex buddy. 2) Omgggggg she is preggo. This is crazy though, idk how this is going to work... I wonder how 90s Michael is going to take it or what she is going to tell him. She sure cant hide it, but I hope Michael doesn't treat her like a whore cuz the girl doesn't deserve it. 3) Im looking forward to see how Michael treats and acts towards Sam now that he is single.
Author's Response:
lol Michael is acting like an ass but he has trust issues and right now he don't know what to make of Samantha's sudden return. Is tough to just tell MJ about the baby because according to him they haven't slept together since '88 so this shall get interesting lol. We'll see how it goes. Thanks hun for the review :))
Date: Jun 09, 2013 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Yoooo I'm lovin this!!!! If she's preggo by "this is it" mike I'm done!!! Dats sum crazy ish!
Author's Response:
LOOOOLLL !! This is it Mike was no joke but how do you explain it to Dangerous Mike, is the question ... :/ thanks for the review <333
Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:47 am Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Omg omg omg I think I died of awesomeness. O.O :3 update soon pleeeaassseee XDXDXD
Author's Response:
LOL!! Come back to life!!! New chapter is up now. Enjoy! <333
Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:47 am Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Omg omg omg I think I died of awesomeness. O.O :3 update soon pleeeaassseee XDXDXD
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:33 am Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Wow yeah I wonder how mike gone take that lol.
Author's Response:
lol I guess we have to wait and find out, huh? thanks for the review hun xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:29 am Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
Awww.....see, if I had any problem with melissa before (which i didn't) I certainly have NONE now.
For someone who is trying to make a name of themselves, being married to MJ means you will contstnaly be compared to him. Look as LMP. "Oh, she's not as talented as Michael, she's only big because she was his wife, etc, etc, etc..." when in reality there is so much more to her than that. I can completly understand melissa's feelings, and why love sometimes just isn't enough to get through such a painful rift like that.
It's good that they remain friends. I know she may always be number 1 in his heart, but Samantha doesn't seem like the type with the ambition Mel has, so there's a better chance of Sam and Mike working out. At least, I hope so.
Ah, well...it didn't have to last forever to be worthwhile. RIP MelxMike. :)
Author's Response:
Melissa is not a bad person. Mike and she are just two different people that couldn't figure out how to establish a relationship together. Yes, you are right. No matter who Michael married, it seemed like the wife was scrutunized for every little thing. It must not have been easy for LMP.
Yes, Melissa might be number one in his heart and you never forget your first love but sometimes things are not meant to be and sometimes you find something even greater than the last one.
"but Samantha doesn't seem like the type with the ambition Mel has" <--there's more to Samantha than you think. You will soon find out :)
lol yes RIPMelxMike
Thanks for the review xoxo
Date: Jun 09, 2013 10:24 am Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
1990 Mike is acting like such an ass! Honestly, what climbed in his butt? I like 1988 and This is It Mike better than him right now. But it's understandable why he's acting this way after Samantha disappearing out of the blue and then coming back.
Author's Response:
LOL Mike is acting like an ass but he has so many emotions going on right now. This sudden reappearance of Samantha has caught him off guard. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: Jun 09, 2013 09:07 am Title: Chapter 16 - Elizabeth's Party (Part 1)
oh wow she is so wrong i hope Michael will give her a chance
Author's Response:
Yeah. She is suffering a dilemma. Is hard to just tell him when in his mind they haven't slept together since 1988. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2013 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....
Please write more this is my favorite story!!!!
Author's Response:
aww thank you. New chapter is up and more to come soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2013 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....
Please write more this is my favorite story!!!!
Date: May 30, 2013 05:55 am Title: Chapter 15 - Deceitful Eyes, She Got Those 'Come Get Me' Thighs....
More! MORE!
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command! XD New chapter is up and more to come soon :)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2013 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Deceitful Eyes, She Got Those 'Come Get Me' Thighs....
Oop! 90's Mike is such an ass :/
Awwww he made Sam cry :'(( what a jerk
Wow Sam has to either be dumb to sit there and take all that or she really does love this man (I'd say a lil bit of both) lmaooo
Welp hopefully Mike will start treating Sam nicer cause..... omggggg I knew it! She's knocked up lmaooo why else would she be looking all pale and feeling sick Hmmmm? this could get complicated Lawddd
Great chapter Bew :) I can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
lmao everyone is calling 1990 MJ an ass. He is very stubborn, yes. But can you blame him? He thinks she walked out on him. He doesn't want to get hurt. He is just protecting himself.
lol Sam knew she would meet a bitter man when she went back in time but yes she does love him which is why she tolerates it but she won't tolerate it for too long, I promise.
Yes a pregancy could complicate things especially when 1990 era MJ knows "he' hasn't have sex with her recently. He'll be singing Billie Jean all over again. lol!!
Thanks bew xoxo
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2013 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - Believe....
When I read the first chapter I automatically fell in love with this story. The way you write makes me believe that I'm the girl Samantha in your story. You describe everything in great detail and those scenes between Michael and Sam, you know, the "scenes" were perfect, haha. I'm like you though. I started listening to Michael when I was 2, now I'm 17. He's a big impact on my life and I feel that you wrote him perfectly in your story. Also I love the idea of time travel. I myself wrote a Michael Jackson time travel story. Maybe if I want people to read it ill put it on here. But anyway fantastic job on your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
-Makayla Juliet :)
Author's Response:
Hi Makayla,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read the story. I'm so thrilled that you have enjoyed it so far.
"The way you write makes me believe that I'm the girl Samantha in your story. You describe everything in great detail and those scenes between Michael and Sam, you know, the "scenes" were perfect, haha" <---That's my goal. I love to read stories that could make you feel as if you are in the story. I think is important for the readers to feel the emotions the characters feel.
Aww that's so amazing. Michael is my everything. I'm glad you got to know him at an early age as well. I was 2 during the beginning of the BAD era so the BAD album made me a moonwalker for life. :) I love to hear that MJ is still impacting the world with his music and that new fans are showing up. He will still be known for years and decades to come. :)
You are a writer? So you understand the crazy mind of writing :)
Thanks for the review xoxo