Date: Nov 25, 2023 07:32 pm Title: The Meeting
This is so adorable ;_; I feel like you really captured Michael's precious innocence very well. If I could give one small criticism (since you asked), it would be that I wasn't sure if Michael came - I saw that Prince did. I also read REALLY quickly though so it's entirely possible that in my excitement I missed it. Either way, I loved this a lot ^_^!
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2021 07:56 am Title: The Meeting
I absolutely LOVE this story, great job!
Date: Oct 29, 2020 05:19 am Title: The Meeting
I loved !! Prince and Michael together are absolutely everything!
I just think Michael was very innocent and even lost his value as an artist. Many close people, rappers and comedians who were his friends mention that he was not as innocent and harmless as most people.
Either way, for your first fanfic, it was amazing and beautiful. Please wait and do more, you are amazing!
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2019 05:38 am Title: The Meeting
This is your first fanfic? You are a very skilled writer, great sense of imagery. Hope you can continue this story.
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2018 07:12 am Title: The Meeting
Love this ship and this work, only thing that bothered me was how all the writing is in bold
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 10:08 am Title: The Meeting
Great. Really loved the story: )
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 12:37 am Title: The Meeting
Very hot!!!
Date: May 14, 2013 12:27 pm Title: The Meeting
Dayum...just dayum...hehe xxx
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2012 05:23 pm Title: The Meeting
Looooooooved it! That was hot I've got to be honest with you. And I know what you mean, there isn't a lot of MJ/Prince fics out there, so I'm glad you made one!
Author's Response:
hehe, thank you! :)
yeah, i just wish there were more of them too, or even prince slash alone, btu i cant even find prince fic. ANYWHERE??!?!?! what is up with that man? gesshhh... sorry im gong on a rant here.. :P
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2012 12:49 am Title: The Meeting
This chapter was very Good!!! Especially the Sex Scene. Pleease continue.
Author's Response:
haha, thank you! the sex scene was the who point to the story.. :S im such as little perv! i wasnt planning on continuing actually, dont have the time and i dont feel confident writing a long story.. but who knows, maybe when i dont have billions of coursework/revision to do then i may try and add more! :)
xx
Date: Nov 11, 2012 08:18 pm Title: The Meeting
Yea! You should write more Michael slash. I really think you wrote this story quite accurately. I am bias, of course, being a total fag for Michael, but that's just what I sense from him! And I know a lot of chicks who love slash. I try to spew a few of these stories myself.
Keep on rockin it!
Author's Response:
hehe, im glad we have gays in the community too! YAAIII haha, sorry, but there is something about gays guys that turns me on so badly.. :S so hot! lol and there is something about slash fic that is so hot and exciting, you know. im sick of reading the same old girl met guy kind of stories all the time, it gets repetitive. does that make me a freak..? omg! i just looked at your stories, and im planning on reading them ALL! actually, i did read "boy candy" a few weeks ago- GREAT story, very hot!! lol.
anywho, cheers for writing a review, really appreciate it! take care :) xx
Date: Nov 11, 2012 08:10 pm Title: The Meeting
Heheh, that was incredibly cute and awesome. c:
Author's Response:
thank you very much! :) xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2012 07:22 am Title: The Meeting
This was really HOT. And this is your first fiction here? Good job! I hope you write more stories! ;)
I totally loved this one!
Author's Response:
cheers for the kind words :) yes this is my first story! hehe x
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2012 03:41 am Title: The Meeting
Wow please continue when you can.
Author's Response:
well this was meant to be a short story to see how it went, so i dont know if i will actually write any more, though it is left at such an odd point i know! :S but thank you for the comment, maybe if i have time i will add a little to it. xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2012 03:36 am Title: The Meeting
LOVED IT!!! You're writing style is ridiculous!! (In a good way I meant lol) This was very well written and that's what makes it sooooooooo special and worth reading! Great job! I commend you to continue soon! 😊
Author's Response:
omg, that means so much to me, thank you! ive alway had a low self esteem when it comes to creative writing or just english all together. haha, it took only took me all night to write it.. ! but i really appreciate your comment, cheers xxx :) u made my day hehe