Date: Jul 31, 2015 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 16
Nice start to the party.
Date: Jul 31, 2015 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 15
What goes around comes around!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 14
Really scary evil people. It's time to fight back!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
Sorry to hear about the passing of your family friend. My uncle who was also my godfather also passed last week. I send you my sincere sympathy.
Date: Jul 31, 2015 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great Michael loves Regina! Regina loves Michael. Miranda is going to help them get back together. And at least one of them can go to college and get their lives back together! Great job writing!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
Now make a plan to get an innocent revenge on Alicia!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
He finally listened and smarteñed up. Great job!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Mean girls can be really treacherous! The story is really good. I enjoy reading it!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I cant wait to find out what Alicia did to Regina.
Date: Jul 31, 2015 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like suspense.
Date: Jul 31, 2015 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
I enjoyed the story. Please continue writing more stories after this one!
Date: Jul 31, 2015 09:02 am Title: Chapter 4
There are always troublemakers ready to interfere in every relationship. The enemy is always at work. I guess trouble is a big motivator in making a person conscious and willing to fight to make life fair and just.
Date: Jul 30, 2015 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good job easing him into feeling comfortable enough to ask her out to dinner! When you want to be in a relationship with someone you cannot let other people interfere or interrupt with your plans.
Date: Jul 30, 2015 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it a lot.He wants to get home so that he can be with someone that he feels comfortable with and feels that he has a relationship and close feelings for. Good job. I enjoy your writing and story styles! Please keep writing!