Date: Feb 04, 2011 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Whoa didn't see that coming!
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2011 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
LOL nice! Prince is hilarious!
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2011 10:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Haha dang they were tryin to rape michael
Great job, cnt wait for th next.
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2011 01:03 am Title: Prologue
wow.. to be completley honest with when i read the first chapter of this story i was grossed out and wasn't gonna read any more. but i somehow ended up reading the rest and, damn! i love it!
haha, update soon girl!
Date: Jan 12, 2011 12:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Oddly enough, I'm not turned off from this story! XD. I love this story! especially this chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2011 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg this is a very unique story line haahhaa
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2011 11:38 pm Title: Prologue
Danggg this is good hahah,
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2011 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
O__O
WOAH. It is wrong to find this... hot? xD
Keep it going!! :D
Author's Response: ^w^ Thank you so much!!!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2011 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I dunno why you made Prince and Michael have a rivalry. This is hard to read because I love both people and my favorite is dead. I'm sorry. Just hearing Prince call my baby 'white boy' really pissed me off. And I read these stories for grief relief not to get sad. Maybe I'll try and catch up with your story once Prince is out of the way. If he stays in the story, I can't read it. But it was very well-written by the way. Just too much pain remains inside my heart concerning MJ. And I can't read about Prince dogging my baby for his vitiligo. Not at all.
Author's Response: I completely understand. And I'm really, very sorry if I made you upset. Thank you for reading this anyway, though. I appreciate it:) I love them both as well, and I really didn't mean to offend anyone. I only used the term to make it more authentic, and to heighten the mood. I hate it when people dog Michael about his vitiligo, too, so I totally understand how you feel. Thank you for expressing your feelings, though. <3