[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2012 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 30 : Don't mess with my man
Ugh I so did not like how Lisa called her Benji wtf?? She just jealous cause Bev had him first lisa is already getting on my nerves already & Michael better not be cheating on bev I can't believe this. & btw I love Bev's outfit like always lolz & oh if you want you can also checkout my other story The Verge it's really good & pretty deep to It's been on the site for a few months it may grow on you like Stuck did. Lolz. & I can't wait 4 more! <3
Author's Response:
I wanted Lisa to be nice but then i was like, fuck, we need some DRAMAAAAA. Lisa is jealous you're right. I mean, she had Michael and lost him when he saw Beverly again. I would have been angry too haha. Michael better not, you're right. She dragged herself to England for him so he better be real good to her! Oh yeah, i want to read it too! Just let me do my homework and i'm starting it! Stuck is one of my favorite story on the site and i hope it would be the case or The Verge too :)
Date: Nov 24, 2012 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 30 : Don't mess with my man
OH HAYLE NAWL ... ! How u gone stop right there. Wen u gonna update again?
Author's Response:
HAHAH. I love me some cliffhanger ;)
I really don't know because I am workng on another story called "Like a moth to a flame" (actually I have a plot now, check it if you want) and i'm not done with the first chapter, and there's is university but i will be back next weekend or sooner. Anyway stay tuned!
And tell me! What do you think will happen next? I want to know your opinion :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 29 : Adorn
Yes lolz my ex did believe 4 a bit but then the last minute he said "I know you didn't remember the whole time your a bad actress when it comes to confessing to me." He was just dispointed but wasn't mad I thought he was gonna flip. He had said he could tell that I didn't remember cause he had 2 be the one 2 bring it up first & that I didn't mention it. He was making such a big deal I was geesh dude relax I was really young tho I was at least 21 & still checking out other guys I settled down for 6 years with this dude but what's ment 2 be was just ment 2 be. We still talk once in a while but not all like that thank God I moved on from him I been doing great for 2 years without him I saw him have his new girlfriends come & go& he can't even keep a girl anymore xD oops I'm gossping 2 much. I moved on & met differen't guys to but I didn't jump there bones like a hornball XD. I did meet a nice guy tho he is 2 sweet & reminds me so much of michael but I take my time with him...I can't jump in relationships like that anymore...love is hard girl...moving but yeah I like dream girls 2 :) I 4got 2 mention that. & netflix is like a movie site you could rent movies,tv shows,reality series, or just order the monthly package which very cheap $7.99 not a bad price tons of verious movies to watch all u gotta do is create an account & pay one monthly fee. <3
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA! He can't keep a girl? You were his BJ girl ;)!
I FREAKING LOVE DREAMGIRLS! I know al the song and i must have seen the movie like 10th tie! Even though I love Beyonce, i have to admit that she is not as good as an actress as she is as a singer! But hey you can't have evrything!
Ouuh! That's cool! I believe we have this in France too!
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 29 : Adorn
Omgosh Bev is always an emotional wreck I remember when she use 2 never cry or anything Michael sure put some motion back into her. I was glad she got 2 see him & she got away with wearing those disguises & really Mike needs 2 meet her family 2 must I add & that lovemaking was soooo hot & steamy they went so long without & I can't believe they talked about who they had sex with xD & Michael is the first one 2 bring it up asking her about her cherrie's. Lolz It made almost didn't want a cherry that was funny. & I loved how michael was happy that she screamed his name without him even having 2 mention it 2 her. & they way she said he sounds sexy when he swears. I bet he does sounds sexy when he swears ;) Lolz that was hot & I love the title of the chapter girl!! Adorn omg my sister will flip when I tell her this. She loves everything with Miguel involved in it. & man wtf lisa wants? *rolls eye's.* & I love BJ's outfit I always love her clothes & u used Cassie's pictures to & Michael he looks smexy as always :D oh btw my next chapter will be pretty long since I won't be updating 4 awhile either work is about 2 kick my ass soon xD but I will be back again updating once I have my breaks again. I have thanksgiving off but I ain't doing nothing but stuffing my face & watch netflix all day & wait 4 bad25 documenery come on I can't freacking wait! & I hope to read more soon I loved this chapter shoot I love every chapter. <3
Author's Response:
Yeah you're right! Michael is bringing the best of her. She used to hide her feelings because she thought it was a proof of weakness but Mike finally stole her cool ;). Even though she doesn't really enjoy crying like a baby in front of him, it's good to see that she shows her emotions!
Beverly never introduced Michael to her parents because she wasn't even sure that she was planning n spending the rest of her life with him, but things are different now and you're absolutely right, it's time for BJ to do that. It will be a proof for Michael that she is really committed with him.
Haha thanks! It's always a little bit awkward to write sex scenes because the reader has to be able to visualize it and everything... Mike is utterly jealous and he is hurt that BJ moved on after their break up when is was mourning. But hey! She is young and beautiful, what is he thinking? That she would have wait for him until the end of time? NO WAY!
I bet he sonds sexy when he swears too! Let's listen to "This time around" to hear him saying "shit" haha! And for your story, if you want to know how the word "bitch" sound in Michael voice, listen to Morphine ;)
I was actually listening to Miguel and since I couldn't find a right title, i simply named it "Adorn"! Hahaha i should shout out to you and your sister whenever i mention Miguel ;)
We all want to know what Lisa wants! And since Mike told BJ that he used to date, I bet she is not going to be happy about her presence! Let's see
Me too! I won't be able to update soon because of my homework! I will probably write a chapter during the week end and publish it next week.
I'm so eager for the BAD25 documentary too! Beverly Johnson is going to be interviewed tooooo! Freaking amazing!
Thank you girl and I hope you'll update Stuck very sooooooooon, I can't wait ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 28 : Kiss Of Life
Haha max is cute & that was funny when she said "He's like a girlfriend with a penis." XD I was laughing so much at that. & it's true I use food 4 comfort and watching netflix all day whenever I'm off. I think bev shouldn't beat herself up all that bad about not being the best girlfriend. No couple I perfect shoot I use 2 4get about my ex boyfriends stuff 2 xD he mentioned we had a anniversey once & I had no idea I never even thought once about it :P I had 2 pretend like I remember. Lolz I'm glad michael is ok with this at least she is considerate enough to mention her mistakes most bf/gf's wouldn't own up 2 there misteaks. No one wants 2 be wrong. & I feel so bad for michael & what he had to go through & with those accusations being hooked to drugs & that Tom Sneddon smh....I'm glad Liz was there 4 him tho in real life but in the story I'm glad he has bev by his side to. I can see he really does appreciate her I hope they do one day get married and have the next generation of the Jackson XD maybe like 12 to 14 kids. XD that's a lot of Jackson's right there. I hope everything turns out alright tho. Yay! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey girl! Like usual thank you for reviewing, rating and reading!
I felt like Chris needed a man but a an who can be friends with BJ as well. So ladies and gentleman, Max! Netflix? Never heard of that. I should do soe research about that haha. I do too, food is such a great comforter :). HAHAHA! Did your boyfriend believe it? BJ doesn't think it's necesarry but since everybody know that his birthday but her she felt terrible. Yeha you're right, all Mike whant is BJ! I wish he had a woman like her in his life during this period but i'm glad that Liz was there to support him. HAHAHA! BJ's body is not even ready for a child, so 14? No way! But who knows, Mike is very persuasive!
Date: Nov 20, 2012 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 29 : Adorn
Now WHY would you stop THERE ??? I want more!
Author's Response:
Just a little cliffhanger haha. I will not be able to upadate until next week, that's why i've post a super long chapter. But don't worry, the rest next week or as soon as possible. Stay tuned ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Reunion pt 1
Great so far! I like it. Michael just doesn't give up :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Not confusing i hope?
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 28 : Kiss Of Life
D: I've gotta go so this review won't be too long ahah-
I found it beyond adorable how Michael said it didnt matter that she'd forgotten his birthday-
"You care for me, you're always there for me and you're my strength. When you left me I was weak and worthless. You're the reason why I'm alive. I wake up every morning knowing that I'm going to spend the rest of my life with you. I can't wait for you to be my wife and the mother of children. I'm blessed. Don't you dare forget about it woman!"
I'm crying at this sweetness.
----- THAS ME BEING OVERWHELMED BY IT XD
But omg the end of the chapter; that was unexpected! I hope Michael is OK... Hmmm... Those years were hard for him in real life, I know that for a fact :'(
I can't wait for more, update soon love! :)) , <33
Author's Response:
Yeah that was cuuuuuuuuuuute! She needed to know that it was stupid to worry about meaningless stuff.
LMAOOOOOOOOO, I'm laughing so hard at your gif! It's like 1 a.m. In France and I am laughing like crazy!!!
You're crazy hahahaha!
Yeah, i wanted to talk about what really happen, so I had to talk about the rehab :/
You'll se at the next chapters :)
THAT GIF IS KILLING ME!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 27 : Decode
Lmfao the whole Prince part :')
This was wayyyy too cute :D
I can't wait to see what Michael has planned. ^.^ , <33
Author's Response:
BJ and Prince! HAHAHAH! Mike is mad but he needs to understand that being a fangirl isn't that easy haha! She loves to tease him about it because Mike reactions are just too cute!
Heheh, you'll see soon ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 26 : Heartbreak hotel
I LOVE DESTINY. OMG The album is on repeat with me currently, HIGH FIVE XD
Haha this chapter was too sweet. Michael and them damn bedroom eyes. BJ better look away and snap them thoughts out her head before she gets sucked in, hehe.
, <3
Author's Response:
Me tooooooooo! This album is actually my favorite, every song is perfect and I freaking love Michael's voice on this one! And the Destiny Tour >>>>>> HIGH FIVE
You're right! BJ needs to look away because she knows what will happen next if she holds his gaze!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 25 : The thrill
LOL... I'm sorry but BJ was in fact actually hiding someone in the closet, then she gets mad on Roshans ass!? Thats messed up lmfaaao I found that amusing... :P It would have been awkward if he did see Michael haha.
DAMN THAT PICTURE... EXCUSE ME WHILE I ASDFGHLKA. He looks so beautiful, I can't even. Thats one of my fave pictures from the Dangerous era :')
I wonder what'll happen next *.* , <3
Author's Response:
HAHAHA, Indeed BJ is crazy for this one but if Michael was still in the closet, she was ready to face the consequences! Thank God, Michael was smart enough to hid somewhere else!
Actually BJ was trying to find a way to leave Rosho and that was the perfect ocsasion... Bad huh?
I knoooow! He is so beautiful even without his make up! Perfeeeeect *BJsvoice*
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 : Where's the fun in forever?
Woop I think I'm the 100th reviewer!? XD
Omg Whoa so she refused! Roshan certainly wasnt messing around... And haha I was about to say "Chris is a genius!"... And then Michael turns up (well come on, it must be Michael ahah) ^_^ I loved that twist...
On to the next one!! *Jay Z voice* (I'm referring to the next chapter btw hehe) ^.^ , <3
Author's Response:
CONGRATULATIONS TO MY 100TH REVIEWER! Yay! Thank you so much, i don't think, i would have reach 100 reviews without you!
Yup, she said no :/. I don't think marrying someone that insecure and jealous was on her plans. Well, if he can't trust her then bye bye!
Hahah Chris knows better, trust me haha :)
Jay-Z's fan too? Girl you are the best!
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 23 : Best thing I ever had
Hahaha BJ and Tyra= PERFECTION. (Not as a couple lmfao, but this duo are brilliant XD) I loved their act haha.
But omfg BJ still OBVIOUSLY has feelings for Michael. It made me laugh how he was avoiding her, but she deffo noticed. It hurt her, because he still owns her heart! I wonder if it was easy for Michael to do that... Was it an act or...? :P
That performance is boss as usual for Michael ahah.
Omg Roshan wants BJ to marry him... *Gasps* (I avoided using 'le' haha) Obviously she's gonna say yes because of one of the previous chapters haha ;p but I understand why he wants her to... He senses the love BJ has for Michael and he wants non of that.
Such an eventful chapter! You're such a brilliant writer, and your chapters are always so exciting even though you use under 3000 words ^.^ I use like over 4000 and they're never half as eventful hehee
Can't wait to read more XD , <3
Author's Response:
Tyra is fabulous! She is so funny and natural! One of the best supermodel!!
Right! BJ thought she was over him, but it takes one look to be sprung again. Michael knows what is he doing, like DMX said, Michael is a smooth motherf*cker! When he saw that effect he still have on BJ he knew that he could try to get to her again! I was easy for Michael beause he knew that it's only a matter of time before she fall in love with him again. And this time harder! Trust me he enjoyed it
Even sitting, Michael is the best of both world. Period.
Roshon is so insecure! I mean if i was dating a girl as beautiful as BJ i would to. But until the Soul Train, she never did a thing to hurt Roshon. I can't blame him to be a little bit jealous of the chemistry between BJ and Mike too ;)
Thank you Thank you!! I always try to write chapter longer but as long as there is dramaaa, the size doesn't matter ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2012 02:52 pm Title: Flashback - April to January 1991
YES FINALLY, I AM ABLE TO READ THIS. XD
Ohmgg, I actually forgot how much I missed reading this story, what has it been, like over a week? Haha :3
Anyways oh my Lawd, did Michael actually expect a warm welcoming!? LOL He must be out of his damn mind. I'm glad BJ didnt go all soppy on him and she stood up like that.
It shows him she can't just be abandoned and he can't rely her to be there for him just when he has the time.
Ah I'm glad there are a few chapters already up. :3
, <3
Author's Response:
WELCOME BACK!!
Yeah it's been so long! A week? Feels like ages! Anyway, I'm glad you back and on time because I added a new chapter a couple of minutes ago :). Enjoy your reading :)
Exactly! Michael take her for granted. He thinks that now that they are engaged he can simply leave her at house and expect her to be happy when he grace her with his presence! You done lost yo motherfucking mind! *Beyoncesvoice*. BJ is fed up and even though she is madly in love, she is not stupid! She knows her worth and she deserves better!
Date: Nov 18, 2012 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 27 : Decode
Thx so much 4 updating... More soon plz!
Author's Response:
Of course hun ;) !