[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2012 08:01 am Title: Chapter 4 : Shine ya light
I knew it was the Grammys :D
Michael was carressing her thigh during the limo ride.. DAMN LIKE HOW DID SHE NOT DIE FROM THAT? XD
I woulda legit passed out.
And haha, Karens sour ass. She just mad she doesnt look as good as Beverly, and Michael ain't giving her the eye. :P
Hope to see this story updated soon. I simply adore it! When I update my story, I'm certainly gonna spread word about this story because its amazing and brilliantly written.
Much love , <33
Author's Response:
LMFAO. I freaking love the gif you used! HAHAHA!
Well, BJ is not starstruck by Michael! She is not impressed just curious. Nevertheless that's not the case with Quincy!
Oh yeah Karen! In a lot of story she had that personnality and I just figure out it was more interesting to have a jealous Karen than a friendly Karen. Everybody know she was madly in love with Mike anyway!
I have so much inspiration right now! I already know when and how it's going to end and everything! Actually I am writting another chapter right now!!
Oh waw that so nice of you. I'm so happy that you review my story but i'm more excited about your feedback! I guess I should be clueless because you always guess where i'm going :P!
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2012 07:49 am Title: Chapter 3 : Say yes
XD omg I'm not gonna leave a long review at all; I'm too anxious to read tha next chapter but ah even she didnt have the guts to turn him down then and there. ;) I'm certain Michael had that affect on people, hehe
This is brilliant! , <33
Author's Response:
Yes she is not starstuck but she is quite intimitated by Michael. He is so mysterious! I guess you're right, he must have this effect on people. And Mike is far from unactractive do I guess it was harder for her to turn him down :)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2012 07:34 am Title: Chapter 2 : You can be my vixen
Whaaaa ... I can't believe she wants to turn down the offer to be in his short film, tho I can understand her reasons... Still, I'm with Chris on this one. I mean dude, its Michael freaking Jackson!
Aha, ooohh I wonder who that is at the end ;) jk, can't wait to read the next chapter. Thankfully its already up ^.^
, <33
Author's Response:
Hey girl! I want to thank you for reviewing every single chapters. It means a lot to me because you're giving me positive feedback. I know I made a good job :)
Yeah, she is too ashamed to meet him. But can you guess who is it at the end?HAHA
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1 : The Unexpected
OMG HE WANTS HER IN HIS SHORT FILM.
Damn, she must have had an effect on him.
The part in the elavator when the mysterious guy (MICHAEL ahem) says "I'll definitely pay your bail" omfg haha I loved that part.
I love this, I hope you can update soon because I adore your writing style and I'm already drawn in to this. :))
, <33
Author's Response:
YES HE WANTS HER AS THE LIBERIAN GIRL! But dou you think she will accept ?
Yes! The mysterious guy liked the fact that she is more than just a pretty face. And that dress.. THAT had an effect on him!
Thank you very much! I will try to update many chapters before my exams in December. So if you have any ideas !
Thank YOU very much for the feedback :)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 05:13 am Title: Prologue
GREAT start :D
I love this, I could actually relate to BJ in the middle of the chapter because I'm too darn lazy and always avoiding thinking bout the future lool.
But anyways, I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thank you very much for this review! You're the first to actually review my story and a revie from the author of Michaels P.A !
xoxo Annie :)