[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 12 : Emotional rollercoaster
WHOAAA. OMG.
Dang, eventful chapter --- the least I could say!!
First of all lemme say- I adore Beverly Hills Cop haha, I was actually watching the 3rd one today :') Eddie Murphy never fails to make me smile.
Anyways BJ's right I think; Michael can't flirt with girls then when they respond back, he gets them fired... However as he said, there are 2 sides to the story. Maybe Michael knew she'd kiss him and tried to get her fired on purpose? Idk XD
Tatiana went into a proper loon! (Understandable if you've just been fired but eh) I hope BJ is OK! :O
Damn you gave me a heart attack with the second half of the chapter. ^.^
Can't wait for more, I'm gonna add this to my favourites so I dont miss out on updates XD
By the way, I'm British so thas why I've spelt it as 'favourites', and any other differences you may find in my words may be because of that reason too hehe. Just so you know. :P
I can't wait for more, <33
Author's Response:
Today was a public holiday in France so I wanted to spend more time writting this chapters and ake it bigger and more eventful! I hope you liked it!
Hahaha, that's funny because my mom was actually watching the movie earlier! the first one tho!
"Maybe Michael knew she'd kiss him and tried to get her fired on purpose? Idk XD" <--- Well that's interesting!
Yeah Tatiana went completely CRAZZZZY! And BJ understands why, that's why she didnt PIMP SLAP that chick!
Oh please don't die, much to come!
Oh, its OK. The english we learn at school is the English one, not the american one :)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 11 : Cold shoulder
Whoa!!
I guess this was a big deal to BJ, and the meeting sounded hella boring... Especially if it led her to counting M&Ms lol :P
But omfg the end of the chapter... Wha... Does this mean he's been doing the same to Tatiana or..? I can't wait to read the next chapter now!!
, <33
Author's Response:
I don't know much about modeling but from what i heard if you want to be succesful, you have to be everywhere. It was a chance for her to be more present and to be a SUPERMODEL.
Well you have to read the next chapter to find out ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 10 : Wake up call
LOOOL Oh God! I know she's angry but it's too funny how Michael did that behind her back. I'm sorry XD Haha
Great chapter ^.^
Author's Response:
That's was mean right!! Michael is acting like a douche and if he thinks that she is going to be OK with it he is WRONG
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2012 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 9 : Attraction
Oh and also I forgot to say, she's agreed to be his Liberian Girl; GOOD GOIN MICHAEL ;D
Author's Response:
hahhaha, I really thought you stopped reading at the "let's find it then" part! Yes she finally accepted!
Date: Nov 01, 2012 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 9 : Attraction
LOL Omg I adored this chapter; first off, I can totally understand her reactions to his performances. Phewww, he knew how to make you feel so many emotions in just one concert. Damn I wish I coulda attended Bad! *le cries* No other like him nowdays, or ever come to think of it.
And omg the encounter with Tatiana was so unexpected! Usually in fanfics where she's not the main girl, people make her into a complete bitch, but in this she was the opposite (even though the encounter was merely a minute hehe) BJ is also gorgeous also, so she shouldnt feel bad at all. ;)
I couldnt stop laughing when BJ made up the shirt excuse "somewhere." ahah, then Michaels response "Let's find it then." LOOORD ASDFHJLKA
Ok, I'm done aha XD
Author's Response:
I always find it funny when you guy use "le" HAHAHA! Yes you're right i don't think there is a performer nowayday that we could compare to Michael. The only one I can think of is Miguel, his voice is amazing and i always feel a little something when i listen to his songs!
It was the point. She is always so bitchy and mean and I wanted her to be a nicer. But let's see what will happen at the next encounter. Indeed, BJ is way ore beautiful than Tatiana ( google her, she is a timeless beauty) but when not confident it's hard to see beauty in you.
HAHAHA, the "Let's find it then" is my favorite part too!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2012 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 : Emotional rollercoaster
-_- :O :s :| -my reactions
:D -my reactions to all of the chapters so far.
Your amazing!!!!
Author's Response:
Hahaha! The Emotional rollercoaster i hope you felt it too!
Thank YOU for reading, commenting and rating the story! Stay stuned for some new dramaaaa!
xoxo Annie
Date: Nov 01, 2012 09:45 am Title: Chapter 11 : Cold shoulder
I really like the story, looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing y story. Well stay tuned because I am writting a chapter right now
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 : The Unexpected
Uh ooh mike is starting up now & wow that's a nice dress to.
Author's Response:
Yes you're right, I love me some cocky Michael ;)
If you're wondering the dress is from Bershka!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 08:01 pm Title: PART 1
The chase? XD haha I like that!
Author's Response:
Thank you hun!
This story is probably going to be in 3 part. That's just the beginning ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 07:59 pm Title: Prologue
I really like this, & I will continue to read this to.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Thank you for rating, reading and reviewing my story. I really appreciated and I hope you will like it and read all the chapters. A lot of things are happening in the following chapters and i'm writting another one right know. So stay stuned
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 10 : Wake up call
Hahahahaha she is is so screwed. ____ =D
Author's Response:
Hey! Welcome you new reviewer and thank you so much for rating my story. I hope you like it and stay tuned for another chapter! Very soon ;)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 8 : Back and Forth
Aww, BJ really dislikes Michael now!!
But she still goes to the concert, right?? Haha, I love Michael's persistence in this. :P
Much LOVE , <33
Author's Response:
She is mad at him and more at herself! Sleeping with a guy so early, that's so not her. But as you said it in another review, BJ have an effect on Michael and Michael certainly have an effect on BJ too. She doesn't recognize herself.
Well, if you want to find out, you'll have to wait! I'm actually writting another chapters ;)
Stay tuned
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Reunion pt 2
Waaaawh they had sex omggg.
I love BJs attitude- " But I don't want to surrender to his demand." Haha XD
Phew that was unexpected yet hot ;))
, <33
Author's Response:
Yeees! It was bound to happen, well maybe not that quickly but I needed to find a reason for BJ to be mad at Michael :). Writing sex scenes it's quite awkward but I hope I did well.
Yeeees, the unexpect :)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Reunion pt 1
Whoooaa they're heading for his place
Never saw that coming ahah ;)
On to the next chapter XD
Author's Response:
Yeaaaah! I'm so glad you're surprised! I understand know that I need to surprised my reader with every chapters. I don't want them to to firgure out what will happen and be bored. So mission accomplished :)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2012 10:38 am Title: Chapter 5 : Flashing lights
Aw thanks for the dedication, lovely :))
Awe Michael seemed real let down when she turned the offer of the video down! I wonder what'll happen next. This can't be the last time they meet omg.
By the way, I adore that Grammy performance. Ugh don't even get me started on his sexiness in TWYMMF, the part where he's holding onto his crotch and moving his hips in circular motions. X___X
And then when he sings Man In The Mirror; at the end when he's singing his heart out. I just explode with emotion. So much power, soul and rawness. He was truly a performer and perfectionist at heart. I'm glad he graced the world with his talent, and most importantly with his being. (You're probably bored of me going on like this haha)
Anyways great chapter, PYT XD Hope there's more soon. :)) , <3
Author's Response:
Your welcome. I don't write this story to get review but it's always good to get reviews, and I am so glad that you are always here to review the story! Right now, I am basically writing this story for you. I just looove your review! Your so funny and NO i'm not bored when you talk about Michael. How could I ?
I hope this chapter was less predictable than the other and that you really liked it. I am writing a new chapters right now. Stay Stuned
xoxo Annie :)