[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 14 : The words to say goodbye
Aww they had such a sweet moment together :) & bev needs to work on expressing her feeling towards him. But I guess I could understand why she doesn't tho. She's trying he hardest 2 be professional but how could she when michael tap dances allover her body and talks sexy 2 her? He has such a big hots 4 her lolz he is the reason why she grows weak 4 him but who blames her? I would grow weak 4 that man to wooo *fans myself* XD
Author's Response:
Yeah you're right about the feelings but it's going to be hard because she doesn't even know if she wants to have something more than a friendship with him. And yeah, Mike teasing her is not helping that much!
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 13 : Wide Awake
Oh yeah that's right mike was suppose 2 bad with prince but prince didn't wanna do it..it didn't sound right to him. & dang bev never really paid much attention 2 michael's music lolz but she sure did pay attention 2 prince's music. I sensed a stint of jealously when he noticed she loved all princed related stuff. What does he expect from her tho? She just wasn't a fangirl over him she's not chasing his him shoot he's the 1 who's chasing her & calling baby & stuff got her all confused she dnt even know rather he's her bf or not :P lolz btw I love her outfit too
Author's Response:
Beverly is a real fan of Prince! Well I can't blame her :p and Mike being jealous of it is just so cute! Yeah you're right he is the one chasing and i love that haha
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 12 : Emotional rollercoaster
Dang this chapter was crazy girl xD tat almost killing bev but I'm glad frank stopped it tho & hopefully michael doesn't deal with tatiana anymore if he knew she could be trouble. & btw I like beverly hills cops & the theme song 2 lolz eddie murphy did a lot of good movies like coming to america 1 of my faves I could watch that movie & never get tired of it. XD
Author's Response:
Tatiana is craaaaaaaaaaaazy *beyonce's voice* in love with Mike. But he played with her so that's why she is completely mad!
I love Eddie Murphy too! I was about to talk about Coming To America but it came out in June 1988 ans Beverly Cops is a classic too :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 11 : Cold shoulder
Wowww is mike messing with tatiana too? 0_0 & damn mike is so silly & pervy to. They in a meeting & he his rubbing on her theighs XD mad mike lolz I'm so in love with story 4real oh the humor in this I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I love your reviews too it's good to have feedback on the story. I see that more and more people are reading and reviewing that makes me so happy !
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 10 : Wake up call
Lmao! That was so funny wen bev said michael wasn't her boyfriend I was dying I can imagine her saying that to. XD & I love Prince & Little Red Corvette that's my song right there :D
Author's Response:
HAHAHA that's my favourite part too. I remember acting like this when I was 10 hehe
I am a big fan of Prince too and little red corvette is my favourite! You should check the acapella version he did that's pure genius :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 9 : Attraction
Oh shoot he got her were he wanted he asked her 2 be his librian girl her sleep & she said yes Loolz without even knowing :P oh boy...I can't wait to read more. Gonna be back later to read more I love this story a lot & adding 2 favorite :D
Author's Response:
Yeah! like I said "whatever Michael wants, Michael gets"!
Thank you for reviewing, commenting, rating and adding my story to your favorite. It means a lot to me that people take the time to do that :)
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 8 : Back and Forth
She should of really be happy she had this with him.. but I could understand he's the like stalkerish in a way but I love michael's personality in this he's so sweet,funny,&cleaver. How could she run away from him? Lolz haha she at his concert now :D!
Author's Response:
Yeah that's kind of creepy! Well she doesn't want any relationship, and certainly not with a superstar!
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 7 : Reunion pt 2
Hahahahaha she gave in shoot I probably would give into him to. He has those eye's in lips & wooo girl! :D lolz now she gonna front with him? Oh gosh XD this was good!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA thanks! I would give into him too but maybe not that early! Well who am i kidding !
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 6 : Reunion pt 1
Dang mike just freely comes up in here place & does what he wants I see lolz he is so desprate 4 her. Maybe he will get her this time? I gotta read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well, you'll see in the next chapter! Desperate? or DETERMINED ?
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 5 : Flashing lights
Aww I remember him winning one grammy but I heard he got it after the show I'm not sure though. & bad was actually a good album I dnt get it...it was just as good as thriller. & wow bev finally tells him on the way 2 the awards in blows this oppertunity? Lolz come on girl! She is playing hard to get with michael XD great chapter girl!
Author's Response:
Yeah he was really upset about it...
Maybe she don't want him to get it ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 : Shine ya light
Whoa I see some tension between bev & karen oh boy... xD & dang he surprised her 2 the grammys? Cool!
Author's Response:
Yes! What a suprise right?
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 : Say yes
Oh gosh I can't wait 4 the date XD & dang that dress is hott!
Author's Response:
Héhéh it's a Balmain dress. When i saw it on Jennifer Connelly I knew BJ needed to wear this!
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 2 : You can be my vixen
Just started catching up & I love it! :)
Author's Response:
So many things are happening right now!
xoxo Annie
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 02:29 am Title: Chapter 13 : Wide Awake
Lmfaoo!! The ending had me cracking up :') Michael in this story is so cheeky, sweet, daring and funny all wrapped into one. ME LIKE IT. ;D
Aww it sounded like they had a great time! I wonder if they'll just stay 'friends' though. Hmmmm ;P
Great chapter, you better update soon :D (Yes that was a threat but I made it kinder with the ':D ' face I inserted hehee)
, <33
Author's Response:
Friends? Who knows? That's the "Chase!"
HAHAHA! I'll update tonight
xoxo Annie :)
Date: Nov 01, 2012 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 13 : Wide Awake
Love your story.Hope you update soon :)
Author's Response:
Thank you !