[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2012 09:25 am Title: Chapter 17 : Why don't you love me?
Aha yeah I noticed that he said he loved her !! XD I was just eager to review after reading their mindblowing sex haha :')
But omg I got kinda sad how Michael confessed it and she didnt say anything back... :S She must love him based on how she reacts; I know she loves him :P lmao.
, <3
Author's Response:
Yeah it reminds me in Orange County when Mariss told Ryan that she was in love with her and that he answer "Thank you" HAHA
She just need time. He wasn't expecting a response the first times but now he want one! But he kind of know her so he knows that it's going to take tie!
So what do you think should happen next?
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2012 08:14 am Title: Chapter 18 : T-R-U-S-T
(Not gonna lie, I googled what 'sorpresa' means ahah)
Oh wow it sounds like they had a great time with each other. :')inseparable already; they can't stop thinking about each other and the goodbyes only get more painful. One explanation. Love. (Even though she can't admit it yet, you can feel it!)
Can't wait for more. XD , <33
Author's Response:
I don't blame you! My spanish is so bad, i don't even know how I do to understand my spanish classes!
LOVE, for him it's definetely the case but for BJ? Humm... Let's see ;)
Glad you back ;) !
See you soon
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2012 08:00 am Title: Chapter 17 : Why don't you love me?
Phhew that was HOT, man. :3
Author's Response:
Hell yeah! He also said that he loved her hehe
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2012 07:49 am Title: Chapter 16 : Hell of a day
Whao, what a day!
It seems as though BJ enjoyed it even if at first she didnt want to do it ahah ;) Michael always gets what he wants in the end lool.
That dancer... Oh-uh, I see BJ has her eye on him, and vice versa! Shit this can't b good right?
Can't wait to read the next chapter. XD
Btw she looked stunning in that video. ^.^ , <33
Author's Response:
Hi you!
Yes you're right but at the end of the day Michael got what he wanted and BJ met Paula Abdul haha!
She has her eye on him and he definetely has his eye on her. Well we can't blame him!
I always thought that BJ was the most beautiful video girl Michael had on his video. She is simply stunning and natural and the first BLACK model ever!
Date: Nov 05, 2012 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 18 : T-R-U-S-T
OMG...whats happening next??Dont stop here?
Author's Response:
Stay tuned and you'll find out ;)
I'll update soon, promise :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2012 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 18 : T-R-U-S-T
The L-word is such a strong word but I think michael means it though. Shoot he chased her behind 4 so long now so I expect 4 him 2 be in love with her.lolz now it's her turn but I think she is gradually falling 4 him & girl I would want my house to smell like michael too! XD & btw I love how you post these outfits up it gives me idea's of what I wanna wear. Can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
Hahaha! In this story we are now in September and he starts to chase her in March so it's finally happening he better love her right!
Let's see, BJ is not into Public Displays of Affection. She doesn't call him baby and she doesn't respond to his I love you. The I love you at the airport was the first "public". He really wanted to her to reply.
Thank you girl :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2012 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 18 : T-R-U-S-T
Ahh you updated again! I get excited everytime I see an update of this lolz & I Erin a Model she is pretty.
Author's Response:
Yeah! I wanted to update with a big chapter in case of i will not be able to update this week!
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2012 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 17 : Why don't you love me?
Wooo this was a hot & steamy chapter mike gave bev some good loving. XD & btw I'm loving the outfit & shoes I gotta have those shoes girl!
Author's Response:
Yeah you're right!!
Haha thank you! In case of you're wondering, the girl on the picture is Erin Wasson :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2012 05:56 am Title: Chapter 16 : Hell of a day
ok so im not new. i have been i love with this story since you posted it. im sorry i havent been reviewing. i have a tablet and sometimes it a pain in the butt to type on. but i just want to let you know that this story is the best and you're doing a great job.
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2012 05:56 am Title: Chapter 16 : Hell of a day
ok so im not new. i have been i love with this story since you posted it. im sorry i havent been reviewing. i have a tablet and sometimes it a pain in the butt to type on. but i just want to let you know that this story is the best and you're doing a great job.
Author's Response:
Oh thank you hun! That's so nice to get feedback and I'm very happy that you review this story even if you don't have the time. That's so cute!
Thank you so much again :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2012 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 16 : Hell of a day
Wow I loved this chapter girl! & bev was star strucked when she met paula adule. XD she got 2 meet a lot of people on the set 2 that was cool & dang Michael really got in his video as his librian girl. Mike wasn't play either.
Lovely chapter & can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
Yeah you're right. ike really wanted her and he got her, now let's see what happen ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2012 01:43 am Title: Chapter 15 : This too shall pass
Whao!
She has a right to be angry, and finally she showed her emotions! asdfghkla
This part right here-
"You're not silly" she said caressing my hair "You're just dumb" ------------ LOOOL Why'd a laugh so hard!? XD Friends are the best for this reason alone ;P
Omfg the way you describe how Michael is dressed.... *_* Like was I actuallly salivating? I felt like a freaking dog lmao.
AHH She ran away... BUT U CAN'T RUN FOREVER GURL.
Great updates. XD
, <33
Author's Response:
Mike is such a jerk and he needed that to realise that it's not because he is the Great Michael Jackson that he can act like this!
Hahah I try to put a little of e in every character and especially in Christina haha
I feel you gurl! He is just so sexy and handsome in this video and his SMILE. His dazzling smile! Everything is just so perfect that it needed to be precise haha
She can't run forever, but she can run haha
see you in a copla of hours for a big ass chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2012 01:26 am Title: Chapter 14 : The words to say goodbye
Awww :')
Clearly they're developing feelings for each other. Ya know one thing I love about this couple? The duo singing haha XD THE BEST THING EVUR.
Something I've noticed about BJ is her 'I dont care' attitude; I think its evident deep down she does in fact have strong feelings, but she conceals them.
... And at the end of the chapter; no guessing that'll be Michael ;) He was in Paris for the BAD tour then, right?
On to the next chapter XD
(I'm meant to be doing my Psychology assignment, I only have one perspective done though I stayed up hours working on it. AHH I think I add too much detail on 1. :S I crept onto MJFiction for a little 'reward' ahah)
, <3
Author's Response:
Yeah, feelings are growing :')!
Hahaha you're right! I think there's nothing more intimate to sing and make a fool of yourself in front of your boyfriend!
Yes she is tough and everything but Mike already know that she is just trying to hide her feeling for him. That's why he is so persistent
Yes actually Mike was performing at the Parc des Princes in Paris that day! It was a disaster because the Parc des Princes is a huge and it's impossible to soundproof it so he had to lipsync. Even though everybody thought it was amazing, the singer Johnny Haliday ( he is like our french Michael but in less cool and so hasbeen) was kind of disapointed about it. He is just a hater in fact, everybody know that :)
I feel you i am studying foreign language in College (british civilisation, spanish civilisation and Russian) and whenever I am over with an assignent i'm on MJJFICTION :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 15 : This too shall pass
Love this! :D update?!?!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am writting a chapter right now it may be online in a coupla of hours :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 15 : This too shall pass
Wow did she really show her emotions?? She is always miss tough & all wow mike really brings the best outta her I see. & I love that dress :D geesh your fashion senses r so cool girl! & wtf did bev ran away 4? I can't wait 4 more! I enjoyed every chapter & looking foward 2 reading more. Much Love!
Author's Response:
When i wrote this chapter I didn't think about the fact that her tears was a sign that Mike is bringing the best of her but you're righ actually! I have to work on this!
Thank you girl! I know it's that late 80s but i just didn't feel like dressing her like a Madonna at all!
I was actually writing a chapter last night but i literally slept writting it! But I don't know where you live but i'm in Paris and it's 6 p.m. so the chapter will be online maybe around 10 or earlier