Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 69

Oh My God!! Wowizers this is going to be a long review. First off I hated the way michael was talking to her during their agruement because he made it seem like she was talking crazy or something and she did have legit reasons to be mad! I happy he didnt hit her or anything that woulda been drama central and thank god for bill helping out michael and having that nice talk. OH MY GOD!!!!! I cannot believe she left like that, like right when he wanted to talk it over and fix everything she up and left like wow. I cnt believe nessa like thats so out of character, like they have been thru sooooooooooo much its like you couldnt even tell him face to face better let talk it over. Omg im in so much shock right now like i have no idea how michael is going to be able to get her back and make her his again because theres just so much drama right now its scary. Omg that was such a low blow for her! I cnt believe she left like that, but then again michael probably wouldve been pleading and all that and she wouldve stayed because she felt bad but I want them on good terms again! I need them to talk and fix things because they are meant for one another. Notice how I said need & not want? Like them back to together is a MUST right now. Wowizers I can only imagine what michael & her are going to be going thru not being together right now. This is craziness. By far one of the most intense chapters! Cnt wait for moreeee:

Author's Response:

LOL! I know, I know...it did kind of come from out of left field. but what did Michael expect? for her just to get over the fact that he ditched her after he told her he wanted to take her? like, how is that okay in his mind? 

Vanessa seems to always run away when things get really heated between them--just this time, it seems to be for good. but who knows with these two really? He def has a lot to make up for--that's for sure.

thanks for still reading dear! stay tuned!

Reviewer: Speechless Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 69

OMG NOOOOOOOO. AHHHHHH :( I cant believe Vanessa left!!!! I seriously was NOT expecting that. Not only did she left, she broke up with him aswell. OUCH!!! X_X Poor Michael but ya know I cant feel bad for his silly arse :/ He fucked up big time and he should have never went on a lil hissy fit when she slapped him and left her there alone by herself. Did he not realize he was in the wrong? Hmm and I wonder if he stayed the night if things would have been differently. He should of been there to comfort her and be the one apologzing until she told him to stop. She shouldnt never hit him though, that was out of line! But I guess she was just too fed up.

I loved the scene where Bill was talking to Michael and almost falling asleep lol. Bill is awseome haha. Love the advice he gave to Michael. But aargg just wished he didnt leave Vanessa alone :(  Now shes gone......and apparently doesnt want to be with him again. That note almost made me tear up too. This is such a beautifull written story and I just love it so much. Thank you for updating so quickly.  you're amazing <3

Author's Response:

*sigh* it breaks my heart honestly. Michael was probably so stunned that Vanessa had hit him that his mind couldn't wrap around her reasoning behind it, you know? But he probably should have stayed and tried to talk it out with her. regardless, Vanessa probably would have left though. Mike has to wake up and realize that his actions are not okay. maybe this will help him see that.

thank you so much for your kind comments! I really do appreciate it!

Reviewer: mjslovelyone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi

I've been reading your story since the beginning, but have been a silent reader for awhile. (sorry).  I've always loved this story.

My heart breaks  for Vanessa and Michael.   I hope they can work things out. We know they need each other.   The were miserable without each other before. 

Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens.

Again I'm sorry for being silent.

love to you

Author's Response:

Hey! So glad you've decided to comment! I really do appreciate it! Always feel free to let me know what you think!

Thanks for reading! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 06:40 am Title: Chapter 69

Awwww! I actually teared up a little. I hope they can work things out!

Author's Response:

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i do too!!

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 12:18 am Title: Chapter 69

Oh...my...God!!! :/ She left him...gosh I'm over here all teary eyed lol please update soon!

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Reviewer: martovska Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2012 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 68

WHAT AN ASS HE IS WITH VANESSA!!! Poor girl, she agreed to go on the tour to be by his side, to support him, and love him. But he disrespected her soooo bad!!! It was better if she stayed at the hotel, and never got in to that limo with him….. How is he even going to apologize about that, or even make up? I guess he doesn’t even realize that his plan on keeping her a secret may not work the way he would like. Every self respected woman will not let someone stomp on her pride, and feel neglected, disrespected, and ashamed to being showed with!!! I wouldn’t even be disappointed if she left him for good!!! Maybe then he would realize that showing her to the world, making the other guys jealous of his beautiful girlfriend, would make him the happiest man!!! I hope she doesn’t leave without KICKING HIS ASS BAD lol. And is she pregnant, or was that too much of an alcohol in the system?

Girl I hope you going to have time to write and update soon, because that would be a crime to leave us hanging for a long time lol But I understand if you can’t , you have more of important things in your life that have to be done first :) Amazing story girl!!! Great update!!! You definitely know how to keep your readers on a short leash lol

Much love!!! Oksana :)

Author's Response:

HEY! Yeah Mike was pretty awful in this one--idk how he's going to make it up to her or IF he even can. He's taking her for granted BIG time and he probably won't realize it unless she leaves him so..IDK!

And thank you for always being so understanding! I have been EXTREMELY busy with school and work but i'm def trying to update every now and then! Thanks again for being so sweet!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2012 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 68

Michael ain't shit!!!!! Point blank period. He's a fucking coward! Like is this narrow negro serious? You damn near begged her to come with you, across the damn world again, and then at the last minute YOU decide when it's convenient for YOU for her not to accompany you for the rest of the night?! Lawd Vanessa needs to cuss his ass completely out! Like unbelievable! Hell I wish she had actually met another man while she was at this function and been flirting her ass off. I bet Michael  woulda acknowledged her then. This really pissed me off. And now she's drinking again.. Just wow. Yep, Michael ain't shit. Frank ain't either. The only one with decency is Bill. He coulda told her ahead of time and he coulda went back to the hotel. Totally disrespectful. She needs to really give his ass a piece of her mind. Seriously. I don't give a damn if he is Michael Jackson, you cannot treat people like this. Just no. 

Author's Response:

HA! I hear you though! Michael knew he was in the wrong for doing Vanessa like that. And I'm pretty sure Vanessa will let him know that she did NOT appreciate it LOL.

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2012 05:27 am Title: Chapter 68

She's pregnant!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!

Author's Response:

HAHAHA!!