[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2011 09:27 am Title: Chapter 16
At the beginning when jon was asking her who was calling the house I thought they were gunna fight again but thanifully they didnt. And let again keys being hilarious as always haha. & the michael scene was intesne. I was thinking my gosh are they really about to go all the way!?! Haha but lovly story
Cnt wait for the next chapterr
Author's Response:
LOL!! the sexual tension between Mike and Vanessa is too MUCH!! lol
thanks again for your comments--they always make me smile =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2011 07:31 am Title: Chapter 16
Vanessa's a tease. Avoid her like she's Billie Jean, Michael. She'll only break your heart.
Author's Response:
LOL "like she's Billie Jean"...she's not THAT crazy lol. she just needs to get herself together...it takes time.
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2011 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay. I just read the entire story in just a few hours. I can honestly say that I am addicted to your story. I cried when Michael explained why he had such low self-esteem. It really broke my heart. I'm happy that your story touches on...well...real issues in Michael's life. Hopefully...they BOTH get it together...and then...get together! Wonderful story, I am ready to read more!
Author's Response:
Oh i'm so HAPPY that you connected with my story the way you did. thanks so much for your comments =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2011 10:15 am Title: Chapter 15
Keys is such a helpful friend :)
I love her
& omg i wrote a review before but it cut off half way so i deleted it and Im gunna rewrite it lol.
Even though i want nessa to be with michael Im happy that shes trying to work things out with her husband. She cant just throw away the relationship so quickly and omg keys with michael is gonna b really funny to read :) cnt wait for the next part :D
Thanks for the awesome storyyy
:P
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2011 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Lovly chapter.
Omg keys is just so funny! Hahahahaha the things she say are always so funny :)
I hope nessa makes the right choice.
& diana has sum nerve lol
But i cnt wait for the next chapterrr :D
Date: Jan 05, 2011 11:18 am Title: Chapter 14
Great :) Can't wait for the juicy stiff! ;) xx
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2011 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Damn that was one intense chapter. The beginning was really funny I knew that was going to happen. But the fight with jon was crazy!!! I thought for a second that he slapped her not that she slapped him. That was intense, but im happy she stood keys the whole story so she understands her dilemma better.
And jon is a fool wtf? He cant just expect her to forget everything like it was nothing
“So that’s it. Just forget about it? That’s your solution. No apologies—just forget it? What if it happens again? Huh? ‘Cause I can promise you if you ever put your hands on me again—I swear I just might kill you.”
That was my favorite section of the whole chapter. She let him know straight up and I got mad respect for her. Now shes in the right place to choose who she wants to be with.
Thank you again for the amazing story.
I love that you give speedy updates you dont understand how happy that makes me :D
Cnt wait for the next parttt :)
Author's Response:
LOL!! Intense is a good word! And that section you pointed out--YES! Vanessa is a little spit-fire--i love the character she is becoming. Thanks again for your feedback =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2011 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
how did i know that was coming ! omg, lol. welp, now maybe her & michael can work something out. great update !
Author's Response:
Haha! Was it that predictable?? lol
Who knows what's gonna happen with them??? guess we'll have to wait and see!!
=)
Date: Jan 04, 2011 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
Love it :) Well done, keep going :) xx
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2011 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
Omg I loveddddddddd this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one or my favorites. I was kinda annoyed when he was ignoring her, like come on now shes just trying to be a friend. But as soon as i saw the knock knock knock I knew it had to be her. I love the character traits you gave her.
Shes a really good person, and what she said to him was soooooooooooo sweet! When I got done reading it i was like Aww!!! Hahaha :D
But thanks for the AMAZING story :)
I love it!
Cnt wait for the next part
& omg i love you so much for the quick updates :)
Author's Response:
LOL glad you liked it!! Vanessa is a bold woman, no DOUBT! lol
thanks again for reading--and the updates are easy because i do so as i finish writing it. i've had a lot of free time lately so it's been easy to keep the story coming =)
Date: Jan 04, 2011 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the story! You tell it so well, and I feel like it's the realest description out there of Michael, if this story were true in another world. :) I also love the character of easy-going, free-spirited Vanessa. She's wonderful. Thank u for this fanfic! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep on writing. <3
Author's Response:
Oh wow...thanks so much!! that's the best compliment--i've been trying my best to stick to the true character of Michael. i'm glad you're enjoying it!! =)
Date: Jan 04, 2011 11:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Love it :) xxx
Author's Response:
Yay!! X)
Date: Jan 04, 2011 01:22 am Title: Chapter 11
Haha her friend is really funny, I like her :)
And thats funny cuz I thought you totally made up the articles but once I got to the end of the chapter I noticed they were real.
Great chapter :)
& thanks for always updating so soon! I love that you dont keep your readers waiting :)
Thnks Hun
Author's Response:
aww thanks!! and thank YOU for always giving such great feedback--i love to know what everyone is thinking. =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2011 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg it just gets better and better with every chapter lol! I loved it! update soon!
Author's Response:
Sooo happy you're enjoying it!! thanks so much!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2011 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
ok so, i have to finish reading but i just wanted to say that i'm really enjoying your story. i kept seeing it in most recent & i saw all the stars so i thought i should check it out & im glad i did :) great job !! :)
Author's Response:
Aww yay! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. I appreciate all of the feedback =)