Date: Jan 12, 2011 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 23
Just another ordinary day at the Jacksons.....LOL
I'm glad Nessa didn't let Key in the house.
Bring on more!!! Love this story...
Author's Response:
"another ordinary day" is RIGHT!! LOL..they're entertaining to say the least =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2011 08:45 am Title: Chapter 23
Dang talk about crazyness!!! And it i was michael and nessa i would be pissed to! Wtf!?! Everyone was all types of rude :/. Great chapter :)
I really liked it!
Cnt wait for the next
Author's Response:
LOL absolutely!! glad you enjoyed it though!
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2011 03:52 am Title: Chapter 23
OMG liberian. You went all out with this one girl. Joe and LaToya were clowning. I know Michael felt terrible. I felt bad for him. And her. Like, whoa. And she went back in?! Wow, that's some loyalty cuz I'd be waiting in the car. For real. Only LaToya stood up to Joe. So good for her; even though she aimed in the wrong direction. Lol. And Michael should've already introduced Vanessa to his parents. Then there wouldn't have been a big confrontation at the dinner table. That's Michael's bad in my mind. Vanessa's a trooper though cuz I would not have gone back in there with those crazy people. Lol. Keep it coming girl.
Author's Response:
LOL! Vanessa IS a trooper for that lol. and yea, if Michael just introduced her to everybody then they could've avoided some confrontation. so much for Michael trying to be "private" with his nosy family lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 22
Michael kept looking away until he felt her fingers trace down his body then stop at certain places, then she'd kiss him there. He realized what she was doing and he immediately began to cry. He couldn't stop himself. He had never felt more loved and accepted in his life."
Omg that was the sweetest thing in the world! I had to read it again to understand it. At first I was like what? Then i read it again and I was like awwww thats sooo adorable! I think that was simply beautiful. I really loved this chapter, You have done an amazing job with this story. I really do love it!
Cnt wait for the next parttt
Author's Response:
Awww yay!! i'm so glad you liked it! that particular part was difficult to write so that it would make sense but i'm so glad you got it =)
thanks again for your comments!
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww just beautiful!!!!!! I loved every second of it!!!
You turly are a really gifted writer!
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm coming around to Vanessa. She just got a lot of proving to do. MJ's my man. I only share him because of the circumstances. I'm willing to give her a chance though. She just bet not hurt my baby. LOL. Love ya story sis. Keep it coming.
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOAH! i loved these last two chapters!! keep em' coming, girlie! :)
Author's Response:
LOL great!! glad you liked it!! i'll definitely WILL keep it coming!
=)
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 22
Alrighty then. I give this update a big, fat ten cuz Michael and Vanessa kept getting it in. LOL. Yea, I'm a horn dog girl.
Author's Response:
LMAO!! i see!! lol no problems with that. i wonder if Vanessa's won you over yet?? lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 21
Vanessa's a wild little vixen, ey? Great update girl. Michaell finally got it in. Super sexy update sis. Keep it coming.
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 11:28 am Title: Chapter 21
Wowwwzaa. That was hot. Fantastic chapter, well done girl xxx
Author's Response:
LOL--thanks! glad you liked it!! =)
Date: Jan 11, 2011 07:30 am Title: Chapter 22
I started your story last night and didn't stop till way after midnight. (Couldn't wait for the next update)!!! Sooo good. When I woke up this morning, low and behold, an update!!! Not one, but two very hot chapters....ya ya!!! OMG, hot and very sexy!! Imagine having 24 hour sex (maybe more) with Michael..sigh ..so glad they are together. Need more!
Author's Response:
LOL!! Oh wow--so glad you're enjoying it!! i'll be updating soon so stay tuned!!
Date: Jan 11, 2011 05:27 am Title: Chapter 22
Super hott and sexy! Awesome work! You're doing a great job and this storyline is AMAZING! :D
Author's Response:
Awww THANKS! i'm really glad you're liking it. Stay tuned!! =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2011 05:12 am Title: Chapter 22
Girl. It's 4 am where I am, but I HAD to read these updates...I've been waiting all day. Lol. Thank you for updating!
Sex scenes were...sexy of course. Lol. I'm happy that she knows about his vitiligo. Now hopefully he is completely comfortable with her since she's seen ALL of him. Hopefully he's not so uncomfortably shy anymore.
Author's Response:
LOL! girl i was up all night trying to finish it...glad you enjoyed!!
=)
Date: Jan 10, 2011 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 20
I have to say this is one of my favorite stories on this site! Each chapter is just real intense and you really got great talent writing! I really love that! So keep it coming!
Author's Response:
Oh WOW! Thanks so much!! i'm so glad that you're enjoying it =)
i'll be updating soon for sure!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2011 08:39 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh yeah thanks for answering my questions in the other chapter. :)
I loved this chapter and omg i like laughed out when they were making out and his mom caught them. Thats terrible hahahaa & i see that both of them are about to take it to the next step exctingg :) cant wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Oh no problem--i'm glad you're still enjoying it!!
thanks so much!! =)