Date: Jan 19, 2011 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 27
Amazing update.. I really hope they can work it out
xxx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! i'm pulling for them too!! lol
thanks for reading =D
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 01:46 am Title: Chapter 27
Damn it Vanessa. Make a couple brash decisions, live a little girl! LOL. Anyways, wonderful update. And as usual, I'll be awaiting the next add.
Author's Response:
LOL!! "live a little!" <---that's what i'm saying!! lol
thanks so much as always =)
stay tuned!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 12:59 am Title: Chapter 27
Great job!!! This story seriously keeps on getting better! Ahhh! Can't wait for the new one!!! I love this relationship... I wonder what will happen once he starts touring!?!?
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!! So happy you're liking it!!
thanks for reading <3
Date: Jan 19, 2011 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1
First of all, I love this story.....just incase you were wondering. I look for an update everyday.
When he gave her the ring I thought he would ask her to marry him, seeing he was going to be away for a while. I don't blame her for not wanting to go on tour with him, but oh my God, I feel bad how sad they both got especially Michael. I hope everything will be ok while he's away. Loneliness can make you do crazy things, like look around for someone to fill that empty spot. I hope they both will be ok while he is gone.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
i'm so glad you love it!! i'm really having a good time writing it!!
i'm also glad that you're rooting for them as a couple. i guess we'll see if love truly conquers all...
thanks again for reading dear!! stay tuned =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 12:29 am Title: Chapter 27
Loved this update girl. A day at the waterpark on a sunny day sounds so good. Cuz it's so cold outside right now. But this piece was upbeat and carefree. It flowed real well with vivid description and dialogue. Michael and Vanessa have hit the first snag in their relationship. And I look forward to future updates to see how they resolve the long-distance relationship issue. Keep it coming sis.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it!! and YES--a little sun period sounds AMAZING right about now =)
thanks for still reading and stay tuned =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 12:18 am Title: Chapter 27
OMG it's ridiculous how much I love this story! I REALLY hope they work it out seriously I love them together! I hope that maybe she can just visit him for a little while on tour & that they just you know make it work! :) love it keep it up girl lol update soon plz!
Author's Response:
Aww!! Yay! i'm so happy you like it!! i LOVE writing it!!
thanks for reading and stay tuned my dear =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2011 12:03 am Title: Chapter 27
Oh gezz, talk about intesne. You know whats terrible? I logged off and i swear 5 second later i got an email that you updated your story. I was like OMG! I need to go back on and read it hahah. So i did and thank god I did. Wonderful chapter: the beginning with keys was hilarious, i love the way they acting like the premiere of his video was a movie. That was extremely cute. The water park was cute but I was upset that they didnt spend much time together, the really should have. For some reason i thought the girl michael was talking with was gunna be tatiana thumbzten. Luckly it wasnt lol. The ending was sad because i rememeber nessa said she was upset because he hadnt even asked her to go on tour with him. But the thing was it wasnt even like she was able to and she was automatly upset with him when he asked. The ring was a really nice idea, i think it was really sincere. I hope their love is able to withstand the stress of their distance apart. Cnt wait for the next part! :D
Author's Response:
LOL! i'm glad you logged back on to read =D
and LOL at Tatiana Thumbzten--i don't think their relationship can handle her right now lol. and Vanessa is a trip--she wants Michael to ask her but she gets upset when he does...but i guess she just wanted the choice at least--idk she's a mess really lol
thanks for still reading!! stay tuned =)
Date: Jan 18, 2011 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 27
SMH.. Vanessa can go with him for maybe a little bit, damn. She was a lil harsh on him. Poor Mikey. Well all I can say is they better make this shit work. And be faithful too.
Author's Response:
LOL! i hope they can work things out too! we'll see =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2011 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 26
Poor Michael, poor Vanessa, their lives will become even more complicated when the tour arrives.
Great update!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you dear!!
stay tuned =)
Date: Jan 17, 2011 11:11 am Title: Chapter 26
God I love this story.
This chapter was hot.
Hope they will be back together soon.
patiently waiting for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Yayy!! glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: Jan 17, 2011 06:54 am Title: Chapter 26
awww...girl, i so love the two of them as a couple! Great and sexy update! Can't wait for the next chapter...
Now...c'mon Mike, put a ring on that girl an' knock her up! They are made for each other! LOL
Author's Response:
LOL!! Thanks so much!
thanks for reading and stay tuned =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2011 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm an insomniac and I keep vampirish hours. So I couldn't recall if I responded to this update or not. But it was smoking hot. Yeah, Vanessa's turning out to be alright. I just know though that Jon is not out of the picture. I just hope she doesn't hurt my baby, girl. That's all. I'm digging this story liberian. Keep it coming sis.
Author's Response:
LOL i hear you girl!! i'm glad you're still liking it--and that you're coming around to Vanessa LOL.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2011 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 26
Aw...girl. Beautiful...beautiful sex scene. I hope that Vanessa never breaks his heart...but I don't think she will. I wish she could go with him on tour...I mean..its not like they just met right? They were good friends at some point so its not like they're moving to fast...
Well, again, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Good job girl!
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks!! so glad you liked it!! and you're right--when i think about it Mike and Vanessa have known each other for about 10 years and have been together officially for almost 6 months so they've been together a minute. it wouldn't be too fast--it would just mean Vanessa kind of giving up her life for Michael. we'll see if she wants to make that sacrifice or not...
thanks for reading love!!
stay tuned =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2011 10:08 am Title: Chapter 26
Well this chapter was amazing! The bathroom part was hot hahah & dang i knew a tour was gunna have to come up. It woule be nice if she could go with him but she hasnt had her job for to long so it would be terrible to already leave. Im really hoping they can work things out, i know it gunna b hard for her not seein him for a while.
Cnt wait for the next part :)
Author's Response:
Aww thanks!! Glad you liked it! i'm hoping they can work it out too!!
=)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2011 08:13 am Title: Chapter 26
I'm with Bill girl. I really hope Vanessa is different from the rest of the girls who throw themselves at Michael. Hopeully she's the one. We'll see. Loved the update. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
yay!! you're rooting for them!! LOL...thanks, as always, for your great feedback!!