Date: Jan 21, 2011 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 29
"He stayed still inside of her for a moment and looked back into her eyes. Without even saying a word, they knew what the other was saying. His eyes screamed 'I love you' and his lips read 'I need you'. As he began to work his hips, undulating slowly into hers--they told her that she was the most important thing in his world. He picked up his pace, shooting a wave of pleasure through her body--letting her know that everything would be fine as long as they were together. Her legs spread wider, taking in more of him--letting him know that she was all his and that she was more than willing to stick by his side. Michael buried his face in the side of her neck, his breath coming out in huffs along her skin--letting her know that he'd never let go. She dug her nails into his back, ready to spill over the edge--letting him know that she'd never do the same."
Just beautiful. Really beautiful. I'm so glad she's going on tour with him.. that was a great update; well done. xxx
Author's Response:
Awwwww thanks!!!!! that's probably one of my favorite parts of the whole story =)
so glad you liked it!! =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2011 02:36 am Title: Chapter 29
OMG I loved this chapter!!!! every chapter just gets better lol! And *sigh* when they made love your writing was so good & it was very romantic amazing writing can't wait for an update :)
Author's Response:
Awww yay!!! and THANKS so much!! i'm happy you enjoyed reading it.
stay tuned my love <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2011 01:24 am Title: Chapter 29
He pulled his fingers out and tasted her juices; yeah, he felt real savage"
Hahahha hilarious!
"I know, I know...I needed something as an excuse to anchor me down but...fuck it! I'm going on tour with Michael FUCKING Jackson bitches!!!" she said sitting up and doing a little dance."
Hahahhahaha even more hilarious!!!
Okay so my review for this chapter; haha this is gunna be a long one.
First off AMAZING as always!!!!!
I love the way michaels mom is always so welcoming with nessa. I love that!
& the monkey part was hilarious i like the way she got all scared and jumped on the bed hahaha. And the sex part talk about hot!!!! Hahah i love your writing style. Your just wonderiful :)
The bubbles part when he was watching them was even funnier. Im veryyyyy happy that nessa is going along with him! It was a great thing that she decided to go with him! I cant wait for the next part. Thank you for the alwayssssssssssssssssssss wonderiful updates!
I love you!!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA!!! LOL--Mike is nastyy!! lol...i also love the relationship between Vanessa and Katherine--she's like the mother-figure she's always needed in her life. i'm so happy to hear that you like my writing style--that's like the best compliment ever lol
and thank you for your alwayssssssssssss AMAZING feedback =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2011 01:05 am Title: Chapter 29
Girl. They are sooo cute. I loved that she said she was going to announce to everyone at work that she was going on tour with her man Michael Jackson. I was rolling when Mike was like they gone be like "that bitch is crazy." They are so funny together. lol. Cute add girl!
Author's Response:
LOL!! She's silly haha...i'm glad you think they're funny together--those tend to be the best relationships =)
thanks as always love!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 29
Loved the update liberian. I'm liking Vanessa a lot more. The girl has spunk. LOL on Bubbles watching them do the do. And I loved how she planned on quitting her job by telling them all I'm going on tour with my baby Michael Jackson bitches. Yeah, that was dope. Keep it coming sis.
Author's Response:
Haha!! Great to hear that about Vanessa lol
thanks for your support as always!! =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 29
awww this chapter was cute :) can't wait to see what happens when the tour starts !
also, been kinda busy so i didn't have time to comment on ur other chapters, just wanted to say ive been loving the updates & i forget which chapter but when michael said something like "fuck that" i died laughing, so funny !
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Oh yeah--i remember that part..i love a cursing Michael lol.
i'm glad you've been enjoying it!!
stay tuned =D
Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 29
Awww.. I love to see them happy and in love!! I'm so glad she's goin on tour with him. Yay to.Nessa and Mikey! And Lmao @ Bubbles watching.
Author's Response:
LOL!! i know that Bubbles part was funny to write lol.
stay tuned for more!! =)
Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 29
It's so good to see them happy again.
I clapped when she said she would go on tour with him.
The whole update was great.
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Author's Response:
Hahaha!! Yayyy!! i'm so glad!! lol
thanks so much dear <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 28
Michael is suffering. Vanessa had to go on tour with him. Poor Michael
Great update.
Author's Response:
keep reading to see what happens =)
thanks so much!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 10:19 am Title: Chapter 28
Decisions, decisions, decisions. So many to make. I love that keys is such a good friend and can read nessa like a book. She easily said all the reasons she was scared of going on tour with him. Jonathon is sooo dumb! He has some nerve calling her and ish. Then acting like she stole from him, she shulda punched him in the face lol.
It sucks that her and michael are in a really tough situation because i really want her to go with him. Shes guna like go crazy being without him for like a year or two. But excellent chapter :) cant wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
LOL--thanks you so much!! Jonathan is a complete IDIOT...but he's like a leech that doesn't want to let go of the past. i just hope that's the last we see of him lol.
thanks as always for your great comments <3
Date: Jan 20, 2011 06:38 am Title: Chapter 28
Another great update!!
Love how she stood up to Jonathan, (he's a complete jerk).
I think she should go with Michael. Yes I do!!!! They love each other to death.....they are both going to be miserable without each other. They are already and he hasn't even left yet!!!!
Get on that plane with Michael and GO!! She has nothing to loose....
Author's Response:
i think we're all waiting to see if she ends up on that plane or not LOL...keep reading to see!!
thanks so much for your comments and stay tuned!!
Date: Jan 20, 2011 03:18 am Title: Chapter 28
Well I'm glad she told John's ass off. I think that was the closure she needed. Now... she needs to cut the bs and go with Michael! She ain't got nothin else goin on. And she may even find work elsewhere or hell work for Mike! Dude she needs to go with him! Live girl and love Michael.
Author's Response:
LOL!! 'live girl and love Michael' <--i like that!! lol
thanks for reading and stay tuned for more =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 03:13 am Title: Chapter 28
Loved the update. Keep it coming sis.
Author's Response:
thanks =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 03:13 am Title: Chapter 28
All I'm saying is...Vanessa better G.I.T (get it together) or leave it alone =). See what I did there? LOL!
This heffa is making me mad! What's the harm in her traveling the world with her MAN? The man that loves her more than anything. The man that she loves more than anything.
Jonathan just better back the heck up before Mike gets on him =). He is Bad now. Lol.
Key...well...she's starting to grow on me. She's certainly became quite a likable character. Lovely friend.
Loving the story as always girl! I can't wait til you come back!
Author's Response:
LOL!!! OMG!! you have me laughing out loud literally!! lol
and i'm glad you're beginning to like Key--she's the kind of friend everybody needs.
thanks for reading and your comments!! =)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2011 02:48 am Title: Chapter 28
ahhh omg plz tell me she's gonna go on tour with him and its all gonna work out lol!!! loved the update can't wait for more.... <3
Author's Response:
LOL!! you'll have to keep reading to see!! lol
thanks and stay tuned!!