Date: Mar 21, 2011 10:59 am Title: Chapter 34
Awwe damn!!! That's really messed up. I hope they can fix this.
Author's Response:
*fingers crossed*
love conquers all...right? lol
Date: Mar 21, 2011 08:45 am Title: Chapter 34
Aww i knew things were going to have to take a turn for the worst. Its kinda ironic that she would cheat even though michael has plenty of opporunities to. He probably already made the connection that she was the one eddie was talking about at the soundcheck, I loveeee this story :) & cnt wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
that IS ironic!! ha LOL..so glad you're still enjoying this!!!
Date: Mar 21, 2011 06:24 am Title: Chapter 34
Poor Vanessa....I hope Michael gradually starts to understand that Vanessa is an addict and it doesn't put too much of a damper on their relationship.
That some good writing!!
Can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
awwww THANKS!!
Date: Mar 21, 2011 04:59 am Title: Chapter 34
Wow.. Heavy stuff. I commend Vanessa for being honest and telling him everything. But I'm a lil disappointed in Michael. I think he coulda been more understanding than that. He was a lil cold there.. Did he forget he has his own set of issues?? Smh. Neither one of them are perfect and as her man and future husband, he needs to understand that. Now yes, she shoulda known her limits and its messed up that she kissed someone he has to work with but she was drunk. She'd never do that intentionally. I hope they can work it out and move past this.
Author's Response:
Yeah--Michael's just living in his anger. everybody needs that time to be angry or upset for a little bit--but he was very cold towards Vanessa and her addiction problems. Maybe he just needs time to come to terms with everything. THANKS for your great feedback as always!! <3
Date: Mar 21, 2011 01:51 am Title: Chapter 33
I'm so happy that you're back! Wow! I had 3 wonderful updates to catch up on.
Mike and Vanessa...I'm so happy that they talked about their future together. I hope they marry while they're on tour. Cute.
Michael is a good man.
But Jolie...ew...I don't like her attitude at all. She's just trying to make it hard on Vanessa. Infested with power she is.
Anyways, can't until you come back to update girl. I'll be here!
Author's Response:
Awww i'm so happy to be BACK!! lol seriously though...school is too much!! so glad you're still around to read--always love your comments!!
Date: Mar 20, 2011 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is absolutley, no doubt in my mind, fucking amazing. :)
Your writing is just so captivating and realisitc sounding.
Love it. Keep writing please.
xxxx
Author's Response:
oh WOW! thanks for the compliment. i'm soooo glad you're enjoying it!! <3
Date: Mar 19, 2011 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 33
I LOVE This story please continue... <3
L.o.v.e.
Author's Response:
THANKS!! And i WILL. i'll continue until i finish!!
Date: Mar 19, 2011 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 33
Love this.
Author's Response:
THANKS!!
Date: Mar 19, 2011 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 33
Baby making time!!!!!! I bet their baby will be gorgeous. I can understand Vanessa's insecurity though, I mean Michael is gorgeous and chicks are thirsty as hell. But I don't think she has anything to worry about. She can't control how other women feel about Michael BUT she knows how HE feels and what he feels for her. Thats what's important. I know Tatiana is delusional as hell but I hope Vanessa will listen to her man. Michael loves that girl and I totally believe that. Get it together Nessa, you gotta good man girl! Of course I know if she feels she needs to she will check Tatiana's bony ass though. Lol. Only thing I will say about Mike though is he needs to remember he's the boss! He employs Frank, Tatiana and everybody else there! Therefore he needs to use discretion and put his foot down if shit gets outta hand or could potentially ruin his relationship.
Author's Response:
i LOVE your response! i agree with everything you said!!
Date: Mar 19, 2011 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is fantastic. You really have captured the feelings and emotions of Michael very well. Off to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Awww thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: Mar 19, 2011 09:52 am Title: Chapter 33
And girl, I'd be ready too. Great update sis.
Author's Response:
Thanks dear!!
Date: Mar 19, 2011 07:43 am Title: Chapter 33
"...Vanessa, if I just wanted a good fuck then I'd simply pluck one of the women from my audience...okay?"
Oh dang, i thought that sentence alone would make a huge fight happen, but luckly they were able to fix things before it went any farther.
Btw thanks for your sweet reply to my reply on the other chapter.
I love this story :) its sooo good, i knew tatiana is going to be a problem starter and its sad for nessa that she has to be private about everything but tatiana runs her mouth :/, cnt wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
Aww no problem!! And YES--Tatiana always spells TROUBLE! lol i'm sure it won't be the last time they fight about her unfortunately.
Date: Mar 19, 2011 07:40 am Title: Chapter 33
Lovely chapter, really sweet :) Update soon xx
Author's Response:
THANKS!!
Date: Mar 18, 2011 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 32
Hey girl, do you remeber me? Haha I use to comment on like every chapter :) haha & im sooo happy your back, i was waiting for this story to be updated for like a century & now that it is that makes me very happy :D, i lovedd this chapter & in the other chapter when jolie said she knew everything about their relationship I wonder how she found out, but anywayz she seems pretty trustworthy and i hope she doesnt tell anyone :) cnt wait for the next part i lovee this story :)
Author's Response:
OF COURSE i remember you!! LOL i miss you and your comments!! sorry it took me FOREVER to update--but i'm back. like i promised i WILL finish this story...no matter what. i'll try my best to update as much as i can. sooooo happy that you're still reading and that you still like it!! <3
Date: Mar 18, 2011 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
There's something about Jolie I don't like....
This is so good!!!
I'm dying for them to get married.
Give us more girl!!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks love! And i will be trying my best to update as much as possible!! thanks for reading!!