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Reviewer: MJ WAS A CUTIE PIE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

HAWt CHAPTER!

Reviewer: MJ WAS A CUTIE PIE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

This story is just making me so excited!  I love how they interact with each other.

Once I started reading it I can't stop.  You're an excellent writer.

 

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 8

Uh oh, the ish is about to hit the fan now!!

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh how embarassing that Janet heard him.  I always loved that intro from IJCSLY. 

Poor baby is feeling bad about himself again.  He would still be so sexy even if he were green!! 

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG!  This is getting too exciting!

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter!  Can't wait until they see each other!!

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

Bracing myself.............for when she tells him she's engaged.  Poor Michael!  So happy now, getting ready to be let down.

Wonder what song this will be? Hmmm....IJCSLU maybe?

 

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh man!  I screamed and laugh when I read the part about the KFC!! That was too funny!!  I could see him doing that!

Vanessa does not need to marry that man. He is too much like a father and she will never be satisfied.  She needs a young strong, sexy man like Michael.  I guess that will come true soon, huh? ;)

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting.  I'd like to know who pulled out Michael's glorious hair!  I would punch them out!  LOL!

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Date: Apr 09, 2011 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was a great chapter.  I loved the whole scene and you made me feel like I was really there with them.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 36

Awwww damn!!!

Reviewer: kaity6494 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 36

Oh. Its all coming out now!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!



Author's Response:

LOL oh yeah--the s@#*$ is about to hit the fan!!! lol THANKS FOR READING!!! 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 36

Mike and Vanessa are so damn cute!!! They're always joking and she makes him so happy. I'm really glad she reassures him every time he gets insecure about his looks.. She loves that man! Now about this baby business, I think she's gonna be pregnant soon. And I thought she was ready? Hmmm. Well I think.it'll happen when she ain't expecting it. Maybe when the tour is close to ending. Anyway, it's a shame they have to sneak around!!! Mike is the damn boss! Smh. I sure hope Sheryl keeps her mouth shut.

Author's Response:

LOL i'm glad you liked it!! and i think they BOTH want to have kids, but Michael wants it now, now, NOW and Vanessa wants it now, but knows it isn't the right time. But like she said, when Michael wants something, it's hard to say "no" so....we'll see!! lol THANKS for reading!!

Reviewer: mikespyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Uh oh, everyone might find out now thanks to Sheryl! BUT, having their relationship out in the open can be both a good and bad thing.

Great update!



Author's Response:

THANKS!! fingers crossed that Sheryl plays nice and doesn't use this info to her advantage lol.

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2011 11:37 am Title: Chapter 36

Such a beautiful chapter until we gopt toward the end, uh oh I hope sheryl don't tell everybody. Me personally think Vanessa is right, its time to quick being around the bush about their relationship, he's to let the world know now or their relationship could fall apart. But it was nice to get an update from you, keep writing and please keep updating! 10 stars all the way!

Author's Response:

Awww THANKS!!!! it's a difficult position both Michael and Vanessa are put in. They could tell the world about them and then deal with the consequences or potentially ruin their relationship by having to sneak around. but if Sheryl beats them to the punch...well, they'll have no choice but to tell the world. sooo...we'll seeeee!! lol

Thanks for your great comment!! Hope you stay tuned!!

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