Date: Apr 21, 2011 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 36
I really enjoyed this story so far and anxiously await reading more. It really drew me in as if I could be Vanessa w/o the drugs, prostitution, etc. LOL I love the dynamic between MJ and V, it's so sweet and cool! Very good job!
Author's Response:
aww thanks so much!! i'm sooooo happy you're enjoying it!! hope you keep reading!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2011 12:49 am Title: Chapter 36
I'm confused. It says the story was updated today, but there's not a new chapter?
Author's Response:
IDK i've been having tech difficulties in trying to upload the new chapter. hopefully i'll be able to get it working correctly on this site soon. sorry about that!
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2011 03:19 am Title: Chapter 36
Hey girl! Beautiful update as always!
I'm ready for the marriage now! Make that move, Mike! Lol. Okay, I'm not rushing.
If the Crow wants to keep her job, she better keep her "beak" closed. ;) she ain't irreplaceable.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! "She better keep her 'beak' closed"--that's HILARIOUS!! and it's true! but i can see her being of some trouble in the near future...but we'll see! Thanks for your always wonderful commentary!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2011 02:30 am Title: Chapter 36
If Mike wants the babies with her he should propose first lol. Back to the time when Mike found Jonathan’s engagement ring in the hotel room, he was really hurt. But Vanessa explained him that she wanted to hold on to the whole idea of getting married and becoming a wife. So maybe it is for good that Sheryl got the idea about their relationship, and maybe that is the time to at least tell everyone who’s on the tour. Everyone who works for Mike signed the confidentiality agreement!!!! But who knows what Mike will do? Anyway it’s getting harder to keep the relationship a secret and seems like more trouble to come.
Great chapter as usual!!! Can’t wait for more :-)
Author's Response:
I agree!! Mike needs to put a ring on it FOR REAL before going through w/having kids and stuff--the traditional way. Maybe that's what's putting Vanessa at discomfort. And i'm thinking Sheryl might prove some trouble in the future...but we'll see!!
Thanks for reading dear!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2011 12:05 am Title: Chapter 21
and round four, five six..................he said dont stop till you get enough, didn't he? ;)
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 20
OMG, this is getting so good!! I hope somebody put us all out of our misery. I am almost as tense as they are waiting for the first impact of........................
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
Whew!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 17
*runs around the room, screaming* Finally! I feel just as relieved as they do!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
Boy this is frustrating. Admit you love him and leave Jon. It's unfair to Michael. Kinda mad at Vanessa now.............
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
poor michael! about to be disappointed again!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 14
:) Glad he stood up to Mrs. Cougar!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
That's right girl! Leave that jerk and go to michael. You don't owe him your self respect just because he helped you. I hate ppl like that. They want to make you feel guilty for what they have done for you.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
Innocent? Bwaahahahahahah!! Ready for more!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
I just hate the media and how they treated him calling him Jacko.