[Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 39
Absolutely loved the update!!! Wonder how Vanessa is going to react to the news. Uh ohh.
Author's Response:
Thanks dear! Hope you keep reading!! =)
Date: May 11, 2011 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 39
Luurrvee it :)xx
Author's Response:
THANKS!! =D
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 38
Awww...that was so beautiful, especially the end "...even if her feet were no longer on the ground." Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Awww yay!! Glad you liked it! that's probably one of my favorite parts!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 12:53 am Title: Chapter 38
Aww this is just so freakin adorable :) i think you have written the emotions they share for eachother perfectly. Your a wonderful writter!!!!! Cnt wait for the next part
Author's Response:
Awww thank you!! you always leave the nicest comments!!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2011 12:28 am Title: Chapter 37
I friggin love this!!! Haha they are so cute & oh lordy tatianna is so confused and its terrible haha xD cnt wait to read the next part
Date: May 06, 2011 12:02 am Title: Chapter 38
Great update girl.
I loved it all....
Author's Response:
THANKS!!
Date: May 05, 2011 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 38
Awww this was such a sweet chapter. I can't wait to see them married and with child at Neverland!!!!! Mike has a good heart and he deserves it. I wasn't really thrilled with the way Vanessa worded it, but I understand what she was saying. She's just tryna look out for her man and I'm glad he understood. I just hope shit does NOT hit the fan when this your starts. I really want them to make it.
Author's Response:
Yayyy!! *fingers crossed*
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2011 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 38
LOVED IT!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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THANKS!!
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2011 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 38
I really LOVE your story. It's one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read.
Author's Response:
Oh WOW. that's really, really sweet of you. BEST COMPLIMENT EVER lol!
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2011 08:36 am Title: Chapter 37
Vanessa and Mike are cute.
The phone sex...lmbo. So funny. Mike was acting like such a kid, but it was cute.
Tatiana....ugh,ugh,ugh. Go away girl. She's so dang oblivious to the truth...Mike don't want her. She about to pull some funny stuff on tour, and Vanessa ain't having it. Lol.
Can't wait to see where Mike's taking her!
Author's Response:
LOL!! Mike's too paranoid to have phone sex i think lol--AND he's just a big kid lol. Mike's not making it very easy for Tatiana to see the truth either--he's playing with fire and he doesn't even know it! lol we'll see what happens!! thanks for still reading dear!!
Date: May 05, 2011 04:00 am Title: Chapter 37
Oh hell no. I see Vanessa is gonna have to beat some ass. Michael's AND that bony ass delusional Tatiana! I understand Mike wants to create mystery but he is going about it the WRONG way! This is gonna blow up in his face and Vanessa is gonna be PISSED! He shoulda told Tatiana absolutely NOTHING is going on between them! NOT A DAMN THANG! See I'm mad already.. unh unh Michael. You fucked up. Just no. Everything about that is bad.
Author's Response:
LOL!! Yeah i see Tatiana being nothing but trouble in the future. And Mike's got some learning to do STILL about how to handle a woman. sure to be an "eventful" second leg of the tour i'm sure! lol thanks for reading!!
Date: May 05, 2011 01:05 am Title: Chapter 37
Please continue, Michael behind the wheel Yikes!
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2011 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 37
The phone sex that Vanessa was trying to initiate was just HILARIOUS, “Do you ever touch yourself sometimes when I’m not with you?” “Uhh… sometime. I feel bad afterwards though…” He is so cute when he’s shy LOL :) Vanessa better continuo on going with Mike on the tour, and keep an eye on Tatiana, she is dangerous….
Author's Response:
The girl IS dangerous! LOL. I have a feeling whether Vanessa goes on tour or not, it's not going to be as smooth as the first leg was. that's for sure! thanks for reading and stay tuned!!
Date: May 04, 2011 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 37
oh, boy. tatiana. you know, I really do like her and i tihnk they could have rocked together, but in this story, its not about her, its about vanessa, and if i want tati now id look at the two other stories that have them together. for now, I just feel sorry for her. it feels like MJ is playing her--he won't even be honest like HEY I HAVE A GIRLFRIEND! Whatever happens now is all his fault. HUMPH. Poor tatiana (in this story).
Author's Response:
Yeah Mike's gonna have to be a little more forceful in pushing her away if he doesn't want any trouble. we'll see what happens!! lol thanks for reading!
Date: Apr 21, 2011 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 36
Hope this problem is fixed soon, waiting is driving me crazy!
Author's Response:
it just got fixed!!! LOL sorry about the wait!!