Date: Jun 05, 2011 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 48
Well that went well.
Author's Response:
Hahaha!!! lol
Date: Jun 05, 2011 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 48
I guess that's what "break up sex" is.
So what's going to happen? Will there be changes in their relationship?
Always waiting for more.....
Great writing my friend
Author's Response:
Ha!! There def will be changes in their relationship, i'm sure. We'll see just how though.
thanks!! and stay tuned!
Date: Jun 05, 2011 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 48
Wow... Just wow. I don't even know what to say. Vanessa did make some valid points but I definitely don't wanna see them broken up. This chapter just broke my heart.
Author's Response:
i'm sorry dear!! it was bound to happen though. we'll see if they can fix it though.
thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2011 03:15 am Title: Chapter 47
Now I don't know whether I should be mad at Michael still, or cry with him. That was just so sad. I could really feel his pain. Awww....he needs Vanessa, and she needs him. He better beg for Vanessa's forgiveness and NEVER do anything remotely close to this mess again, and then ill forgive him. I loved this chapter girl! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
LOL yes!! i'm sure Michael will be back on his knees--he KNOWS he messed up big time. but he's human and he made a mistake--just like Vanessa did in the past. can she really punish him all that much?? i'm sure she will though lol.
glad you're still enjoying the story!!! i really do appreciate all of your comments!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2011 03:02 am Title: Chapter 46
Michael HAS to stop being a pushover. He ALLOWED Tati to do all of these things. Why? Because he accepted her friendship when he KNEW that wasn't all she wanted. He knew damn well that girl didn't only want his friendship and that's what pisses me off. Vanessa is totally right - he is entirely too nice. Not naive because he's aware of the intentions of others, but too nice to tell people no. Now Vanessa is hurting and its all his fault. It has to suck watching your fiance enjoy a kiss on stage in front of thousands. Whew. Dramaaaa. Great update per usual.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2011 02:44 am Title: Chapter 45
I must say, I've never particularly hated Tati, but I do in this story. She's too pushy, and she needs to back the hell off. Ugh. Michael is really starting to work my nerves. Tell her to back off already. Wonderful update. Now I must see what drama awaits me in the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2011 02:28 am Title: Chapter 44
Okay, so I fell behind on reading, and now I have to play catch up (what is wrong with me - this is one of my favorite stores of all time!).
Uhh...Michael is playing the fool, really. He knows Tati wants to be more than just friends, yet he's opening his door to "friendship." That is nothing but trouble. He thinks he's hurting Tati now by rejecting her "friendship" but he's stringing her alone. She thinks that maybe he'll open up to her, and that maybe they have a future together as more than friends. That is an ugly situation and someone is bound to get hurt in the end - I just hope its not Vanessa, his future wife. Michael just needs to reject Tati, seriously. Great update as always girl. Okay, I'm just going to continue reading and reviewing now.
Author's Response:
Hahahaha!! i had noticed you were missing from the reviews section LOL. glad you're all caught up now!
Date: Jun 01, 2011 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 47
please please make michael pay for what he's done to both nessa and tatiana, although i fee like tatiana got worse. yeah, it was unprofessional,but damn, michael, you agreed that she could change the routine (again, not same time, but still!) tatiana deserves some coser int his story that she never got in real life. she deserves it.
michael sucks. sorry.
Author's Response:
Michael is a MAN! lol And yeah, Tatiana did get played pretty bad. But she did take it a little far. and i think Michael only fired her because he was feeling guilty and wanted to show Vanessa that he wasn't involved w/her.
Maybe Tati will get the closure she deserves in this story a little later, but idk. it's up to the gods of fiction LOL!
thanks for reading and stay tuned!
Date: Jun 01, 2011 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 47
You know I bet something like this or exactly like this happened to Tati for real and that makes me feel bad for her..cause imagine being on that stage with Michael and then have it all gone. I don't know how the real Tatiana copes with it. Poor Vanessa I know she loves Mike but I'm starting to wonder if she's strong enough to be with him. This is the same girl who acted out because her father wouldn"t give her attention. Oh Michael....lol you are just to caring for your own good.
Author's Response:
EXACTLY!! it takes a STRONG kind of woman to be w/ a man like Michael or a person like Michael period. as much as we all like to fantasize about being w/ Michael and all of that (lol)--i don't think we realize sometimes how complicated a relationship w/him would be. i mean, look at the relationships he had in real life--or at least the ones the public knew about--they were all pretty short-lived. it's a sad reality unfortunately.
but this IS fiction and we'll see what happens w/ Mike and Vanessa!! it's not over until it's over! lol
thanks for reading!!! and stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 47
Michael needs to ask Vanessa: Who do you love? Is it me? Well?! I dunno.
Loving the drama girl. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! you are toooo funny!!!!
thanks dear!!! i shall!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 47
Oh wow, another chapter so soon, you seem to be writing a lot these days, but I love it!!! It’s sad to see them heartbroken, but damn Mike deserved it. Just wanted to get back to the time when Vanessa has kissed another guy, and Mike ended up in the hospital. He was angry, and didn’t know if he could trust her any more, but he loved her in the first place, so they talked. “We have to promise each other to never leave on bad terms—you never know when somebody’s going to be taken away for good” Vanessa said back then, so they really need to talk. She should understand more than anybody Michael’s feelings, and let him explain himself. Though, he should try really hard to win her back, because he has been keeping too many things from her lately!!! P.S. Girl you made me laugh at “Take your bony ass home”, that was good, really good LOL. Great chapter!!! Will there be more surprises from you today or tomorrow? Just kidding ;) <3
Author's Response:
LOL!! i have been writing A LOT lately. mainly because i have no classes this summer so i have plenty of free time. i also plan on finishing this story this summer--i MUST!! lol
i agree--Vanessa needs to talk to Michael. it's only fair to him. she should treat him with the same love and respect that he had to show her when she screwed up.
but we will see!! thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2011 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 47
Lovely written chapter dear :) gosh i just loveeee this story! Omg all the dramam went down and im happy he fired tatiana. Shes gone for good ans omg nessa leaving :( omg i hope shes not gone for good :( michael needs her! Cnt wait for the next part
Author's Response:
Lol--THANKS!! i think we all love a little drama--AND a story's not realistic without it so i figured, why not go all out?? lol
glad you're still enjoying it!!
Date: Jun 01, 2011 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 47
Stupid Tatiana! She just messes up everything. I feel so bad for Vanessa.... i would be heartbroken too. She does need to let Michael exlpain though, so they can work through this and get back on the same page. And he needs to quit being so damn selfish!
Loved this update!! :) Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
LOL more like poor Tatiana!! don't you feel kind of bad for her?? lol Michael was pretty awful for leading her on, but Tatiana DID get too carried away. Either way, i think Vanessa's been hurt the worse.
Glad you enjoyed reading!! Stay tuned!!
Date: Jun 01, 2011 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 47
SMH. I knew this was not gonna end well. Poor Nessa. Yes, Michael this is YOUR fault! You shoulda nipped it in the bud a looonnnggggg time ago. I knew Vanessa was gonna get into Tatiana's lil ass. And the nerve of her to call Vanessa clueless?? Bish please YOU are the clueless one! I can't say I blame Vanessa for leaving. Whenever she does talk to Mike, she needs to tear his ass a new one. He needs to know and learn. I don't know how he's gonna fix this, or even if he'll be able to. Now I bet he's gonna be pitying himself for the rest of the time. Only person I feel sorry for is Vanessa right now. Mike brought this on himself. And he STILL didn't tell Tatiana he has a FIANCEE!! SMDH! I just can't with Michael right now.
Author's Response:
HA!! I understand your anger w/ Michael lol. Trust--he KNOWS he was wrong and he will be dealing w/ the consequences.
Thanks for reading and for your always AMAZING comments!!
Date: Jun 01, 2011 10:03 am Title: Chapter 46
I''m sorry, y'all, but I'm really feeling terrible for Tatiana. Michael does have a problem with leading people on, like he doesn't know what his mixed signals do to people, and Tatiana did say she was going to try different things. Maybe not that night, but Michael was aware. He should have said SOMETHING in response to her question; no smart man on Earth doesn't get the innueno there. Fool.
Poor vanessa, though. He needs to work his stuff out. And Frank is an asshole. sorry.
Author's Response:
I soooo agree with you!! Michael's messing up big time and i'm sure Vanessa's gonna let him know it. And Tatiana was played--straight up. at the end of the day, Michael's a man and men like women who boost their egos. and that's what Tatiana was. She boosted his ego when Vanessa wasn't around to do that. And even though he wasn't interested in Tatiana past that, how was she supposed to know? so i feel bad for her too. in this story and kind of in real life.