Date: Jun 20, 2011 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
I keep up with this story but I was just going back and rereading some chapters and upon reading this one, I realized it's the third or so story I've read where Janet catches Michael masterbating! lol it's quite a funny picture.
Author's Response:
Really?? LMAO!!! oh gossshhh---that's funny!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2011 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 52
Aww so sad :( im happy her and michael finally talked. Its so nice for them to be together. Oh lord i knew key would react that way to everything that happen but i dont blame her. She was telling her the truth. Cnt wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
Key is BRUTALLY honest no matter what! lol i think we all need a friend like that.
Date: Jun 20, 2011 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 52
I feel sorry for Vanessa and at the sametime I do not have sympathy for her at all. She is dealing with a lot I get that and the guilt from the abortion is eating her alive, but she has got to tell Michael. It would be better to tell Michael now then later on down the road. She obviously knows what she did is wrong, but when you do something wrong you have to come clean and not make the same mistake again. She needs to put on her big girl panties and come clean about everything. I do not like how she has handled this abortion / pregnancy event at all.
Author's Response:
Yeah, i agree that she didn't handle this situation well at all. she has the ability now to try to fix it a little by coming clean--but she's messing it up by trying to keep it a secret. *sigh* maybe she'll come clean or maybe she'll just have to learn the hard way. idk--we'll see!
thanks for reading and stay tuned dear!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2011 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 52
What is wrong with Vanessa? Doesn’t she see that Mike wants her in his life and to be living together in their home? I haven’t seen a happily married couple living in separate houses LOL!!! And Key was absolutely right by being angry with her and her actions. Seems like Vanessa still can’t realize that whatever she did was huge. Right now she feels guilty, but still she acts like her visit to do abortion is like a visit to a dentist, or a plastic surgeon!!! Uhh…. I want them happy again!!! Keep up fantastic work dear!!!! Please update soon, anyway it seems that I always ask you that LOL :) <3
Author's Response:
i haven't seen a happy married couple living in separate houses either! LOL. i think Vanessa's just terrified of losing everything because of her mistake. she doesn't realize that hiding it will only make his reaction worse. she'll learn though.
thanks for reading and for your always wonderful reviews!
Date: Jun 20, 2011 04:36 am Title: Chapter 52
Uh-oh, were is she going ????
Author's Response:
We will see...LOL!
Date: Jun 20, 2011 03:26 am Title: Chapter 52
this is a fucking mess i think she should tell him he at least deserves that much she did kill his child and idk if mike will be able to forgive her for that this will really test their love if its meant to it'll be if their love is true it will be able to stand anything
Author's Response:
very true!!! hopefully love can conquer all.
thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2011 03:37 am Title: Chapter 51
Wow. I've been thinking about this story & the current dilemma really hard since the last update. Vanessa is deciding whether or not she should call Michael...well, girl yeah! She shouldn't have to think about it unless she's comtemplating whether or not he's too good for her (and he is too good for her IMO). I'm trying to get over this abortion thing but I can't get over the lie. For the rest of her life, it'll be a lingering thought - always. The first thing she should discuss with Michael is the abortion. Then let him decide if he even wants to be with her still. Then everything else. The irony of the situation is that she told him to not be selfish, yet made a selfish decision herself. Vanessa boo, wake up. She feels emptiness from her mother's death, & eventually she'll feel emptiness from her abortion.
I just really hope she is coming to her senses. You can't let a good man like that get away.
Author's Response:
AMEN!!! you've said it all!!! it sucks when you make a rushed decision based on emotions at the moment and they end up having a HUGE effect on you and end up haunting you for the rest of your life. i agree--she needs to lay it all out. keeping it a secret from him is only going to make her the enemy when he does find out--because i'm sure he WILL.
thanks, as always, for reading dear!! stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2011 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 51
Aww such an emotional chapter, i love this story. Ill be honest with you i didnt want to read this chapter because i felt like the story was taking a really sad turn but after this chapter i can tell thinks will get better. Cnt wait to read the next part
Author's Response:
Awww, well i'm glad you're still reading. i guess i'm trying to write the story like it could actually happen in real life. and we all know that in real life, everything isn't always happy and hunky-dory, you know? at the same time, i don't want to write a depressing story either. things will work themselves out the way they're supposed to, i'm sure.
thanks again for still reading!! hope you stay tuned for more!
Date: Jun 11, 2011 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 51
Dont cha just love Bill? telling it like it is go head Bill. I agree with Vanessa its time for a real talk between she and Michael. She should just lay everything out there and see how Michael plays it. Girl you I'm mad at Vanessa but I still have faith in them.
Author's Response:
LOL i LOVE Bill!! and yes, it's wayyyy past time for the two of them to talk. Vanessa's gonna have to be a real woman and just put it all out there. it's only fair to Michael.
thanks for reading!!!! stay tuned for plenty more!! =)
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2011 08:19 am Title: Chapter 51
Well, it seems like that wall she tried to make it crumbling. I can't wait for the moment when she has to come clean about everything to him. If she's gonna start a "new leaf" she'll have to start with that confession.
Just to clarify, I totally understand why she got the abortion, and I support the right for any woman to get one if that's their choice, but not telling the father (if he is a good man) for any reason is my issue. She needed to give him a lot more credit than that; MJ, out of all people, would have understood.
I hope she tells him before FOX news---uh, I mean, the PRESS does.
Author's Response:
Hahaha!! Exactly though--I understand your point. that's MY biggest issue w/it too. she should've been open w/Michael about it.
well, it's gonna have to hit the fan at some point. what is done in the dark, will come to the light--like they say. we'll see!
thanks for reading and stay tuned!!
Date: Jun 11, 2011 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Yess!! Vanessa is finnaly going to talk to him.
I hope they can really get it together so Michael can be happy again & i wonder if nessa gonna tell him about her surgery eventually hmmm....
Great writing keep it coming girl!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2011 01:19 am Title: Chapter 51
So many emotions in this chapter, sadness, peace, confusion, hesitation, and love! You pictured all of those great Liberian!!! I just hope it would not take Vanessa couple of years to make her own money before she gets back to Michael lol. And they really need to talk!!!! Just loooooooove this story!!!
P.S. Thank you for updating tonight!!! May I ask for more? lol ;)
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Thanks so much for your kind comments!! i'm cranking out chapters as quick as i can LOL. stay tuned!!
Date: Jun 11, 2011 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Couldn't help the tears while reading. So well written.
God I love Bill.....he said it all.
I hope they can reconcile.
Looking forward to the next part.'
Author's Response:
awwww man. i'm glad you could connect to it though. i love Bill, too LOL.
thanks for reading!!
Date: Jun 11, 2011 12:53 am Title: Chapter 51
I love this story! Keep up the beautiful writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2011 12:46 am Title: Chapter 51
oh shit they are gonna have A LOT to talk about when she finally talks to him lol! dang I'm pretty sure shit is gonna go down even though I kinda just wish they would talk it out nicely, all would be forgiven & they could live happily ever after lol but that's wishful thinking hahaha! loved it can't wait for your next update :)