Date: Jun 30, 2011 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 54
AHHHHHH CLIFFHANGER!!!! Oh my Lord. This is getting serious! Loved this update btw, it was awesome. I hope she dont tell a lie and try to get herself out of it. She needs to come clean, and i can almost gaurantee that Michael is going to be sooooo pissed when he finds out, but he needs to know. they can always start on another one.
Author's Response:
LOL!! "They can always start on another one"--lol!! if only it was that simple, huh?
thanks for reading! stay tuned!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2011 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 54
Finally the truth to be told!!! It was so sad to see Michael being so insecure, and coming to bed with makeup on just brakes the heart. I must agree with Vanessa that sex doesn’t make a relationship, but the relationship can’t be without it either!!! Coming to bed earlier and pretend being asleep will not solve a problem. Girl I just can’t believe you left with the words “to be continued…” LOL. You better be giving us next chapter really soon!!! You are such a TEASE!!!! Lol, but I love it :) <3
Author's Response:
i knowwwww!!! i AM a tease! but i don't mean to be...or do i??? LOL. a little suspense never killed anybody.
let's see what happens!
Date: Jun 30, 2011 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
How is Mike going to handle what she is going to tell him.
The waiting is going to kill me.
Please don't let us wait too long.
Date: Jun 30, 2011 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 54
awwww that was fucked uo how u gone stop it like that smh
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! sorrryyyy!!! as i was writing it, i was like "dang, they're gonna be PISSED if i just stop it here." but i HAD to do it lol.
Date: Jun 30, 2011 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 54
Smh.. go on Vanessa. Tell him what your trifling ass did and intended to keep from him!!! I still haven't forgiven her for that. I hope Michael lets her ass have it! She needs to beg for his forgiveness for being so damn selfish and inconsiderate. And has the nerve to say to him whatever it is he needs to say it.. bish please!!!
Lol I'm just saying. I'm still pissed at Vanessa and garner no sympathy for her right now. No offense.
Author's Response:
LOL i understand COMPLETELY. Vanessa doesn't deserve much sympathy either, really. she'll learn from her mistakes eventually. hopefully LOL.
THANKS for reading!! and giving awesome feedback!
Date: Jun 24, 2011 07:07 am Title: Chapter 53
:o omg...
Please Continue!
L.o.v.e.
Author's Response:
i shall!!! stay tuned!
Date: Jun 23, 2011 11:18 am Title: Chapter 53
I was about to say that maybe Vanessa can put the whole abortion behind her and just start anew. But she's not the type first of all Michael has a great "something is wrong" detector and Vanessa has the guilty i'm sorry love me forever face. She going to have to tell him one day. and hopefully they can move forward. Breakfast for dinner tastes sooo good I don't know why that is but it is lol. How Vanessa gone accept this man's ring and not tell him that she's not moving in with him..I love her but I swear she makes my head hurt. I'm assuming the house her father left her is in New York?
Author's Response:
Haha!! Michael does have a great "something is wrong" detector and Vanessa is not very good at hiding her feelings/emotions at all. soooo the ish is going to hit the fan eventually. they can't just go on like that without fixing it.
Breakfast for dinner is ALWAYS the best! lol
seems like Vanessa only accepted the ring again to avoid talking about the pregnancy and to make it seem like everything was okay again more than anything. Oh, and her father's house isn't in NY--it's is California too. but still--it would be hard for them to be engaged/married and living in two different houses. Mike's not going to approve that at all i'm sure.
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2011 02:26 am Title: Chapter 53
Dealing the message won't change the outcome. Vanessa should just tell him now so that they can have the conversation, deal with it, & move on. But of course, it won't be that simple.
I'm proud of Vanessa (& I don't say that often) for not drinking. She has made a responsible, rational, grown-up decision. Awesome.
I'm feeling a little bad for Michael...what if Vanessa can never have kids again? That would be like, really awful for not only Michael, but her also. She needs to tell him now, so that he can accompany her to the doctor. She needs to let him be there for her, as her supporter & protector. I mean, its the least she could do.
Author's Response:
i agree, wholeheartedly with everything you said. whenever the truth does decide to come out, or Vanessa decides to tell him--there are obviously going to be some consequences to deal with. even if they stay together--how do you ever trust somebody like that again? BUT, love is love--and sometimes, just sometimes love prevails. lol. so we will see.
thanks for reading and always leaving great feedback!!!
Date: Jun 22, 2011 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 53
OMG.... somehting is definatly wrong with her. She needs to tell him so they can get through this together. She needs to see a doctor also, but i hope she confides in Michael first, then lets him take her to the doctor!
Update soon please... love this story
Author's Response:
Glad you're still enjoying it!!! Stay tuned for more =)
Date: Jun 22, 2011 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 53
oh, god no. oh please no. PLEASE tell me you didn't make something serious happen to her. Or is it just the aftereffects of the abortion? Either way, i'm glad they're somewhere, although the scene where she's trying to remind him that they love each other brings me to (i know you don't wanna hear it but) GLEE, in an episode where a man is looking at what he thinks is the ultrasound of his baby, when his wife is not actually pregnant. she tells him to remember that no matter what happens, "we love each other."
Like that's supposed to help any frickin body when this shit happens.
I can't stop thinking of more and more reasons why frickin DIANA ROSS woulda been better for him.
Author's Response:
Hahaha!! i actually have seen that episode of "Glee"--and i didn't even think of that LOL. it just makes her sound guilty. like "whatever crazy shit i've done--we still love each other, right?". that would send red flags up for me automatically.
and idk about the whole Diana Ross thing. you really think she would've been better for him?? hmm....idk lol.
thanks for reading dear!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2011 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 53
I am so glad that Vanessa didn’t get drunk. I was almost positive she would get herself in some sort of trouble by the end o the night. And I’m really glad she is back with Mike, exactly where she belongs!!! But still I don’t like the idea of her leaving separately from him, and not telling him what had happened!!! Also I have to comment on their love making scene lol. The way you started it, it seemed that Mike would get her pregnant again in span of 5 minutes LOL LOL. Damn that was hot!!! LOL
Hopefully everything is going to be ok with her health. Feeling pain after the abortion is expected for a while. And Vanessa really needs her friend Key right now!!! Seems she is the only person able to knock some sense into her silly little head lol. Great chapter girl! Please update soon!!! Please, please lol :) <3
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Mike getting her pregnant all over again lol. they were apart for WAY too long--it was bound to get steamy!! lol
and i agree--Vanessa and Key need to make up already. Vanessa knows Key is 100% right--she just needs to "grow up" and handle it like a real woman.
THANKS for reading!!! and stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2011 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 53
Aww things are good again and as soon as she tells him they are back to bad. You know i really love this story but the ups and downs they are having are really upsetting me. I know it cant always be rainbows and butteflys but all the saddnes breaks my heart :( cnt wait for the next part
Author's Response:
Awwww i'm so sorry. i know it sucks the way things are going at the moment. BUT, like i said before--the story is writing itself and this is the way that it goes. i hope that only things go up from here too though!!
glad you're still reading!! thanks so much.
Date: Jun 22, 2011 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 53
Such a beautiful update.
There is alot of healing to do. I know their love is strong enough.
Hope there is nothing seriously wrong with Nessa.
Oh I so love this story.
Author's Response:
Oh thank you!! so glad you enjoyed it! stay tuned love!
Date: Jun 20, 2011 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 52
OH SNAP! I hope everything works out for the best though.... and i cant wait for her and Michael to see each other, but im going to guess its going to be alot of drama concerning that abortion!
Update soon please!
Author's Response:
DRAMA is definitely the word. LOL.
THANKS for reading!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2011 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 52
Their phone conversation was sweet. You could really feel the love. Things between them won't be peachy & beautiful for a while...but Vanessa has to tell him. I agree with Key totally, I just think the both of them should have approached the situation calmer. Now Vanessa may do something stupid-er & cause more problems. I sure hope not because she already has a lot of explaining to do.
Girl, let me tell you...these last few updates have my mind in overdrive. I've been thinking of possible scenarios & outcomes of the situation..& each and every one broke my heart. I really do want them to make it through this. They both had hard, lonely lives before meeting each other, and they'll be even more miserable than before without each other. You know? They gotta work this out, but its hard to imagine a man (who so desperately loves a woman with all of his heart, and would love to have a baby with her) forgiving a woman who lied to him & got an abortion behind his back.
Anywho, thank you for making me think, girl. I do love this story no matter what happens. However, I would love for something good to happen. Vanessa & Mike both deserve something good.
Author's Response:
Awww mannn--i'm fighting for them, too honestly. but like i've said before--the story writes itself so it can go anywhere from here. she did a really messed up thing and she's screwing up even more by not coming clean about it. all in all, she needs to do so quickly and just deal w/the consequences. hopefully, Michael can understand where she's coming from and forgive her.
i'm praying for something good to happen, too! don't want this to be a depressing story to read =)